Chasing Dreams (1) Chp 10 Pg132, Thd 2 link pg 144

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samia19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

awesome , waiting to read more

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Reem

@TRND86

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

I loved this chapter. It gave us more of an insight into the world of A & K. I like how Payal has taken Khushi under her wing & kind of getting her accustomed to the new city; be it by taking her shopping or introducing her to a new cuisine. I know they are friends but it is still very sweet of her to do that. You are showing a strong bond between them & it takes me back to the prologue. Why was Payal not with Khushi at her time of need? Is there going to be a fall out? or is Khushi not going to disclose her secret to anyone? I am getting way ahead of the story now but can't stop thinking.

I loved the Nani - Arnav scene. My favorite line was : " How would you feel if I barged into one of your meetings with a Pooja ki thaal."

I could see that happening with Anjali in the show.

So Arnav, Akash & Anjali are siblings & are living with their Nani. What happened to the parents? Is Arnav's marriage phobia related to his parent's marriage? I am looking forward to see how you address that particular issue.

It was a cute dedication for Meera 😃. She deserved the sweet words for giving us such fabulous stories.

Alas A & K meet!! I am usually very excited for this part but I am not sure if I should be happy yet. Your prologue has me scared. I think I should finish off here. Thanks for the fantastic update. Looking forward to more! 👍🏼

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Reem

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: Naach_Basanti

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You are going to keep us guessing, aren't you? It was a clever way of putting it in. I will be forever looking for clues now in your updates! 😉

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anisharoy1

@anisharoy1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

not fair...
now u have to update early...
anyway nice part..
i like payal and akash. ...

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phillips_2909

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Posted: 12 years ago

#255

fablous ff
n nice update
buddy me pm not wanting to miss this so pm me plz
thank u

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tanvi_arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#256

i loved ur story... plz update soon... cant wait to knw wat will happen wen dey met...

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Amrita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#257

Awesome...LOvely update...at last they meet...

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Aanchal_

@Aanchal_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#258

👏 Wow... U r writing Amazing Fiction

So, Akash is Arnav's brother grt... 😊

well Poor Khushi Her Devi maiya never supports her when it comes to Arnav singh Raizada

She always Fall in front of him n ASR's Hands are always ready to hold her from her waist... ❤️

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oceanssea

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Posted: 12 years ago

#259

You are writing a story too NBji!Wow.
Am already looking forward to how the story will proceed.
And how did Khushi got pregnant?OK,will wait to see
what happens in the coming updates.

Am sending a buddy request.😊