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Posted: 12 years ago
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New year special !

Ye new year ka samay haina…..

Dadi iss saal apne sare qwaaish pura karna chahathi……

Pichle saal job hi hua woh sab ab uss saal ke saath hi chale jayega……

Jaise waqt ek hi direction mein chaltha hai waise humko bhi aage hi chalna chahiye kabhi peeche mudke dekhthe toh hum sochenge ki hum apne past mein shayad jaa sakkthe, lekin aaisa hum sochthe hai……

Sach toh ye hai ki time travel is impossible……..hum apne purane yaadon mein rehthe toh hummare present ko bhi kho jaathe , waqt kissi ke liye bhi rukhtha nahi….sirf hum peeche jaane ki koshish mein wahi rukh jaathe…..

Jaise hum Maneet pe fida hokke 2011 mein hi attak gaye……

Babaji please 2013 mein GURTI ko wapas dedo……Maneet nahi toh koi aur avatar mein…..

Har ek naye saal hummare liye nayi umeed lekhe aathi …….

Har ek ko koi na koi wish hotha, haina?

"MAY YOUR DREAMS COME TRUE THIS YEAR"

"HAPPY NEW YEAR EVERYONE"

Jaise Maneet ki sapne sach hothe waise hummara bhi sapna sach hoga

"Dreams do come true"

Par usske liye Dadi ki tarah humme lagathaar koshish karna chahiye….

Maan aur Geet toh apne mann ki baat apne mann main hi rakhthe toh ek dusre ko kaise patha chalega ki donno ka problem same hai……

Hamesha ki tarah Dadi ko hi koi naya plan karna padega……..

Ab dekhthe hai ki Dadi kya karthe……

After lunch Geet aur Neha Dadimke saath beitke baatein kar rahe hai……

Dadi new year ki baat karthi……

Dadi: toh Geet bte iss mew year ko aapka kya kya demands hai

Geet: Dadi, aap kya baat kar rahe hai? Mein samji nahi

Dadi: hare Geet bte hum ek khel khelthe hai, " New Year Wishes"

Naha: naya game hai kya? Mujhe bhi khelna hai

Geet: par mein aaise game ko nahi jaanthi

Dadi: hum bhi itne saal aaise game ko nahi jaanthe

Geet: Dadi aap humme ullu banana chahathe hai

Dadi: hare nahi bte, ye koi naya game hai, very interesting, aap pehle mere baat toh suniye

Neha is interested……

Geet: teek hai, kya game hai?

Dadi: hum apne wish ko ek chiti mein likhke babaji ko bhejdenge aur babaji agle saal hummare wish pura karenge

Geet: par babaji ka koi address nahi haina

Dadi: hare Geet bte babaji toh har jagah hothe hai, hummare ghar mein bhi hai

Geet: Dadi ye kaise mazak hai

Dadi: hare mazak nahi, sach hai, aap chiti likho toh sahi, hum babaji ko aapki chiti pohunchadenge aur dekhiye aapki qwaaish kaise puri hothi?

Geet: par mein toh roz babaji se dua karthi hoon, unko mere har qwaaish patha hai

Dadi: Geet bte hum sab jannthe hai, aap jaldhi paper pen layiye

Geet paper pen lekhe aathi….

Pehle Dadi apne chiti likhthi hai…..

Dadi: dekho, hummari chiti tayaar hai, ab kissko likhna hai

Neha: mujhe, mujhe

Geet: teek hai, aap kahiye aapko kya chahiye naya saal mein? Mein aapki chiti likhthi hoon

Dadi: Geet bte aap bhi likhiye

Geet bhi likhthi hai

Dadi: ab humme who chitiyan dedijiye, hum hummare ghar ke babaji ko ye chiti bhejdenge

Geet: Dadi, Neha bahut excited hai, agar usski wish puri nahi hothi toh woh babaji se naraaz ho jayegi

Dadi: aap fikar mat karo, hum jaanthe hai ki kya karna hai

Dadi KC ke address MSK ke naam woh letters post karthi hai…..

Ab toh Geet ki mann ki baat Maan bhi jaanlega, haina babaji?

Maan gets those letters next day…….

Maan is confused….ye kiska kaam hoga?

Zaroor uss Geet ka idea hi hoga, haina babaji?

Chalo ab dekhthe hai ki ye m'am ka wish bhi kya hai?

Hoga koi diamond jewellery……..

Ye aurathen usske aage kya chahathe?

Pehle Neha ki letter padtha……

Geet ne hi likha hai….

Maan ab Geet ke handwriting bhi jaantha hai…..

Ab toh MSK ka kamre ko ye Geet handa ne kabsa karahi……

Jahan dekho Geet ke notebooks hi dikhtha…..

Patha nahi aaise kya padthi hai?

Neha ki wish bhi MSK ki tarah bahut bada hai…..

Maan: hum toh hamesha uuncha hi sochthe, that's my girl…..

Ab Dadi ka wish…….

Maan: ye toh Neha se bhi badiya wish hai, par koi baat nahi, iss duniya mein aaise koi baat nahi jo MSK nahi kar saktha, haina?

Finally Geet ki wish…..

Maan is very eagerto know what's in her mind…..

Ye dekho Geet ki chiti…….

"Babaji aap jaanthe hai ki mein roz prayer karthi….

Aur mein sabki tarah sirf New Year mein aapko yaad nahi karthi"

Maan: haan ye toh har gante babaji ko bhulathi hai, bechare babaji isskeliye ovet time kaam karna padtha, haina babaji?

" aur mere mann ki baat aapke behthar koi nahi jaan saktha

Haina babaji? Toh aap iss saal mere sare qwaaish puri kardo

Aur Neha ka bhi, teek hai babaji, happy new year"

Maan is disappointed…….

Maan: mein bhi na, isse toh itna hi umeed kar sakthe, ye ladhki kudh bhi nahi jaanthi ki who kya chahathi aur ye babaji ko bhi confuse karthi, hats off to Geet Handa, ye toh babaji ka kaam hai, mein kuch nahi kar saktha

It's new year….

Everyone is ready…….

Dadi: Geet bte Neha kahan hai?

Geet: Maan ke saath hai

Suddenly bahar koi awaaz aatha hai……

Dadi: Geet bte ye kaise awaaz hai

Geet: lagtha hai koi band bhaj raha hai, mein jaake dekhthi hoon

Geet bahar jaathi……..

Jithne tez chali thi usse dukhna tej lautke aathi….

She is scared ….

She just runs madly….

Hamesha ki tarah seedhe Maan se takraathi…..

Maneet eyelock…….Mahi……….

Geet ka wish pura ho ya nahi par Maan ka wish pura ho gaya……

Maan: Geeet

Geet: woh bahar….bahar

Geet couldn't complete……

Maan: wahan kya hai?

Maan tries to go out….

Geet usske haath pakadthi….

Geet: wahan mat jao

Maan: Geet itna kyun darthi ho, aao mere saath, kuch nahi hoga, mein hoon na

Geet: nahi, mein nahi aa sakthi

Maan: toh Neha chalo aap aao

Maan takes Neha with him….

Ab Neha hi chalthi toh Geet bhi peeche hi jaathi…..

Par Maan ke peeche chup chupke jaathi…..

Wahan ek haathi hai…..Neha ki wish toh Haathi ke upar sawaari karna hai….

Issilye Maan ussko yahan lekhe aaya hai……

Maan Neha ke saath haathi mein ek round jaake aatha….

Neha is very happy…….

Maan: Geet tum bhi aao

Geet: nahi

Maan laughs……..

Maan: itne bade bade baatein karthi ho, aur haathi se darthi ho

Geet: ye toh aapke tarah bahut wild hai, aapne suna nahi jab haathi ko gussa aatha toh samnewale ke jaan bhi le saktha, bahut katarnaak hai, Neha aao hum andar chakte hai

Geet takes her in….

Maan sabko paise dekhe bhejtha……

Dadi: Maan bte Neha ki wish toh pura kar chuke hai, hummari wish kab pura hogi

Dadi ka wish toh hum sab jaanthe haina, Maneet Jr.

Maan: Dadi ye toh mere bas ki baat nahi hai, ye toh mein akhela pura nahi kar saktha

Dadi: mein nahi jaanthi ki aap akhele karenge ya kissi ki madat se karenge par hum agla saal apne pothe

Ke saath hi new year celebrate karenge, samje aap

Maan looks at Geet….

Geet: mujhe kya dekhthe ho? Hare babaji mein iss khel mein nahi hoon, mein
jaathi hoon, mujhe padna hai

Geet wahan se chale jaathi……

Geet: ye Dadi bhi na, hamesha mujhe hi musibat mein dalthe hai, babaji aap hi bathao mein kya kar sakthi?

Dadi: Maan bte Geet ka wish?

Maan: who toh usske babaji hi jaanthe hai

Maan shows the letter….

Dadi: ye Geet bhi na, humne kitne raat jagkke ye plan banaya aur ye ladhki toh ek minute mein sare mehnat ko mitti mein miladhi

Kya karein Geet Handa haina?

Bye guys, agle saal milhte hai……………..once again happy new year…….

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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Happy New Year

part 28
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Part – 29

One day….

Geet apne kamre mein padrahi hai….

Maan ke table pe beitke….

Neha bhi saath hai….

Geet Neha ko paper aur color pens dethi hai, to keep her engaged…

Neha bed pe betke scribble kar rahi hai…..

Maan neeche hall mein hai….

Office ka koi kaam kar raha hai….

Maan needs some file..it's in his table….

Maan comes to take it….

Geet ka dhyaan padnne mein hai toh Geet Maan ko notice nahi karthi….

Par Neha Maan ko dekh chuki hai…

Maan enters silently…..

Maan keeps his fingers on his lips & asks Neha to keep quiet….

Neha smiles & keeps looking at them…..

Geet is busy….

Maan apne Geet ko gurkke hi rehtha…..

He is lost in her beauty….

Maan dhere dhere usskke paas jaatha…

Geet ko bhi ehsaas hotha ki Maan peeche hai….

She gets up suddenly….

Her chair hits Maan….Maan is hurt….

Geet: aap?

Maan: Geet, kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: aap ko lag gayi?

Geet Maan ke haath pakadkke dekhthi…..

Maan acts as if he is in pain….

Geet: kahan lagi?

Geet is worried….

Mann smiles……

Neha bhi hasthi……

Geet: toh aaise baat hai….tum bhi innke side ho?

Geet Neha ke paas jaake ussko tickle karthi….

Neha aur zor se hasthi….

Maan dekhte hi rehtha….

Geet: aap yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Maan : woh ……mein……

Geet: kya? Mein mein?

Neha couldn't control her laughter……

Geet ko bhi haassi aathi…she turns back & laughs….

Maan: haan, mein file lene aaya

Geet continues to play with Neha…….

Maan keeps looking at them…..

He takes the file & leaves……

Geet continue her studies on the bed itself….

Neha starts drawing…..

Kuch dher badh…

Maan apne kaam kar raha hai…

Neha comes…..

Maan pretends to be busy….

Nahe chup chupke aakke Maan ko darathi…..

Maan darne ki natak kartha….

Neha bahut kush hai….

Maan lifts her & she sits on his lap….

Neha ke haath mein kuch hai…

Maan: hare , ye kya hai?

Maan ko lagtha Geet ki koi notes haogi…

Par ye toh Neha ki drawing hai….

She shows him proudly…

Maan usski tareef kartha….

Maan: hare wah, ye toh bahut sundar hai, apne Neha ki tarah

When he looks at it, he is shocked to find it's a paper from some important file….

Maan gets angry….

Ussko lagtha ye Geet ne Neha ko dhi….

Maan goes to see Geet….

Geet has fallen asleep on her books…..

Bahut dher se padrahi hai toh woh tak gayi….

Maan chillakke jaatha….Geeet ….Geeet……

Geet gets up & finds Neha missing…..

Geet: Neha….Nehaaa

Neha comes along with Maan

She shows the paper to her….

Geet: hare, ye aapne banayi, kitna achcha hai, haina Maan?

Maan: Geet ye kaise mazak hai?

Geet: mazak?

Maan: tumne mere file ko Neha ko kyun dhi?

Geet: par meinne toh waste paper hi dhi thi

Maan: Geet

Maan is really angry…

Maan: toh ye tumme waste paper lagtha

Geet: woh, patha nahi, shayad Neha aapkke file se lekhe gayi?

Maan: toh ab tum apni galthi ka inzaam Neha pe lagaoogi? Tumse toh yahi umeed kar sakthe hai, Neha chalo,isse baat karna hi bekar hai

Maan Neha ko lekhe chale jaatha….

Geet: hare, Neha

Maan: tumme takleef lene ki koi zaroorat nahi hai Geet, aaj se Neha ko mein hi sambaloonga, Neha tumme disturb nahi karegi….
Maan gusse hokke chala jaatha…
.

Geet: hare babaji, meinne kya ki? Innko toh hamesha lagtha ki sare galthiyaan mein hi karthi hoon

Geet is hurt….ab Geet ne kab Neha ko disturbance socha?

Ye Maan bhi na, gusse mein kuch bhi boltha aur Geet ko kehtha ki woh apne dimag ki isstemaal nahi karthi? Ab ussnne kya ki?

Geet feels very bad….

Maan comes back to take the file that is damaged….

Geet is collecting the papers…

She stops seeing Maan…

Maan looks at the drawer kept open….

Now he remembers leaving it open as he was looking at Geet that time…..

He realizes his mistake….

Geet handsover the papers & goes & stands in a corner….

She is very upset….

Maan usske paas jaatha….

He looks into her eyes….

Maneet eyelock….Mahi….

Maan Geet ke bahut kareeb jaatha…

Geet ki dhadkan tej hothi…

Geet is feeling restless…

Ab ye yahan kyun aaraha hai?

Geet: dekhiye, ye meri galthi nahi hai, aap phir se sunnane aagaye? Mein dadi ko bhulathi, wahi aakke aapko teek kar sakthi

Maan closes her lips with his fingers…

Maan: chup….bilkul chup

Geet toh freeze ho gayi….

Maan: woh, meinne hi drawer khula choda, I'm sorry

Geet now gets angry…..

Galthi toh woh karthe aur mujhe itna sunate hai, woh samajthe kya apne aapko?

Geet pushes him….

Maan is shocked…

Geet ke aakhen gusse se laal ho gaye….

Geet aage aage jaathi…Maan peeche peeche jaatha…

Geet: aap samajthe kya apne aapko? Ek sorry kehne se sab teek ho jaayega? Pehle gathi karte hai aur

Sorry kehke bach jaathe hai, kissko chahiye aapki sorry? Kya kaha aapne? Aaj se aap Neha ko sambalenge?Aap? Itne din kahan the aap? Bade aaye meri bachi ko sambalne….

Maan has stepped back & gone out of the room….

Geet slams the door on his face….

Maan is stunned by this….

Ab Geet ko kaise manayein?

Geet locks the door & stays in….

Maan comes & knocks, but she won't open…..

After a while….

Maan knocks….geet keeps quiet….

Neha: Geet…geet…

Geet: Neha?

Geet comes near the door….

Neha: Geet, darwaza kholo

Maan is asking Neha to speak like that….

Geet opens the door….

She lifts Neha & kisses her…

Mikha milhte hi Maan andar gussjaatha…

Geet: aap? Aap bahar jao

Maan: Geet, meinne kaha na? I'm sorry, mujhe maaf kardho, mujhse galthi ho gayi

Maan apne khan pakadke maafi maanghta….

Neha laughs looking at him….

Geet: kyun Neha? Maaf kardein?

Neha nods her head….

Geet ko bhi hassi aathi….

Geet: chalo, ab Neha ne hi maaf kardhi toh meinne bhi maaf kardhi

Maan comes near Geet…

Maan smiles,,,,he gets closer & closer…..

He almost kisses her cheeks….

Geet ko laga aaj toh ek kiss ho jayega….

But Maan kisses Neha…

Maan: thank U Neha

Geet toh sharmarthi…..she blushes….

Maan smiles & leaves……

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awesum...loved it...loved their roothna - manana ...continue soon...
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part 29
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yeh Maan hamesha kyun suspects Geet and blames her always?
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Part – 30

Dadi could sense something going on between these two…..

Kuch kuch ho raha haina?

Dadi aaise moke ka hi intrezaar kar rahi thi….

Time for action Dadima……agla plan kya hai?

Geet college chale jaathi….

aur chuti ho toh din bar Naha ke saath khelkke rehthi….

Maan bhi hamesha kaam ke peeche hi pada hai…..

Ab tak toh teek hai, par ab shadhi ho gayi haina? Mr.MSK……

That evening…..

As usual Geet Neha aur Dadi ke saath dinner karke padne gayi…..

Neha Dadi ke saath cartoon dekh rahi hai….

Aajkal Neha ke saath Dadi bhi serials chodke cartoon fan bangayi…..

Geet ke jaane ke badh Dadi Neha ke saath mike agla plan banathi….

Ye kaam toh Neha hi kar sakthi……

Dadi issme directly involve nahi ho sakthi…..

Dadi ka izzat ki sawal hai….

Hummare Dadima Maneet ke liye kuch bhi kar sakthe, lekhin phir bhi

Ye baat Neha kudh kehthi toh thoda zyada asar padega …

Aur Geet bhi mana nahi kar sakthi….

Geet comes to take Neha with her….

Geet: hare kab tak TV dekhegi? Chalo sonne ka waqt ho gaya

Neha looks at Dadi…

Dadi winks…..Neha smiles…..

Dadi: hare Geet bte aapko needh aathi toh aap jaake sojao

Neha: haan mujhe neendh nahi aathi

Geet: aaise kaise? Chalo jaldhi, Dadi ko GN kehke aayiye, Gud night Dadi

Dadi: Gud night bte

Neha: mein Dadi ke saath hi sojaathi

Dadi kahin aur dekh rahi hai….

Neha toh Dadi ko hi dekhthi….

Ye toh Dadi ka hi plan haina?

Geet ko kuch kadbad lagtha….

Geet: nahi nahi, tum Dadi ko kyun disturb karthi?

Dadi: koi baat nahi bte, aapkka semester paas aaraha haina? Aap teek se tayyari kijiye, hum aapko disturb nahi karna chahate hai, issiliye aaj se Neha hummare paas hi soyegi, haina Neha?

Neha shows her thumbs up….done…..

Dadi: Neha bte aapke mamma ko GN kahiye

Neha: Gud night , mamma

Dadi has taught her to call them maa & papa….

Geet kisses her & leaves…

Geet ko ab Neha ko chodke jaana hi pada….

Geet Maan ke aane se pehle hi jaake sojaathi?...

Maan finds Neha missing….

Maan: Geet

Geet: mein soogayi hoon

Maan: Neha kahan hai?

Geet: woh Dadi ke saath hai

Maan: kyun? Woh ab tak TV dekh rahi hai?

Geet: nahi, aap hi jaake poochlo

Maan goes & asks Dadi…

Dadi tells the same reason…

Geet ke exams…

Maan: par Dadi ab aap ko bhi aaram ki zaroorat hai

Dadi: Maan bte, hum itna bhi bhude nahi hai

Maan: lekhin Dadi, mein Neha ko sambal saktha, Geet ko koi disturbance nahi hogi

Dadi: humme sona hai, aap jayiye, gud night

Maan: gud night Dadi

Ab Neha bhi nahi hai toh Geet finds it difficult to stay alone with Maan…

Maan ka toh koi asar nahi pada….

Woh hamesha ki tarah aake sojaatha….

Geet ko neendh nahi aathi…..

Aajkal Neha ke saath cuddle karke sonne ki aadat padgayi haina…

Ab woh nahi hai toh Geet kya karegi…..

Geet ko lagtha ab needh nahi aathi toh thoda padayi ho jaaye….

Waise sone se pehle log books padthe haina?

Geet switches on the light….

Maan bhi sonahi paya….

Maan: Geet, kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: Neha nahi haina? Mujhe neendh nahi aarahi hai,Mein thode dher padna chahathi hoon

Maan: Neha nahi hai toh kya? Mein hoona yahan pe

Geet: kya?

Maan: hare mujhe sona hai, tum aaise lights on karke mujhe pareshaan kyun kar rahi ho?

Geet: kya? Mein pareshaan kar rahi hoon?

Geet bahar chale jaathi…..

Maan lights band karkke sojaatha……

Aaisa hi ek sojaatha toh dusra bahar kaam kartha hai……

One night……

Geet so rahi hai…

Sonne ki natak kar rahi hai…

Aajkal Maan ke aane se pehle hi Geet sojaathi..…ya phir bahar chale jaathi…….

Warna Maan ko dekhkke kuch toh gadbad karegi….aur MSK se kitna kuch sunna padtha…..

Ye toh Geet ki aadat ho chuki hai…

Lekhin ek nayi pareshaani shuru hui haina, Maan ki tali nazar…

Aajkal Geet ko aaisa gurtha jaise koi nasha chad gaya ho? Pyaar ki nasha…….

Jaise Sonakshi kehthi haina, " Maan ke gussewale aankhon se dar nahi lagtha, par ye pyaaze nazar se toh dar lagtha hai"……

Maan comes….
Geet apne aapse kehthi: aagaye Dust Danav
Maan change karke aatha…

He looks at Geet….

She seems to be sleeping tight….

Maan stops & gazes her…

Geet ka dress improper hai….

Maan toh ek minute dekhte hi rehtha…

Geet could feel it….

Geet: dekhte hai, kya karte?

Maan couldn't control himself……

Maan ka hosh udgaya….he gets closer……sits near her….

Then he thinks….

Hare mein kya karnewala hoon?

Maan, Yaad haina Dadi ne kya kaha?

Geet ke exams hai….ab bechari ko pareshaan karna teek nahi hoga?

Patha nahi aaj bahut jaldhi sogayi…..shayad tired hogi……

College ke kaam ke saath saath Geet hi Neha ko bhi sambalthi haina?

Maan toh bas apna kaam mein busy rehtha….

Koi naya project shuru kar raha hai…..

Bahut badi project hai……

Maan ke pass bhi abhi waqt nahi hai…..

Aur ye Geet ke mann mein kya hai ye toh babaji bhi nahi jaan sakthe

Kahin ye phirse Maan ko galat samajgayi toh…..

Abhi abhi ghar pe thoda shanthi lauti hai….

Maan doesn't want to take any risk……

Bas ek mahinne mein exams katam aur apna romance shuru…haina?

Tab toh Geet ke paas koi excuse nahi hogi, ussko maanna hi padega ki woh bhi MSK ko chahathi hai, aur kitne din aaise bhaagthe rahegi….haina babaji?

Maan usske kapde teek kartha aur jaake sojaatha….

Geet ab ussko bahut disturb karthi….

Chaain se sonne bhi nahi dethi…..

Geet thinks….ye kya kar rahe hai?

Mein kya jaanboochke aaise kar rahi hoon?

Hare ye mujhe kya samaj the?

Mein aaisi ladhki hoon? Dust Danav, hamesha galat hi sochthe,

woh bhi mujhe hi galat samajthe, haina babaji?

Babaji aaj se innse 2 ft dhoor hi rehna padega

Mein bhi Geet Handa hoon…..haina?

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part 30
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Neha is few months right, how come shes talking so nicely?
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@ deepa,
Neha is nearlng 2 years...
Annie was present on her 1st b'day...
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Originally posted by: ghsp2fan

@ deepa,

Neha is nearlng 2 years...
Annie was present on her 1st b'day...



oh ya...forgot...sorry...😆
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Part - 31

Ek raat Maan apne office ka kaam kar raha hai…

Geet ko sona hai….

Ab MSK se kaise kahe ki bahar jaao…..

Geet: aap kaam kar rahe ho?

Maan: nahi, so raha hoon

Geet: mein madat karoon?

Geet ko lagtha kaam jaldhi katam ho toh so skathe, haina?

Kal seminar hai……Geet subhe jaldhi uttkke prepare karegi…..

Geet peeps in….

Maan Geet ko hi dekh raha hai…..

Geet tries to see what Maan is working on…

She bends down…..

As usual she slips & falls on his lap….

She tries to get up & falls over again…

Maan catches hold of her & doesn't allow her to move…

Maneet eyelock…..Mahi….

Geet bhi behgayi…….

Maan lifts her & lays her on the bed…

Geet ka phone bajtha….

Maan hosh mein aatha….

Itne raat ko kaun ho saktha?

Geet gets her phone….it's Pinky…..

Pinky ki bachi mein tere jaise nahi hoon re…meri shadhi ho gayi…..

Ye samjthi hi nahi ki shadhi shuda aurat kitne busy hogi? Haina?

Geet: Pinky, itne raat ko call kyun kiye ho?

Pinky: hare Geet, mujhe ek doubt hai

Geet: itne raat ko?

Pinky: haan

Geet: isske chakkar mein mera doubt aaj bhi clear nahi hua

Pinky: hare Geet, tujhe kya doubt hai? Tu toh sab kuch jaanthi ho

Geet: yeh alag hai, chodo, tu jaldhi bathao, kya problem hai?

Maan: Geeet

Geet: Pinky, MSK shuru ho gaye hai, mein badh mein baat karthi

Pinky: Geet…hare Geet…..halo

Geet: kya baat hai?

Maan: Geet dekho tumne kya kiaya hai?

Geet: babaji ab meinne kya kiya?

Maan: mera laptop kaam nahi kar raha hai

Geet: aapka laptop kaam nahi kartha toh mein kya kar sakthi? Aapka laptop hai, aapkke tarah hi hoga, haina?

Maan: laptop toh mera hai, par tumne hi ussko neeche giradhi

Geet: meinne?

Maan: toh kya meinne ghiradhi?

Geet: meinne ussko chua bhi nahi

Maan: toh ye kaise hua?

Geet: mujhe kya patha?

Maan: toh tumme patha nahi?

Geet: nahi

Maan Geet ke haath pakadke ussko apne paas keenchtha…

Geet pehle jaise Maan ke upar girjaathi….

Maan ke haath se lappy neeche girthi….

Maneet eyelock……Mahi……….

Geet: ye kya kar rahe ho aap?

Maan: ab dekha, tumne kaise lappy ko giradhi?

Geet: kya?

Maan: tumne aaisa hi giraya

Geet: Aapke haath se girgayi toh issme mera kya dosh hai?

Maan: Geeet, ab mein kaise kaam karoon? Jab bhi tum mere saath hothi hamesha aaisa hi hotha

Geet: aapko meinne yahan band ke nahi rakha

Maan: kya?

Geet: aap bahar kyun nahi jaathe ho? Mujhe sona hai

Maan: tum chaho toh tum bahar jao, ye mera kamra hai, haan

Geet: kya? Aapka kamra hai?

Geet pillow aur bedsheet lekhe bahar jaathi….

Maan stops her….

Itne raat ko ye kahan jaa rahi hai…..

Dadi ko pehle hi shak hai, ab Dadi issko dekhthe toh MSK ka izzat ka kya hoga?

Maan: ye kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: ab kya? Ye pillow bhi aapka hai? Ye lo, mujhe nahi chahiye aapka pillow, ye bhi lo

Geet throws them back on the bed….

She is really angry….

She tries to leave…..

Maan catches hold of her ……

Geet: chodo mujhe

Maan: tum kahin nahi jaa sakthi, samji?

Geet: mujhe nahi sona hai,yahan aapkke kamre mein

Maan: Geet, meine gusse mein kehdhi toh tum aaise karogi?

Geet: toh ye bhi meri galthi hai?

Maan: ye ladhki toh mujhe pagal kardegi

So saying Maan leaves……..

Geet: babaji , mere saath hi hamesha aaisa kyun hotha?

Next day…….

Dadi ki tabyat teek nahi hai……

Maan doctor ko kelhe aatha…..

Doctor says that she needs rest…..

Maan ko lagtha shayad Neha ke wajhe se Dadi teek se so nahi payi….

Maan calls Geet……….

Maan: Geeet

Geet Dadi ke liye soup lekhe aathi…..

Geet: aarahi hoona, kyun chilathe ho?

Maan: tum ek choti si bachi ko nahi sambal sakthi?

Geet: aap kya keh rahe hao?

Maan: iss umar mein Dadi ko kyun takleef dethi ho?

Geet: woh meinne kya kiya?

Maan: aaj se Dadi ko koi disturb nahi karega, Neha bhi nahi, samji

Geet: haan haan, humme bhi sab patha hai

Maan: kya?

Geet: kuch nahi, aap Dadi ki fikar mat kijiye, mein unko sambaloongi

Geet ko lagtha ye bhi sahi hai….

Neha toh jaldh hi sojaathi……Geet ko koi problem nahi hai….

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