Lost in Your Eyes Thread 2 (Arshi SS)

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khushiiXOXO

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Omg! Just wat d doc prescribed- a sweet lovey dovey story for d romantic me ❤️ it was like as if u took d dreams of millions of us Arshi fans n put it in words. .. (no offence to Mrs P.S.) gawd,if only u had been d writer of THEIR destinies !! It was FANtasy coming live in words .. if only. ...
Lovely idea 👏
Oh, I can't stop imaging it again

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Ayesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Aww nice story
I loved it
U are an amazing writer dear
Awesome story

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pmpm1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Read the whole story today. It was so beautiful! The way you described their pain in the beginning was very palpable. Then the way they fell in love and realised it was so sweet.

It was a very well told story where you added other emotions, like sadness for Khushi's mother, very effectively to stitch it all together in one single story, without any rambling or exaggeration.

I have become a fan of your writing after I read this. Now I have to read your other works as well.

Edited by pmpm1 - 12 years ago

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GodhuliLogon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

its still my Best story of urs .. 😳

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Aparamegha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Jenny,

Read this story again and fell in love with your writing once again..

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nrthya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#226

hey...

this story was outstanding,, totally different from what i read till now..👏

I have no words to explain..⭐️⭐️

too good!!!👏👏

loved every part..👏👏

I wish so many things to be true.. like season 2...❤️they both getting offers to work with SK!!!❤️

lovely...lovely and simply amazing...⭐️

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Anupama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Il read it again in a few weeks! ❤️
ALS I have already.twice until now =)

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khushiiXOXO

@khushiiXOXO

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Posted: 12 years ago

#228

reread it ...*sigh* if only...

love this story...it's a beautiful!

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@.Boss.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#229

Aww this was such an adorable story! I just LOVED it! You are an amazing writer!

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Srija Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#230

Wow Jenny this story was just pure magic😊 Loved it Loved it Loved it Bas!😆

So despite Barun neing married and Sanaya being in a very committed relationship somewhere deep in our hearts we fans did secretly nurse a wish of seeing this awesome couple together for real, I know I did😳 and though it was wrong at so many levels to even wish that yet you gave us our wish beautifully wrapped in this story. Must say u r a fantastic writer and if I am not wrong a very devoted SK fan as well(or well u may just be better than the best with ur writing expertise for making me believe so😆). Love ur stories dear, keep them coming😃

Edited by srija.singh04 - 12 years ago