Roots Of Rhythm--OS| Teri Bindiya Re Pg18 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Will edit post-dinner, when my eyes shine with love for ASR more than my love for bhindi :D

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Oh, why must you write so well ? This was nothing short of poetry in prose.

I could totally picture Arnav and Khushi, enjoying their morning ritual, drenched in love and adoration and the feeling of being blessed. That husbandly pride he feels looking at her adorn herself as his wife - the heart smiles and cries a happy tear :)

There was Arnav's husky voice, with his quintessential "Tum thik ho?" Haye !

My favorite bit, however, was :

"Tumhe"

"Kyon"

"I love you"

And then I died.


That song you picked added this old world charm and innocence to it; love in its most pristine form. Rafi saab ki aawaaz kaanon me goonj rahi thi :)

The whole scene was so innately Indian, so homely - the saree, the sindoor, the kajal, the bangles - like she was the goddess and he the devotee. Lovely. I sometimes wonder if this could ever happen in reality ? The whole thing was more sensual and erotic and intimate than anything I can imagine would have happened on their "particularly amorous" night :)

Khushi's Arnavji humming Teri Bindiya Re would be a sight to watch. I for one would be giddy with joy.

Seriously, my mom who insists I should behave more "lady-like" should see me right now. She will be shocked to the bone - seeing her daughter blush like this, imagining things about married life. But when it comes to Arnavji, ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res! :D

Ah! How I've missed this. Promise to edit before I sleep tonight! :)

*edit*

The last thought in my mind is that I am fida on that Saree! Where can I get one?! And the OS Rae.. From the tiniest details you have covered everything so beautifully. Its like your words gave life not just to the emotions and the actions played out but transferred them onto even the inanimate objects! :) I love this side of Arnav, the caring concerned and romantic. And more so, I love the way you write him. Khushi is indeed blessed. But I am sure she deserves no less! :)

I feel happy to have had a peek into these small moments the writers of the show could never do justice to the way you have with this OS! :) Beautiful work! :)

P.S. I'm sorry for the Res and the late edit ;)




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Posted: 12 years ago
Rae - I know you dislike res but I'll surely edit it :)


Beautiful!

Love that love they share! You know there's that warm, fuzzy feeling reading this..


Their immense love, their understanding, their concern for each other and even their silence soulful looks,it's just so touching and soothing!

Each action of their's radiates the spectrum of love..Though it's to supposed to be a music based one, I just cant but wonder is the song so perfect for the story or is the story so beautifully written that the song aptly fits for it...The amalgam of both is just beautiful!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww so beautiful
This Bengali touch
I loved it .,,.and I love the song ...
Well done Rae :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Oh god after this i just feel like gettin married... wel if marriage is such bliss 😛

But tht was so dreamyyy...a perfect morning after which has left us waiting forever in d serial...


every moment u described... i found solace of being together...just tht peace tht someone loves u so much.. gratitude tht u found love so pure n true...tht "i love u" tht u dont get tired after listenin n sayin million times...

n d song!! perfect... i love tht stanga from d song... old world beauty of lyrics.. d nuances of finding romance in a "bindi"...wow!!!!!
i am gonna sing it atleast for a week now 😛

loved every bit of it ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
that OS was beyond cute
had a big smile reading it
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm late :(
Damn you physics! Another reason to hate that subject :/

Lovely OS Rae. I am still dreaming. Hayye <3
Arnav khushi are so adorable. Love them!
Loved khushi's saree. So pretty.

I loved the way you described khushi's attire, perfectly worded. And I love the way your khushi blushes, I can totally imagine her going red & looking all shy & embarrassed.

Arnav <3 He is so romantic. One look & you are dead. I loved the way he helped her & the way he held her. Arnav & romance, that's what I wanted to read before the world ends 😆

Brilliant work Rae!

And I love that song :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
The s0ng and the m0vie itself being 0ne 0f my pers0nal fav0urites, this, f0r me, is dreamy, p0etic and beautiful bey0nd w0rds. Just the way y0u want t0 start y0ur day, everyday.
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Posted: 12 years ago

The chapter was really poetic and adorable, I posted my comment on your blog too but forgot to leave my username for IF !!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely OS and Beautiful description of their morning ritual ...and Arnavs concern is always a delight ...thanks for the pm 😊

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