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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
arjun past was really painful
poor roshni she suffered so much pain
hate that sikender ,want to kill him right now
riya was so scared of arjun.,feeling bad for arjun
loved the update,cant wait to read more.your update are soo gud that it makes me want to read more & more,really you are a very gud writer.
do cont soon plss



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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks a lot for such a long long long update dr...
I didnt have the words to explain my feeling...
Such a awesome update...
I feel so bad for arjun wt happened to him in past...
Even roshni is his frnd to save her arjun risked his life...
But now arjun loves riya and he knws tat riya also love him so definitly he will save her...
Waiting for next update dr come soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi muskaan🤗 wish u very happy new year in this one i'm too shocked to know the reason behind arjun's coldness for riya...that bloody sikander killed roshni so brtually🤢 thank god that everything is fine btw riya n arjun...rathore's lecture on love 4 arjun was beyond the limt of appreciation...👏 riya scared 4 arjun after that incident which was visible in her actions...poor arjun...but she n arjun both are so caring n loving 4 each other... just loved each n evry word of this update by my bottom of my heart...u in true sense redefinintrue love...god bless...kep writing...n plz add me in buddy list
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am splendid...You can soon publish this as a book...So brilliantly written...

It was indeed a long update...

Loved arjun so much today...to secure ria's life he was staying away from her...
but his love was visible to sikky i guess...

I really hate this sikky...how brutally he killed roshni...knowing that she loved arjun..

Flashback makes me cry...😭😭
Ria and her pain was finally noticed by arjun...and he exclaimed he won't hurt her...

she was dreaming of him in such a horrible way...that was really disgusting!!
She couldn't even sleep on bed after the incident...arjun's heart must have been broken into thousands of pieces after knowing this...well writing...loved the you explained each and every emotion...

The best thing in the update was cake part...arjun eating it like a baby...i couldn't imagine arjun like this in your story...so i just loved it:)
Edited by prava55663 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!! wht an update.. simply awesome... nd jus one word WOW!! lovd it... it was amazing... jus loving da story... nd gr8 work... how u decribd arjun's past.. dat was so emotional.. nd jus lovng rathore,shree nd chottu how dey supportng arjun... best team in a true sense..:) nd aww.. poor riya is scared of arjun... continue soon.. eagrly wiatng for nxt part,,,,.:) nd happy new year to u too :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
So that was the reason... Roshni-she loved him nd was killed for saving him... All the ETF members got tears, while reading I too got tears..
Sikandar such a bad person..
Riya nd Arjun both favourite chocolate cake...mine too
Riya so scared after that incident-sleeps on couch instead of bed...she's afraid of bed now...
Still believes nd trusts arjun..

That was really SUPERB chap:)
I was hoping for the last precap in this chap:) still need to w8 for next chap:)
waiting egarly for the next chap:)
update it soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow its awesome 👏
the way arjun care for her im jst speechlss




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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!

That was a lovely chapter. It was just perfect. The revelation of Arjun's past, his memories of Roshni, and the Riya-Arjun emotional upheaval...it was brilliant. In this chapter you showed the extent of Arjun's love for Riya and why he behaved this way with her. BRILLIANT!

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Posted: 12 years ago
hai muskaan...sry 4 the late reply
wat to say as always this part also was too good..
nw understood why arjun s so indiffrnt towards riya...
arjuns past with roshini was heart touching..also flashback with riya was good.
arjun really loved riya...
hope that arjun will soon find riya and will also confess his love for her.
waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey ...
Brilliant update 👏
I was so keen to know who that " SHE " was ???? ... N did Arjun have any relation with her ???? ...
So she was just Roshni who was just a FREND ... 😲
After every update my hating n loathing for Sikander just keeps increasing ... n I agree with Arjun he should have just killed sikander at that spot when he arrested him ... 😡
Poor Roshni was tortured so badly by that sikander ...
Love the bond shared by the team ... 😊
N omg the flashback was really touching ... :(
Poor really actually flinched when Arjun came near her ... She's so frightened and that incident had such a deep impact on her that she don't want to sleep on that bed ... 😭
But her trust n love for Arjun is just beyond words ... 👏 😊
The DARK chocolate cake scene was terrific ... 😉
N love the way he pampered her for sometime 😉
Hope they meet soon 😊
n can't wait for Arjun acting as a prince and ready to do anything to get back HIS Riya ...😉
Edited by Gurmeet4Drashti - 12 years ago

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