Roots Of Rhythm--OS| Teri Bindiya Re Pg18

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snoopy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Awesome OS was real beautiful loved it

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newmoon2011

@newmoon2011

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Beautiful os
Thanks for the pm

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claireDD

@claireDD

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

it was more like a dreamy romantic movie playing before my eyes...
i cant begin to tell you how much i loved it...
and the song added the spice..
you're awesome rae !!!

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Gals

@Cute_Gal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

dat was beautiful,
loved it..
thanxx for d pm.

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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

the perfection with which our imagination plays out this scene the credit goes entirely to your words...i would have loved to have such a scene in ipkknd for once but you gave me this to project on that...lovely simple and exceptionally beautifully...sigh...wish dreams come true and everyone have moments like this for real too..

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Reem

@TRND86

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

That was so romantic!! It made me all giddy inside. You have a beautiful way with words Rae. You not only get the reader emotionally attached to your story but also capture moments that stay with us & makes us smile later. Here you just made a simple task of getting ready so romantic. I am in love with your Arnav ?. Can I have him? The song was so right for this OS. I think I fell in love with this song more while reading your story. Now I feel like humming this song :D

and you did make me smile after making me cry after the last OS so thanks for that as well! 😊

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

I gotta check this one out soon :)

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

OMG Rae it is soo beautiful. I feel proud that I'm ur buddy & I'm able 2 read ur stories. The more I read this ROR the more I'm falling in love with it but I still miss all ur other FF.

I love the morning romance between Arnav & Khushi. They were adorable & the Bindiya on her maang tells the story that her body & soul only belongs to this guy beside her.

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Rae that was just beautiful !!!!!!!! I'm speechless !!!
I just feel like reading it again and again !!!!
The love, is just described in such a beautiful way !!!!
The way you described him looking at her, the saree( it's beautiful), the way he comes, her question and his answer !!!
Sigh!!! The teasing was so cute !!! He has bigadofied her !!!!

The lines were poetry !!!!! I had this warm feeling inside all the time after reading this !!!!!
Brilliant work !!! ⭐️
Thnx for the pm !!