Roots Of Rhythm--OS| Teri Bindiya Re Pg18 - Page 14

That was perfectly written.

That was so romantic ... Loved it ...

This was heaven Rae...So peaceful and blissfull...
Reading this story has left me wondering if being in LOVE feels really this blissful...
I just loved the serenity of their love...
While reading this story i just did not want it to finish..

Wow !!!! This was how i always wanted my Arshi in the story...Barun and Sanaya would have been wonderful in this scene...
But alas! everything is going to be only a dream now...
The way you described Arnav's love for her , her shyness ,her beauty. everything was poetic...
The best part was Arnav humming the song...it just left a peaceful feeling in my heart..
I really think i have loved Arshi and Sarun too much to ever think of anything else..

Rae i really really want to read more of this...
I seriously feel ashamed that i cant even write a proper comment to praise this beautiful piece of work...

Love you Rae...
Take care..

aha ! Finally someone updated ! I was going crazy here waiting for u 2 to update . And when i come back home after playing , what do i see , a message , that too from'angelrains' and i go , yipeee !!!
Thanks rae , for the update .
Now for the update . I obviously loved it . I love the song 'teri bindiya' . Its very sweet and touching and Amitabh and Jaya , one of my favourite couples add the much needed charm to the song . When u guys described the idea , i was actually wondering if u would ever use old songs ? Of 60s , 70s , 80s , the songs were just perfect and so mesmerising . I am glad u used this song . I am so happy . Hope u write more on some really beautiful old songs .
The description of the saree was so accurate and amazing that i was about to comment that i want it or would have asked if anyone on this forum was a designer who could atleast paint a rough picture of the saree that u described , but then at the end i saw the photograph of the saree and my mind relaxed and i got the actual picture . So thanks for the picture too .
"... before he was down on his knees and hugging her from behind ...'' after reading just till here , i was like , she is standing then why is he bending on his knees to hug her , then i thought eeps is she pregnant ? Will he turn her around and talk to the baby ? I know my mind is really imagining things now adays , can't help it :) Then when i read further that she was sitting on the stool , i was like so yeah Shai , u are the biggest idiot of this world . Lol
"... the morning began with concern again…oh what had she done to deserve this beautiful man, asked Khushi to herself once again .'' This is the first time ever that it is described that khushi is lucky to have a husband like arnav . Otherwise its always about how much arnav is lucky to have khushi in his life . So thanks for describing khushi's story too .
"...I am all bigdo-ed now!" hahaha bigdo-ed . One more hinglish word is added to my vocab . :)
I love to see morning romance , its so fresh and cute . I Wish the CVs gave us some scenes of morning mischief on arshi too .
Loved the OS rae ! Keep writing !

Sona its ur chance now . Learn something from rae . Waiting for us OS now .
Gosh !!! I just realised the comment has become quite long .
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P.S. I love Mohammed Rafi and Lata Mangeshkar , hope u use some more songs of them .

wow.
that was almost lyrical.
the essence of new love... captured perfectly.👏
thank you for the update!

Goodness ! I just realised after posting , my comment was almost the length of ur OS . I know i'm awesome . Oh no ! This makes u awesome , i was so engrossed in ur OS that i couldn't stop typing .
Do i get a treat for this ?

oh ! I see Sona is here too . So let me ask . Sona , when can we expet an OS from u ? I have become a fan of ur writing just by reading one OS of yours . So it automatically makes me crave for more .
Hope to see an update from u soon ...

Hey ...

Aw! Loved it! That was an amazingly sweet OS! Thank you for the OS and PM! :)