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Posted: 12 years ago
really feeling sorry for arjun
so this was the reason for his rudeness towards riya😭😭😭
poor arjun has hidden so much pain in his heart
loved u included roshni in this ff
feeling bad for riya also
bcoz of arjun she was scared of sleeping on bed.
hope arjun finds riya soon and defeat that sikander
waiting eagerly to see how arjun and etf team finds riya
waiting for more ariya😊
Edited by fasiha_rocks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Poor Riya so scared then again Arjun's words were like medicine to her.
So with Arjun's past can't wait to see how they will find Riya
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
muskaan :


i'm actually feeling terrible for arjun now, after knowing how sikandar brutally murdered roshni just to seek revenge from him..it explains his behavior towards riya but doest justify it. rathore was right, arjun acted like a coward by doing what he did, he should have protected his love by being with her and not pushing her away from him. as for the flashback, riya is bound to be scared of arjun after what his beastly act towards her. the precap is same ..update soon, i'm waiting.
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Posted: 12 years ago

i lv ur storry dr ,u make me speech less but i try to write somthing
Waooo
ooo
ooo
ooo
no comparision with other,
how how how how,i miss such a awesom story,
i m fool yr ,
acctualy i m to bussy but finaly i decided to read ur story ,
when i decided to read ur storry ,
i decide first today i read only one part,
but i culd not control my self so i read next part,
again i not control my self n finaly i finish all part,
omg itsss out of word ,
u r tooo tooo tooo
tooo
tooo
brilliunt writer dr,
i lv ur writting sytle ,
its totaly different,
i read lot of ff ,ss,os
but but but
ur ff is sooo
sooo
beautiful,
when i start reading ur ff ,
first i hate arjun,how dare he behave n treated poor riya,
butttyy dr u make me speech less or giv me other shock,
then i understand why arjun behave rude ,ohhh arjun also lv riya,
n the cyco sik,that baster gonky,ohhh my poor riya,
hope arjun save her,
n one more ,i lv the way how u mixed the present n flashback,
i feel i m not readind ,i meen
i m watching one surperhit move,
n one think i realy wana to day,that i fill from heart,
ager tumhare es ff per koe serial ya movie banti to definitly double triple...infinly superhit hota,
plzzz plzzz plzzx dont dont u dare to stop writting,u r to gud in writting,
why u should not write one storry n published

one biggg sorrry dr hop u forget ,
n a biggg
biggg
thankkk for such a beautifull ff,
i realy attached with ur ff ,
i feel i m one of the part of ur storry,
n i will tried to read ur other ff or ss os ,but plz giv me some time ,as i told u that i m to bussy but now its five day hollyday,so i will try to read
n once again sorry n thankk
n plzz plzz plzz if u think or if possible then plz plz giv pm to ur all storry


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Posted: 12 years ago
Now I understand why Arjun was behaving like this with Riya. Its not easy to live with the guilt that somebody died because of u only because she loves u. I m feeling very sad for him. Because of that sick Sikander he is now afraid of love. But. Rathore is right he should not give up. He should fight for his loved ones.
Btw I love that quote. Where did u find it. It was so TRUE.
Thnks for the long update and the pm. I hardly comment on ffs. I do cmmnt on my fav ones but not regular. But u have made me cmmnt on ur every update.
Love the update dear. Pls save our Riya.soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally the truth behind Arjun's harsh behaviour towards Riya is out!
Roshni was Arjun's frnd nd she was killed coz she loved him! Awww.. Poor girl
Arrgghh.. This Sikander!! 😡 Jaldi maardo usey! >_<
And finally Arjun realised that he was wrong!! :D
Thnx to Rathod! :P
Coming to flashback scene now..
It was as usual.. Just wow!!
Arjun eating chocolate cake like a baby?! LOL!!
And the night scene.. It was beautifully written! <3
Riya was even scared to sleep on bed. :(
And just by Arjun's few words she calmed down!!
She loves him soo much! <3
Ab next update mein dono ko milwa bhi do yaar!! :(
Woh bhi humesha keliye hun!
Waiting for the next update! :)
Edited by ..Sneha.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Muskan Aapi...aur kitna intezar karayengi? Update kariye na plzzz...
Plzzz...
Plzzz...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: funkylicious

Res...

Aarey Musku dear, sudharna kisko hai😆
Chalo tum kehti ho toh pehla comment aaj mai hi karungi😉
awww if you wanna see me blush then you would have to come to Aust😳
Omg... I was partial reason for the largest Chap you made my day even if you just said it for my sake.. You made my day😳 a big bear hug...[>:D<]
--- will edit once you post the chapter's😉 am waiting..😉---
**EDITED**

aap ka hukum sar ankhon par madam😉 haha dekha mai kitni obeidient ho sakti hu😆jokes apart OHooo tune ye part sirf aur sirf Aliya k liye dedicate kiya *am a little jealous* maaf karti hu tujhe cause its was her b'day

Alright last comment maine bahut hi jaldi ki thi so I wanna add something here from the Recap from last chapter😛

I absolutely love the way Arjun reacts here and in the show its fab to see someone very conscious even when the situation is life threatning type!


i.e. I just love his presence of mind the way he said confidently, 'No use the car would be in ashes by now'👏

oye are you trying to make me think that Sikander is a bad but are you making me like him? I think so because I'm just loving Sikander's character here.. maybe its just the way you described him and those words 'Cheater, Cheater' ahahaha.. it was soo smoothening😆

What the FREAK!!! He was living with a Guilt all this time😭 awww can I just hug Arjun?😆😳 pleaseee...

I cant see him like this, ek tarah se he's an Idiot taking Sikander's words seriously...secondly he's so childish😛😉 I mean soo emotional he wanted to save Riya...

Hey Woaahh wait a minute so Arjun's friend Roshni isn't Sameer's sister? or was she Sameer's sister but Arjun didn't know! Gawd you have officially confused me now😆

Shree, Chotu & Rathore had their eyes welled up awww... sab ko hug dena padega lagta hai😛


The whole flashback of Roshni was emotional yaar...

The quote you used in your second post omg can I use it? can I have the permission to use it please😳 *makes puppy face*

Hayeee Arjun Rawte and Dark Chocolate cake umm yummmy I could smell the cake baking in my oven when you explained him eating it.. yummyy yaar kya karti ho tum Musku ufff😆

mere toh muh mai pani aagaya😉

Okay no comments on the flashback bedroom scene it was emotional scene sach mai...😭 felt sad for both...

----Pheww am Done Now complaint time😆

I'm going to borrow Sikanders lines for a second..

*Cheater Cheater Cheater***

You gave us the same Precap from last update! huh huh m sad😔

moreover this update was seriously short yaar... you split in 2 posts it looks longer but they are short updates as per me.!!

Muskuuu jaldi update karo na I'm waiting eagerly... for a long update...😳

P.S Thanks for revealing Arjun's past, and hey I don't know what jaddu you have but I can visualise all your wordings happening feels like I'm watching some movie! hehe😆

Alright m done...Reply and update soon Musku🤗


shru...you did a chalaaki with me😭😭...you reserved the first post and said you are commenting first...but then you edited it so late!😭😭!!! pata wait karte karte mera weight loose ho gaya!😲😲aahhh you!! well koi ni...i lovveeeddd your reply...aww you can surely use the quote dear..as i too read it somewhere, hehe...me too liked it alot...😃😃

and as of your confusion...roshni is not related to rathore..she was a small town girl who lived near arjun's house and was frnds with him. nothing much...😃😃

and hey...i updated nearly 10 pages of a word document in last post...😲😲

you know me kitna wait karti hu sab ke replies ka?? aww i feelll so good reading them alll!!!! i love alll of them...🤗

one more thing...mujhe logon ko lalchane me bahut maza aata hai..isliye chocolate cake wala scene diya tha😉😉 thanks alot shruuu...⭐️
Edited by MastiMuskaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Omg what an update madam ji...
chumneshwari...in true terence style hehe..
gud to knw u r fine..
thank u for d double dose of updates..
wait worthy!!
happy new year to u too dear...
me crying as i visualising d scene what happen to arjun in d past...
arjun fear his obvious...
but rathod wrds r really soothing!.
shreetu too join in d mission to find riya...
fb was cute n sweet n cake mujhe bi khana h mumma...!!!!!!!!
riya fear in dream really scaring...
arjun dnt want to hurt riya bt did it...!!!!!
d lines by unknown was awesum...
arjun pain imagination no words...!!!
a bade wala hug fr d superb update...
tum aise hi update krte rehna hum bi long coments krte rhenge hehe..
kahin to kuch choot rha h yup got in true arjun style...
roshni sacrifice...hats off!!!
yr siki ko mat chodna hate him to d core..!!
jaldi se update krna ab samjhi ya samjhau lol...!!
Ariya ko jaldi milvana...
well is update ko padhkar ek aur sng dedication hehe hope u mind it...
sawan beeton jaye piharwa
sawan beeton jaye...
by kk...
loved d sng!!
dnt knw match wid d situation or nt bt i dedicate hehe..
u tc..!!
n
ya do update
very
very
soon..!
grt..
claps!!


*chummeshwari catched*😉😉

thanks aloottt...aww i loved it yaar...each word was inspiring for me...thanks...

a bada wala hug to you too🤗
aap logon ke long comments ke wajah sehi to ye ff abhi chalu hai ni to mai kabka off kar deti...thanks alottt...hey never heard that song...but will hear it and if it suits...will use it...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutisweety

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so much painful past was arjuns and roshnis 😭,how can sikki do like this😡

arjun scared,and affired,rathod conversation was too gud,it was so heart touching,rathod was
comferting arjun,so sweet of him...
the ETF team is with arjun so sweet of them

bechari riya ko bath bi karne nahi diya arjun ne😆

riya is so scared after that incedent that she is sleeping on couch...
riyas confidence i like she still belive in him...

hope riya will be safe,she dosnt suffer as roshni,
arjun will definatly save her,waiting for that day

muskaan kill sikki soon,in hands of arjun only ...
loved ur update👏
continue soon




thanks dear...and yes sik ko jaldi hi maar dungi...and arjun ke hi hatho...dekh lena...aur riya bhi mil jayegi...jaldi pata chalega...kaise milenge ariya...😃


thanks alot👏👏

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