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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
read all 3 chapters in one go, very interesting you have reversed the characters, arnav belive in DM and khushi does not
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rockingchamp


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: laksh65

read all 3 chapters in one go, very interesting you have reversed the characters, arnav belive in DM and khushi does not

Thanks for liking my work :) <<33
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Puddleduck

Thanks alot ya, those english subs were of great help 😊

Loved this part too, felt like reading a written update of a serial 😉

Eagerly waiting for the next one 😆

(I'm unable to PM you😭)

Hey thanks a lot for lovely comments :) I hope I didn't dissapoint you ... I'm trying to make it as realistic to IPKKND i mean the flow that they have gone with regarding their relationship :) offcourse ive made khushi a bit too rude but slowly and gradually arnav will change her <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey dear check out ur scrap...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
wow its a nice story
continue soon
n do pm me plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sup folks? Im back with another update but i wanted to part this chapter into two and here i am with part (A) Hope you's like it :)) before that i wanna thank all the lovely comments that i got from you all and it means so much to me <333 thanks a lot :)))))
here goes the chapter, hope u like it and any feedback is more than welcomed ;)

"I'll drop you home"

NO WAY YAAR WHO KNOWS KI YE KAB FIR SE CHILLANE LAG JAYE PAGAL LADKI (no way man, who knows if she starts screaming again like a mad lady)

"No need I'll be fine I wanna walk home"

"Listen Mister nobody refuses my offer and ur no different, I'm not taking a no just get into my car"

LO WAPAS AA GAYI LAAD GOVERNESS KE ROOP MEIN GRRR CHUP CHAP BEITH JA ISSE PEHLE YE PHIR SE JHAGADNE LAG JAYE (wo, again shes back into the laad governess mode, just sit in her car before she starts fighting again...)

"Okay"

Arnav sat in the car half heartedly; he tied his seat belt and closed his eyes. He was trying to avoid Khushi; her harsh words were still playing again and again in his mind, he did forgive her but somewhere inside he was really really hurt by her as nobody has ever been this rude to him before neither has he spoken ill about anyone in his entire life...

Khushi pulled the breaks and parked the car on Arnav's driveway.

"Err ... Arnav tumhara ghar aa gaya"

Arnav got out of the car and said a quick thanks before he left.

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Next day

"NK I was thinking to go and watch Race 2 at theatres tonight what say?" La askes excitedly over the phone

"Mmm Sorry La I wanted to spend some time with Arnav today, you know na since he came I dint get a chance to spend some time"

"Its okay yaar no worries u have fun I'll just go with Khushi"

"Thanks La and I Love you sweat heart"

"Love you too" La said with a huge brightening smile.

NK rang the door bell of Arnav's house.

"Papa can you please open the door?" Arnav yelled

"Are beta tum kyun nahi khol dete darwaaza?" His dad said while coming down the stairs.(Son, why dont you open it yourself?")

"Dad please open the door na"

"Accha accha theek hai no need to scream" (fine no need to scream)

"Thanks"

Mr Manohar Lal opened the door.

"hello Dad" saying that he hugged him. Even though he wasn't his real dad he always treated him just like Arnav and always wanted to NK to call him Dad.

"Arre wah aj chote janab ke darshan itni subah subah" he said coming out of the hug.

(How come ur here so early in the morning?")

"I was missing you and Arnav so wanted to spend my day with you guys"; "Waise where is he at the moment?"

Dad: Arre he's in the kitchen cooking breakfast... bade acche time pe aaye ho [laughs*]

NK: I din know ki Arnav cooks ... [walks into the kitchen and looks at Arnav busy looking onto his ipad for cooking instructions. He smiles looking at him like that "HE LOOKS SO ADORABLE :p MERA BADA BHAI :p" Wow Nannav ur cooking :) Seems like Im going to have lots of fun ***

Arnav: Hey morning [greeted with a smile] I hope these pancakes turn alright ..

NK: Dont worry yaar ASR bana raha hai to they'll be out of this world; By the way how come ur cooking and never ever have i heard that you cook [Manohar comes and interrupts NK's questionnare]

Manohar: Wo ye iski saza hai

NK: [puzzled] saza?

Manohar: han saza... kyun ki kal raat ye ghar der se aaya tha or agar hum dono mein se koi bhi ghar late aye to use ghar ke kaam like cooking and cleaning mein se ek cheez karni padti hai...

NK: oohhh sahi hai... but Nannav oops sorry Arnav mere bhai tu to kal time se chala gaya tha to fir late kaise ho gaya...

Arnav: [thinking what to say as his dad and Nk were giving him confused looks] Wo actually you know Nikhil I saw him on my way back and we started chatting that's why i got late...

[he said without looking into NKs eyes pretending to concentrate on the recipie from net... Little did Nk know that his brother was lying as whenever he lies he doesn't look into the eyes... only he knew about this habbit of Arnav ... he wanted to know what had happened but stopped as he thought that Dad will worry for no reason. He changed the topic with the business deal and after 30 minutes Arnav's break fast was ready and they all ate with pleasure...

NK: You know what tu na roz thoda late aaya kar so that we can have such yummy food ... seriously man if i tell anyone that u cook and that too this great media will litterally report it on every newspaper and channel LOL

Arnav : haha thanks for the compliment but noo ur not telling anyone about this and I mean it!!

NK: Chillax bro I was kiddin, Btw whats ur plan for the day?

Arnav: Not much as I thought I'll just stay home and spend some time working on the upcoming project.

NK: [Kuch to gadbad hai ... arnav staying at home and that too on the weekends and on top of that working ... I dont think i should push it any further by asking questions but I need to spend some time with him in order to know what the problem is...] hey I was wondering if u could come wif me i need to buy new furniture... And i need ur help

Arnav: Errr do we have to do it this weekend only..? I mean can't we push it until next weekend? I really wanna stay home

NK: Kya yaar chal na nakhre kyun maar raha hai??

MAnohar: Arnav it's okay you don't need to do any more chores as u provided me such wonderful breakfast therefore go and accompany NK [little did he know that there was something wrong with his son, in order to change his mood he let him go regardless of his punishment]

Arnav: Okay dad I'll go [He didnt wanna deny as they would have got suspicious and he didnt want to push the matter any further..]

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"Khushi whats this yaar? I came here to spend some time with you and ur all busy with your stupid laptop?" Lavanya complained

"Listen works come first and then the rest... stop eating my head and lemme finish it quick" Khushi retorted back

"Or kitna time yaar u've been working since an hour and a half already... grr why do u work soo muchh?? im getting bored..."

"Thats not my problem" khushi replied as if she didnt give a care in the world. That was it for Lavanya and she quickly grabbed the laptop off khushi and kept it away and litteraly dragged her out of her house... Woo if it was anyone else Khushi would have killed that person but since it was Lavanya all she could do was pass deadly glares which Lavanya just ignored...

"What the hell La? What was that.. I was in the process of an important mail and you just shut the fricking laptop in the mid way... Whats the hell is wrong with you???" She said litteraly screaming

"Mm sorry but if I hadn't done that u wouldnt have come with me... anyways cmon yar lets go and have a look around the mall as i wanna buy some new clothes...

THEY HEADED TOWARDS THE SHALIMAR MALL FOR SHOPPING

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"I think this Bed will suit your bedroom, What do you think?" Arnav suggested the black designer leather bed.

"Yupp I like it". [saying that he went and made the payment for it meanwhile Arnav's phone started ringing. Looking at the ID Arnav started freaking out with sweat all over his forehead...]

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that was it for part A :)) lol I left it at the Cliff Hanger hahaha LOL any guesses whose that phone call was???? try and reply ... any feedback positive/negative is more than welcomed :))))))) add me to ur buddy list for PMs :)))

I have noticed someone has copied my work and didnt referenced me it's a warning and i mean it that if i find it happening again i will spam ur work and remove u from my list !!! im sorry but its my concept and hard work which i really dont want people to copy and put it under their name!!!!!


anyways i hope u like this Update... and the part B will be updated around next week or soo not sure lets see how i go with my uni work as well...


love yous all <333333333333

Deepika


Edited by dkapi1 - 12 years ago
rockingchamp thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting dear ...good to see u after a long time...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
thanks 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Nice update loved it
Thanks for pm me

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