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KUSHA14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: Rashi_d3
tere liye toh hamesha hi free huh me meri behen..
Bas ye 'huh' mat kiya kar...

wah-wah..
kya dialge mara hai..maze aa gaye.

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KUSHA14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

maine yaha bi RES kiya hai kya??

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why do u think i wud tell ya ? ;)

@SheLooks18ToMe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#353

Originally posted by: KUSHA14

wah-wah..
kya dialge mara hai..maze aa gaye.

Akhir Mara kisne ha?

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why do u think i wud tell ya ? ;)

@SheLooks18ToMe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: KUSHA14
maine yaha bi RES kiya hai kya??

haan yahan b res ha tera! >__<

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why do u think i wud tell ya ? ;)

@SheLooks18ToMe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: Roxxy47
Heya!! hie!
Couldn't comment earlier tujhe pata he hai kyun , right?? Ofcourse!
U know someone was saying me 'Not' to read this But how could i do that , meri Kamini ka SS hai kese na parti 😛... bahut hogya drama..
Alright jokes apart , Finally!
both the parts were Superb , as always 😃... thanku-thanku.. akhir likha kisne tha?
Ahaan Kria acting like a good 'Wife' , already... yes!
But Rey ne toh uski 'Wife Giri' par paani phenk diya , that was Rude ... hahahahahahhhaaa...
N than his way of asking for forgiveness was so Cute... it was?
Pehle toh usse Hug kiya N then 'Hand-Made card diya , so Sweet of him ... i thot dat ws Lame!

Wah Rey ko ussi ke ghar se nikal diya , 'Girls Rule' ... kya kare bat krni thi na..
Sam going on outing i-e More like a 'Date' N that to with her Friend which is a boy i-e 'BoyFriend' , very well going 😉... haha, but she dont want to admit it..
Ab jab Sam Date pe ja sakti hai toh uske Uncle Rey N Aunt Kria kyun nai 😆... Vahi toh! point ha!!
Kria's dress selection was nice , After all 'Meri Miss.Nautanki' ki choice jo hai ... hmm.. haan sachi mene jo select ki thi...
Rey ki Mom wali baat kafi strange thi , ajeeb hai uski Mom 😳... esa hota ha, strange nai ha yeh..
*Sigh* Kya Hua?
Laying on the grass in ur 'To-Be-Lovers' arms , under the open sky , how romantic ... Tu aajkal kuch zyada hi romantic-shomantic nai ho rhi??
'Finally' unho ne confess kiya , 'Kiss' bhi karne wale thay BUT Kria HAD to tell him 'Something' , pu re mood ki dhajian ura di ... hahahahaha *ROFL* kuch secrets to hone chaiye na,
That 'Secret' better bhi important , nai toh tu gai ... han han maar do mujhe sab milke, dhobi ki gadhi hu kya me jo aayega sut ke jaayega...??
Ab woh secret jan-ne keliye i'll have to 'Wait' , which i hate the most But kar lun gi , teri khatir awww! this was sweet., Doubt hota ha! ...
Loved the parts ❤️... u did?
N I luv U as well . awww.. u already know my answer...

Tujhe toh me thanks bolne se rahi...

Luv u bol sakti huh

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KUSHA14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#356

Originally posted by: Rashi_d3
Akhir Mara kisne ha?

yeah-yeah meri RASHU DI ne maara hai.
🤣

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KUSHA14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#357

mai ni kar rai unres.!
'huh'

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why do u think i wud tell ya ? ;)

@SheLooks18ToMe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#358

Chapter 7: A Memorable Evening

1 Week Later-

"I'm so sorry!" she yelled instantly after coming inside the room.

"Where were you this late?" he asked

"Actually i was at the editors place, He took so long in selection of stories" she finished

"So? You got selected?" he asked sitting on the couch while she hung the key. and came to him

"Nope! you know na, i'm not good at writing love stories, may be i should continue doing what i'm famous for" she said

"Children books?" he asked

"Yeah, i guess" she said a bit off

"You shouldn't be working so hard on books, you should be working hard on me" he winked

"Shut up rey!" she scolded "Did u And Sam eat something?"

"uh.. No" he said ready for a lecture

"Why not??" she yelled

"Sam is off to Anie's place and i.. well... was too lazy to cook" he said switching off the TV.

"Gosh! Wait i'll get you something" she said and hurried to the kitchen..

'Not Again!' thought rey, he had something else in mind, something else than cooking and eating. he had thought about it a million times but never had the courage to ask her or talk to her about it. He planned their weekend a bit differently and it seemed as if she would make him eat and then they would simply sleep. Was he worth it? UGH!! kriya ghai was driving him Nuts. he had no idea how to talk about it or ask her about it. whenever he started to talk about 'IT' she would either say "Shut up" or she would avoid the subject. But not this time, he was determined to make it happen this time. You can avoid reyansh singhania? eh kriya? he thought and smiled to himself, her sober beauty her high pony her way of dressing her smile playing with her hairs he was in love with it all, her pale skin usually welcomed him, her brown eyes full of affection and love drove him crazy! Did she deserve him? someone like him at all? the answer was simple-- No! but still he knew she loved him. He got up from his seat gulping, what if she slapped him? what if she scolds him? no she would do no such thing she would simply tell him to stay away if she didn't wish to continue, but still he was a bit scared about what was going to happen next.

She was in the kitchen when she sensed her hair suddenly moving sighing she said "Rey, Let me work" she said "Don't have time for me right?" he complained "Oh please rey" she said as he started to move forward his hands on her waist and his lips kissing her cheek. she didn't pay any attention towards him. she kept doing her work, until she really got irritated "Rey, Stop it" she said "No" he argued "rey lets have a deal then" she said "what?" he asked his voice thin "If you promise to be a good boy now, I promise to be a very bad girl later, Okay?" she said "No, You won't follow your promise" he said moving towards her jawline "Rey, me sach me thappad mar dungi, And i'm not kidding" she said "This is how you treat your boyfriend right?" he complained still lost in her "Fine, then" she finally gave up.

He made her feel beautiful, like she was the only girl alive on this planet. and his touch was magical. beautiful, no matter how much she denied him touching her she loved this feeling. He made her feel like her heart was going to stop. like there was no one more beautiful in this world. he continued the flow of kisses and he explored her waist while kissing her while she loved him. What could she do? she couldnot deny. she loved him and well.. umm.. she too liked it when he touched her. she felt as if she was on the 7th cloud. "Rey.." she said "Hmm?" he answered "When will you stop it?" she asked her voice thin and reedy "I thought u liked it" he said "I do, but, this isn't right" she said "Shh.. just let it be" he said and bit her at the curve of her neck. "Ouch" she said and pulled away, there was a big red spot on the curve of her neck. she smiled "Do you have any idea what you just did?" she said a smile pasted on her face. "I do" he said wrapping his arms around her "I Love you" he said "Nah! I love you more" she said... the bell broke them "I'll check" she said "With that on your neck?" he said she was wearing a thin stripped tank top and jeans. she smiled and covered it with her hands. "I'll go now" she said her hand on the mark.

She opened the door and the next image horrified her, "Hey" she said to swayam smiling but his face was straight no smiles no hugs. nothing "Hey yourself" he said rudely "Where were you all these years??" he asked angry she smiled "We can deal with all this later on, first give me a hug" she said rey listening to the conversation came "Hey dude!" he said "Hey whats up? err.. where's sam?" swayam asked "She's down, playing in the garden" rey said "What are you hiding with that hand?" swayam asked "Oh, Nothing." she said and welcomed swayam inside her hand still up on her neck. meanwhile sam came covered in mud. "Hello everyone" she said kriya gasped "Sam don't tell me you played in mud again?" kriya said "I might have" she answered "Come ill get you changed" kriya said

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She took out a Nightie for Sam while she was bathing and accidentely her hand which was covering the mark which rey had gifted her got down while taking out clothes from Sams wardrobe. sam came out in her bath suit "Whats up with that red mark?" she asked "Oh.. That.. err... well... actually a bug bit me today evening while u were down, you're not supposed to tell anyone about it okay?" kriya said sam nodded not understanding why was she not supposed to tell anyone about it..

Later that evening-

kriya had to hide it. so she covered the mark with fulll sleeve and neck covered sweater. everyone was at the table eating when swayam said "So, Did you enjoy this evening?" he smiled looking at sam "Yes, and you know what, A big bug bit kriya this evening, It's so red looks like a beast bit her" sam said kriya choked, The mark definitely looked like a human bite. what explanation will she give swayam if he finds out about it? "Hmm.. I'm looking forward to know about this evening of theirs" swayam looked at KriYaansh, "Swayam, Tu kuch khaa kyu nai rha ha yaar, kha na" rey insisted "Nai rey, me bas chalta huh, I don't want to 'DISTURB' u guys anymore" swayam said and he made sure that they understood what he meant.. "Sam will u go in we adults need to talk" swayam said she moved in instantly.

After She Left-

"BUSTED!" swayam said

KriYaansh looked at each other

"huh?" kriya said acting innocent

"Kriya ghai, you can remove the sweater now" swayam said

Kriya did as she was told the big mark as still there swayam studied it closely. He looked at rey and smiled

"Ye toh rey ki karmaat lagti hai?" he winked at kriya she blushed

rey nodded his face down.

"swayam, ham tumhe batane hi vaale the" kriya said

"Kabse chal rha ha ye sab?" swayam said

"1 Week" rey said

Swayam smiled and congratulated them. he was happy that his best friends got together he always wanted it to happen

Later-

"did you tell her about it?" swayam hushed taking a big puff of his cigerate

"No, not yet: rey said

"What are you doing man? you should've told her" swayam said

"i know but.. well.. what if she leaves me, i cannot afford to lose her now" rey said

"You shouldnot hide it, i understand whatever happened was wrong, but u tell her" swayam said

"I really really don't know swayam, i really don't know what i will do without her" rey said

"I've been in love i understand, but be honest with her" swayam said

"I'm just waiting for the right time to tell her..." rey finished

Precap- Some moments and Rey hiding something, AND A SUDDEN TWIST!

Heya guys!

Ignore the typos, i didnt get time to re-read it..

i've decided if a get good really good reviews im gonna write the sudden twist part today itself

but only if i get a good response for this..

Hope this part was good?

well, i personally think it was lame.

Now, Now, Review Time!

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Edited by Rashi_d3 - 12 years ago

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vaishali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#359

my question...

what did kria want to tell rey??? in previous update ya fir i missed a update???

loved the update...

sweet and fun...

waiting for next.. :)

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shalini saroha

@shalini_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#360

Originally posted by: -Vaish-
my question...

what did kria want to tell rey??? in previous update ya fir i missed a update???

loved the update...

sweet and fun...

waiting for next.. :)

same ques...mee too thinking same 2 same...:p