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Shru

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Muskuuu...🤗

OMG what a wonderful update... honestly even though it looked long it felt like a small one😆

I know I'm selfish but seriously I didnt want it to end there...😉

Loving Arjun in this grey shade hayeee😳

Him being Rough and tough is giving me good vibes... I can't stop reading your teaser and Chapter one😆

Well I'm eager to know the main reason of Arjun keeping Riya out of his life.. well one is definitely because she is his weakness and also coz of his enemies but these somewhere dont connect I mean there is something missing...

Can't wait for the drama (flashback) to unfold... moreover I just cant wait what happens next in (PRESENT) time I mean how the ETF solves the case is what I mainly want to see...

I'm super duper excited babes!!!

PS: I can understand everyone calling you Muski.. bt I'm totally different isliye I call you Musku😆

Update soon

-Shru

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Oh God...!!! I m just left speachless after reading this... i hope to see the good Arjun soon... i hope he gets riya sooon...!!!!

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

A lovely second chapter. The technique of alternating between Arjun's remorse and his past bad behaviour towards Riya was very good. It established the grey shades of his character very well:)

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

That was really an amazing update:)
Riya the butterfly as well as the weak point of arjun...
But arjun was too cruel..riya buying fruits for his breakfast also caring a lot...that was really nyc... waiting for more update

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jankisoni86

@jankisoni86

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

OMG... its an amazing concept... I loved it... Hope Riya is fine...
Riya was drugeed...?
So sad...
Arjun has done an irreversible damage to riya...

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MastiMuskaan

@MastiMuskaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: tani23
Hey amazing part Muskaan

i Liked d way u r writing it

i m liking d v/s of ria... her level of patience is amazing
i mean , he spoke rudely, not letting her call him by his name, ...n still she hope dat 1 day he will reciprocate his love...

Loved her for d patience and courage

I liked d part wen Arjun realized her importance... his realization dat she went outside to bring fruits for him n probably got kidnapped ...

I m glad he didnt raped her..thanks for dat

U r writing beautifully

Will wait for more ...👍🏼

aww thanks alot dear...i am so happy to know that you are happy reading my story...😃

and i will surely try to improve more...😳

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MastiMuskaan

@MastiMuskaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: priya00147
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unres it dear...quicklyyy😉

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MastiMuskaan

@MastiMuskaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: Leki
Hw culd he??? hw cn he b so brutal??? omg my head s spinning reading this chapter... i jus hate him in this part... oh no i cnt do dat... he s genuinely worried for her also... Poor Riya i'm feeling so bad fro her... aftr all dese still she luvs him hw cn she??? Precap s scary...

hehehe...me too..i try to hate him while writing but just couldnt!😉 thanks alot...and riya's love is selfless...so she is able to love him still, when he is not...😳

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MastiMuskaan

@MastiMuskaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: ..Sneha..
Awesome update yaar!
He cares for her but still he behaved so rudely with her! :(
Btw..Superb concept!
I loved it!!
Update the next part soon :)

awww thanks alot ya...😳

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MastiMuskaan

@MastiMuskaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: kunchu
superb update yaar...
it was as if seeing live... Arjun's rage.. Riya's helplessness...
waiting for more updates.. and pls do continues..

thanks dear...😃