|| Weep No More || - Short Story chp8 on pg 78

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HOLA!!

Is any Intro required?? u guys know me well right?

well, chalo firbhi...

I'm Rashi a.k.a Rishu, Rish, Ras, Rash, Sweetypie!.... n d list goes on...

I'm a normal school girl who loves 2 write...!!!!

well... dis is kind of tricky story... i will discontinue if u guyz won't like it ok?

so do review n tell me i shud cont. or not??
please leave ur reviews!!


Aknowledgements...
well, all credit goes 2 'Luanne Rice' one of
my favourite writers... i was reading her book which i usually do wen im bored n i luved it so much dat i planned 2 write dis!


UPDATED!!




Chapter 1-scroll down
Charachter Sketch
Chapter 2
Chapter 3

Chapter 4 (Return Gift)
Chapter 5

P.s- contents of Index r hyperlynked

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 1


"WELL...!" sam shouted...

"What well? u aren't supposed to make older children friends!" rey yelled..

"Rey... she's just 14..." sam said as calmly as she could...

"Sam m not tolerating dis... she's 2 years older... you're just 12!" rey scolded...

"Rey..." sam said but rey cutted her..

"nd y dont u call me 'bhaiya? m much older!" he said

"oh c'monn...! lets not go off d topic we've talked about dis before...! let her in PLEASE!!!!" sam pleaded..

"No is a NO!" rey yelled!

"ENOUGH IS ENOUGH! she's waiting outside n m calling her in!" sam said..


"how can i forget dat im talking 2 Sharon Shekhawat's daughter? she has d same accent n fighting skills lyk her mom!" rey thought n smiled silently

"Sandy get in!" sam called her in..

"u need 2 behave samie.. making friends with older children isn't done with me!" rey said

"oh please rey bhaiyaa...she's a nice girl meet her once pleasssee!!!!"
sam said lovingly!


"but still she's as cute as her father Swayam" rey thought

"
Fine.. but not again ok? m inside call me if u need!" rey said n left..

sam: hi sandy..!

san
dy: hi sameera...!

sam: call me sam ple
ase..

sandy: call me sandy ple
ase..
n dey giggled..

sam: u sit i'll get u something 2 eat...

sandy: no, no its fine.. just tell me why did you call me so urgently...??

sam: oh.. sit know!

sandy: u live here? (while sitting)

sa
m: yeah we rented a house my maternal uncle n me..

sandy: umm... n your parents?

sam: ______________________ she said something...

sam brought some chips n cola...
she sat with sandy...

sam: btwsince wen r u here??

sandy: since 14 years..

sam: u know any blue houses nearby hubbard's point beach ?

sandy luked puzzled... "well...hubbards point has 20 houses..."

sam: and?

sandy: it's a bunglow actually... huge bunglow it belongs 2 someone rich i guess!

No, mom told dat ms ghai was middle-class not at all rich...

sam: umm... any oder blue house?

sandy's eyes widened: oh...u mean
d witch's house??

sam
: huh?

sandy: actually its white now but it used to b blue wen i was 9 i remember beacause my sister anie had a song about it...

Heart of stone, House of blue..
if you come to my yard..
i'll make you a witch too!


NO, mom's best frnd cant be a witch! sam thought...!

but sam had no other choice she ruled out almost every house she found on Hubbard's point beach , she had ridden her bike up and down d roads in warm summer. And she'd gone back with only 5 blue houses she'd found nd asked people whether dey knew her mother... Sharon Raiprakash, 5 times d answer was NO!

sam: why do u call her witch??

sandy: beacause no-one ever sees her, she lives in New York whole winter n wen she's here she stays in her yard till dark! she talks 2 owls, she writes children's books on Birds n species, People dont know how wierd she is come frm outside 2 look for her- but she dosen't even answer d door! And every morning before d sun rises she luks for her lost diamond ring on beach!"

sam: diamond riing?

sandy: som engagement ring i suppose, she has no children although she writes childrens books! she wears lots of rings 2-3 i guess... but she lost d biggest one... it was worth thousands... n she wants 2 find it...she puts spells i heard...!

sam frowned, hugging her knees she didn't like d sound of dis woman! but den she thought about her mom... how she told her their stories, how badly she wanted 2 meet her best friend!, she thought about her her soft blue eyesue eyes with gentle sunlines around d outside corners, and how she used 2 talk abt her best friend!she had hole in her stomach suddenly! n she decided to to MEET her!


could her mother's best friend be a book writing witch? Nothing seemed impossible anymore. In fact, compared to d other things dat had happened during Sam's lifetime, that didn't even sound so weird she thanked sandhya for d information she left , nd den she set off to find d way up d hill to d house dat used to b blue...

Precap- Sam meeting miss ghai...!


*********************************************

Hey guyz how was it?
gud? bad? lyk it? hate it?
well, don't hesitate in criticising...!
plyz tell me whether 2 continue or not?
nd please leave ur reviews!
i'll update Frenemies till thursday...! i promise!!

as my tes
ts r finishing on wednesday i'll update FR on Thursday!
well, bye guyz!!!
CS will b updated later...!



NEXT




Edited by Rashi_d3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res...

will unres as soon as I come back from the trip...

please remind me for this...


_________________________

okay this one is interesting as well as scary..

I am a bit confused..

hope the confusion gets cleared soon..

on a whole I liked it...

this is one of the hatke n till date ur best write ups...


but till then all I can say is looking forward for the next chapter..
Edited by -shenz- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome concept
but confusing one
update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres
new ss 😆
interesting concept.
miss ghai is a witch 😲
waiting for next part.
Edited by MOON_ARSHA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice
but confusing😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept..do continue..n update fast 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pehle yeh bata...

tere kitne tests hote hain????

this stryy is so inetersting...

just loved it...

chahe jo ho jaaye...

tereko sabse pehle yahi update karna...

plzzz...

pretty please...

waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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confusion hai
but phir bhi acha hai
thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow its danmm intrstng concept..
though i hv lill cnfusion..
bt m sure m gonna luv dis..
so update soon..
n thnx 4 d pm...

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