Roots Of Rhythm--OS| Teri Bindiya Re Pg18 - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful piece of writing by both of you😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful and touching...
the author's note was touching and meaningful
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rae and Sona...you people have created this wonderful concept...

Sona you are back...:)
Gosh i missed you and your wonderful writing so much...:(
You know you always write about the character Arnav beautifully..i admirre him the most be it in the serial or your ff's..
I loved the way you describe his physical appearance and the feel of his body on Khushi's delicate one..
The characters are so human like...i am saying it again Sona...you have a beautiful way of writing..please keep writing.
Right now i am suffering from the withdrawal symptoms..:( Missing Barun and IPK..:(

Rae have commented on your blog...
Wil say it here again but...i loved this oS..
The relation between a father and a daughter is beautiful and you write it always nice..
Its sad the way a girl is treated in some places..:(
PM me your blog link if possible so that i can stalk it..

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Posted: 12 years ago
That was beautiful...loved it!!

Arnav and Amara's relationship is adorable..they pain they felt when Amara was leaving...
that 'mujhe nahi jana' was so cute!! That shows no matter she is getting married today she will always be his little princess!!

The part with that x-ray was just perfect...beautifully written..

do continue soon..thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
This s0ng never fails t0 bring tears in my face...there are s0 many 0ccassi0ns where we find abused w0men due t0 her failure t0 get a girl child. Jst t0day there was a w0man wh0se baby b0y was admitted. She shared that the b0y was her 7th child and she already has 6 daughters. 3 daughters were ab0rted when they came t0 kn0w she is a girl. The w0man's husband refused family planning and the w0man was f0rced t0 bear a child. Her first b0rn daughter, wh0 is 18 is already married, and pregnant. The w0man was 35yrs 0ld and l00ked like 45. My heart breaks Rae kn0wing there are these heartless pe0ple t00.
Beautiful w0rk by b0th 0f y0u.
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Posted: 12 years ago
A lovely concept being executed by two of my favourite writers! :D

Dil Jhoom.. It was beautiful Sona. You always manage to take me to another world with the visuals your words create, the sounds they resonate. And I can't help but feel for the girl who is practically engaged who falls in love with another and waits for him because he asks her to. Lovely writing.

And Rae.. You made me fall in love with Arnav the father, all over again. :)
I never considered Swanand Kirkire a great singer, but his voice has a rawness which kind of highlights the issue at hand. I wondered where you were going with the OS but then it all made sense. :) Beautifully written Rae.

Looking forward to more from the both of you! :) Not buddying the new ID.. I can stalk for updates! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago


Reserved. Need some time :$

Missed you heaps and tonnes btw! :(

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Posted: 12 years ago
Sona and Rae, the concept you are venturing is pretty exciting. I love beautiful songs, meaningful lyrics with soulful melodies. They moved the listeners to another level. And i love to read - anything which i find interesting and worth reading. I have read Sona's works, and am a very ardent fan of her works. Though am yet to read Rae's work, am glad to get an opportunity to know her works. I have always read her long appreciative comments on other writer's works...her words are sincere and very inspiring to say the least. So looking forward to the string of OSs.

Read the first OS..As a whole it had a laid back feeling!! And i was wondering what it is all leading to..Your characters are so real. At first i had a feeling that Arnav was a loafer, but he was an NDA cadet!! and did pursue Kushi even after knowing she was about to get engaged. I would have loved to be privy to his thoughts. But when he didn't call her after returning from his grandfather's funeral, i was confused as to what is happening. Didn't he trust Kushi and their love?! And he took that one incident and came to the conclusion that she married that guy without even inquiring discreetly. But she was so accepting of his apologies without even questioning him!!..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice story. Love the father daughter bonding a lot & also the way he still calls Khushi sanka devi & she calling him Laad Governer shows how much they r still the same eventhough they have a grown up daughter.
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry i am little late... but wanna say tht i love d whole concept...
i am a very musically inclined person and ve learnt it for years too... so d connection is obvious... d way some songs just pull u out of ur world n create their own is something which thrills me everyday...so i am sooo Happy tht u both are writing it this way😊
The OS was Beautiful!!!! i was ful of tears... ve commented on Blog..
Thanks for d pm😊

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