Roots Of Rhythm--OS| Teri Bindiya Re Pg18

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shai95

@shai95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

hey ! Sona , Rae , when can we expect an update ? Waiting desperately for a new OS . Plz , atleast one of u should update now ! Its been a while since u guys wrote a new one . Can't wait more !!!

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ayushma

@aycma98

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

will comment after the finals! sorry.

res*

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music has such a huge effect on us, it change a person's life forever. i am glad with your concept, and would love to read more of these OS. they were beautiful... both of them! when one was about longing, the other was about leaving... two sides of the coin.

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Fatemah

@KC294

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

It was sooo beautifully written... The emotions was... wow,... Brilliant OS

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fatima2603

@fatima2603

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Just caught up with the pm sent for this now...as i am on my phone i can't get on angelteens update, but Will comment when i am on the laptop.

Misty the first entry you wrote was just beautiful...the 1 yr wait and the relationship that blossomed between Arhi was just beautiful to read.

Love this idea...looking forward to reading more.

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Tick tock tick tock goes the time !

Why havent I got a new OS yet, my poor eyes are hungry !!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Disclaimer - Characters belong to 4Lions Productions but the story, dialogues and characters you dont recognize as theirs are mine or otherwise separate disclaimers shall be provided as and when needed. Please respect this as someone else's creation and dont plagiarize. The banner picture has been sourced from the internet but the editing is done by me.

Teri bindiya re

She knew he was watching her, it was what he had done every morning since their marriage. They were in the earlier days, covert glances always fearful of being caught by her but now...now he did so unabashedly, not hiding that adoring look on his face, his lips curved into an easy smile, his eyes sparkling with love...for her and Khushi felt herself blushing the shade she did every time her husband of a year looked at her the way he was right now as she ran her fingers through her damp hair, untangling the strands as they stuck to each other, her wavy hair mane sticking to the back of her white blouse with the deep red single line of border - his favourite sari adorning her - white with red teasingly splashed in, the pallu a crimson red with a black border with golden-copper thread work. The back line plunging yet modest - the entire line dotted with tiny golden-copper balls which shimmered as they caught the rays of the sun streaming in their room through the gaps in the curtains he had drawn last night before...

She shook herself of those sinfully delicious images and feelings which accompanied every thought of last night and removed her fingers from her hair, deciding that they were untangled enough to now naturally dry, her hand now reaching for the kajal tube which she used to line her honey golden eyes, fixing them on his own as he took in her daily routine like the most diligent student of art...the object of appreciation being her.

"Kya dekh rahen hain?"

EDITED BLOG LINK in accordance with the new IF rules.
Please dont share the blog link anywhere or with anyone.

You can comment here or on the blog (please mention your username) or at both places. Dont Res AT ALL.

Edited by AngelTeen - 12 years ago

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

RES

This piece is more poetry than prose, and I haven't said this before, have I? Every line, the way her saree is described, and I am a sucker for details, hence, the picture it painted, the bangles, the earrings, the sindoor, the beautiful man jumping off the bed, with messy hair [the picture of Arnav in my mind] painted a vivid, very engaging image.

And then, that hug from behind. Sigh! I was smiling forlornly here. The whole scene, the brimming, spilling love shown here, reminds me of the show, the good old days. And more importantly the intimacy between a married couple, especially one, so much in love. Also, every glance, touch, gesture of Arnav here, brought out a very beautiful thing according to me, he cherishes her, every second spent with her.

And the song was perfect, truly.

Edited by mistyrains - 12 years ago

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

RES

*this feels heaven*
^^ Ya ! A res on the page of the OS does really feel good :P

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The OS !

Dreamy ! Well ya i do feel like im floating in air after reading that !
Btw, where you really trying to write a prose ? It was pretty poetic I feel !

The whole process of Khushi getting ready for the day, and I've so badly wanted a scene like this in the show, but you fulfilled it now ! I loved the banner ! It really was lovely, I have no grudges against IF, but it somehow looks prettier on the blog !

And the beginning ! Ahh !The way you described Arnav's eyes taking her in, and the fact that she knew exactly what he was thinking with every movement of hers, and they are so in love, and believe me with every passing wave of love between them, they make you fall head over heels again !

The part where hge kisses her, telling her that he doesnt need to be paid any fees , was just BEAUTIFUL ! I absolutely loved the part where Arnav comes and hugs her from behind ! And the sindoor daaani Im sure Im gonna dream about it for long... I seriously cant tell you anything about tthat part, cause that part exudes love from every letter of it <3 And for Khushi and Arnav, I guess that ritual is somewhat totally divine I feel

Loved the OS Rae !
And thanks for "FINALLY" posting one😉

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^^See told ya, Im feel like Im floating in air

PS: I love the song, and thanks for writing one on this
PPS: I loved Khushi's saree tooo😃
PPPS: If Ive forgotten to add something, I'll edit again

Edited by -Shobhu21- - 12 years ago

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

It feels surreal how even a shy gaze turned into unabashedly adoring ones make me blush! That was B-E-A-U-T-Y-F-U-L. Rae! Bas!

Edited by -Dee- - 12 years ago

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#120

R

And this time I will read and edit with a fully functioning brain 😃

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In my head the Arnav and Khushi of this story had an arranged marriage. I don't know why but that is what I feel.

The love that you have portrayed between them is so adorable, makes one wish that everyone should experience such a sweet, caring kind of a love.

Of course Arnav likes the sindoor bindiya the most. It marks her as his and not in a territorial way but in a she-is-mine-and-I-am-lucky kind of a way.

And of course she likes to dress up for him in his favorite sarees.

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago

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