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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreyay

U really should... I m sure no one would mind it... Upload ASAP...!!!




hey sure sweetz ill upload it jst let me improve the plot!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: chaichil

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hey natasha...thnk u dahling!!

d taarey part happened in my lyf!!!😳😳

bt the swaron part i improvised it frm my di's gossip abt her and jiju šŸ˜‰

she is sure to kill me if she reads it
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but m glad u liked it <3


Aww am so happy for u wish u all the best šŸ¤— and yes plzzz write a second part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chaichil




hey sure sweetz ill upload it jst let me improve the plot!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Perfectly balanced os dear
Awesome do write more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os...love taarey n swaron bestest couples,buddies ever
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thnk u thnk u thnku soo muj
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chaichil

thnk u thnk u thnku soo muj

no need...u deserve it šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey ppl i waas very happy by the response i got in this os so thot ill continue it as ss
hope u all will lyk it i rily do hope




part 2 unique bond" dil sein"

7;45 shekhawats resident

swayam- abb yeh kuch zyada nai ho raha ??

rey i kno boss inka yeh khatam hi nahi hota
swayam- i kno dud3 its almost 2 months nw

rey- yeh sab itna karthi kya hein???
swayam- shopping dud3...
rey- ryt yeh toh ladkiyo ka birth ryt hein...
swayam aftrol they are

swayam and rey together - "girls"

it has been past 2 montths since swarons engagement has been decided
all have been busy preparing for the big day. sharon wanted a prfct up to the mark engagment after ol its sharon rai prakashs engagement to which swayam alwayz reminded her"bas tera hi nahi mera bhi engagement hein"sharon jst use to glare i mean wots wid these boys y dnt they understand shopping is so necessary ok ok she knew it has been pas 2 months she has been continously shopping still she did not find a suitable lehenga or gownn for herself whereas swayam found his dress in jst 48 min and he was lukng so adorable in it trust me...but nw she was rily thankful to haf taani this shopping expeditions wid her to be sistr in law was fun!!!

9 30 shekhawats residence

the door bell rang disturbing the boys who wer busy wwid their video game

swayam lasily opened the door
and thr was his to be fiancee and his sister
he was very happy wid their relationship
now taani evn do not bother to share her prblems wid him it is always sharon for her nw but he luved it tht way

suddenly sharon drroped all her bags and went near swayam tip toed and streched on her toes and kissed swayam on his cheeks
"i missed u "she said
"missed u more answered swayam

"coffee???????????'Sharon said loudly and as she made osum cappuccinos no 1 refused so she headed towards the kitchen with swayam ryt behind her leaving taani al alone wid all that bags not that she minded bt these many bags and her small hands no nt happening!!

suddenly rey comes and casually kneels towards the door his signature smirk plastered over his face
"poor u " he said

taaniz cheek strted blazing deep red
no no dnt mistake it for a cute blush
but she wass boiling boiling with anger

here instead of helping her he was jst pitying her hw can he???
"Mr reyansh singhaniya cant u see m struggling ovr here wid these bags and u u r jst standng thr nd pityng me"
shouted taani

"did i tell u too buy the whole mall "replyd rey grinning!!!!!!!!!!
"damn u "said taani

"rrealy girlfrnd??' answere rey raising his eyebrows

taani jst fumed in anger but somehow managed to pik ol the shopping bags but nw she cud not move even an inch suddenly reey cums and frm behind and piks her up
she was damn surrprised at this gesture rey never failed to surprise her aafterol he was her prince charming

"prince charming huh?' rey asked setting her down
"did i jst sae tht aloud"
asked n embarrassed taani
rey jst smiled hw adorable and amusing his little girlfriend was oh huw he luvd her
he jst cupped her face in his hands and lukd at her he first kissed her forehead thn her eye lid then her nose then her jaw line thn wen he was abt to kiss her lipss suddenly

"ahem ahem"sharon cleared her throat with a tray of coffee mugs in her hand
"we r alive " cumntd swayam in a teasing way!!!!!!!!!!

"hum kitchen mein akke dekh rahe the kya?"muterd rey

"kuch kaha tumne?'enquired sharon obviously who herd his remark quite clearly
"app rehne dijiye bhaabi, bhaiyya no toh apko mummy pappa ke samne bhi nahi choda tha yaad hein" reminded taani taking her coffee mug and saving rey frm the embarrassment

ha hw can ever swaron forget tht day the day wen swayam introduced sharonn to his parents


1 20 pm swayams house {flash bak}
it was a gr8 day as swayams parent came all the way frm london to meet sharon they all wer sitting in the dining table for lunch swayam sharon his mom taani and his dad
sharon was wearing a deep blue colour saree yes saree and she was lukng gorgeous and his parent wer quite
impressed wid her
sudenly swayam caught her hand below the table
sharon whispers"yeeh tum kya kar rahe ho"
swayam- English mein to isko romance kehte hein and hindi mein mohhobat kehte hein "
sharon- chodo swayam tumhare mom dad dekh lenge
swayam- toh??apne hone walle biwi ke saath nai romance karunga toh kya baaujuwaali ke saath harunga/?'

sharon-ofo swayam plz!!!!

suddenly
"sharon beta tum achanak sein left haath sein roti q khanne lag gayi"asked swayams mother caringly
"woh...woh actually aunty woh woh qunki mein na roti left haath sein and rice rice right haath sein khaathi hun repyd sharon

swayams parents had a "has she lost it luk"
taani said"voh mumma she can use her both hands u see extra bright and brilliant u remebr our cousin bittu even he..."blabbered taani and diverted the topic suddenly swayam says
"acha sharon thn rice khao na"tightening his grip on sharons hand
sharon had it enof and stamped swayams foot under the table
"sharon beta swayam ka paav ryt mein hein thz was my foot"said mr shekhawat wid a straight face
sharon turned cumplete red
taani and mrs shekhawat started laughing and teasing the couple

...{flash bak end}...


"i still haf the urge to kill u wen i remebr
tht"said ssharon throwing a pillow at rrey who was rolling on the floor makng fun of sharon

swaron and taarey together had evrythng love frndship sibling relationshhip fyts passion...evrythg thr is no bond prfct thn thm isnt it??????

mayb they haf this unique bond because their feeling are totly from"dil sein"
dil sein waali feeiling yaar pure hi hogi!!!
3 cheers for swaron and taarey
...END...


hope u lyk it ppl desperately hoping

nxt update is on swarons engagement

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woww !!! Truly adorable :D just loved wen rey says to swaron - humne kitchen mein aake dekha kya ?
LOL epic !! Plz update super soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: zara.92

Woww !!! Truly adorable :D just loved wen rey says to swaron - humne kitchen mein aake dekha kya ?
LOL epic !! Plz update super soon :)



thnku dahling m glad u liked it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃

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