Chasing Dreams (1) Chp 10 Pg132, Thd 2 link pg 144

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Aha! The man of the moment.

And boy is he quick on the wit.

There is an air of authority that blazes through this Arnav and I think you've nailed portrayal of the difference in their ages and consequently their experiences.

Interesting first meeting. Impactful without high drama

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Smriti

@serialjunkie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

its a hit NB, its a hit

i am sucker for young woman older man deal. what can i say, it just seems men become real men in their 30s. #VoiceOfExperience

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oceanssea

@oceanssea

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Arnav laughed at their very first meeting!..Great.
They found each other attractive instantly !...Great.

Fabulous update.😊
Loving this story.

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saavan_lover

@saavan_lover

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#274

LOL a very hliarious first meeting! Clumsy Khushi lol

Looking foward to the next update :)

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CravingKhana

@CravingKhana

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

oiye ma trip fall catch tick

but this one had a lot more..."elevated" humor...

funny thing is I like how the La/Arnav is being played out...so much more dignified...for both...and appropriate for their charactor

Edited by CravingKhana - 12 years ago

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-SAM1445-

@-SAM1445-

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

hello NB ji!!!!
Awesome first meeting,ahhh...
Loved both their's reactions but bechari khushi messed up...
Plz do continue...
N i love the fact that u give frequent updates...thank u...

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Arathy-V

@Arathy-V

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#277

First meeting was a definite HIT from my side..ASR here seems more like Arnav and less of ASR like in most of the ffs here( not that i dont like them) but its nice to see a grey ASR. Each time i complete reading an update of this, i some how have the 1st chapter in my mind. I feel sorry for khushi even though it is not revealed what happened in these 15 months that led her to an abortion.

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DISHA

@shinaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#278

Classic rabba ve moment and classic flirty asr.oh i miss this.and that scar.nbji what are you doing.lovely chapter.

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vgedin

@vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#279

Definitely not a miss. A hit, yes, a hit - the first meeting. She made Arnav laugh, how could that possibly be a miss ?

I can totally imagine Khushi being an absolute klutz there. Damn those heels, ask me I'm only 5 ft tall.

And his favorite are The Eagles ? Just when I thought I couldn't possibly love Arnav more than I already do. Aaah, I hope he was listening to Witchy Woman, would be apt naa ?