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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome parts..
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Part – 59

One day….

Adi, Pinky, Pinky's mom and papaji Sneha ko dekhne aatha hai……

Geet is happy to see them….

Meera bhi hothi toh kitna achcha hoga?

Par Suresh has got a job in Australia and Meera is now there……

Pinky: Geet, toh tum bhi maa ban gayi? Mujhe toh bahut dar lagtha

Geet: Pinky tum kaisi ho?

Adi: ye toh waise hi hai, dekho ab kitna moti ho gayi

Pinky: hare, abhi toh sare ladhkiyaan moti ho jaathi hai

Geet: sachi? Pinky tu bhi?

Pinky: haan Geet….Pinky sharmathi…..

Geet: bas ab Meera hi bakhi hai

Pinky: meinne suna woh log bhi koshish kar rahe hai

Geet: achcha? toh Meera bhi maa banna chahathi hai?

Pinky: haan, pehle kehthi thi abhi nahi, ye toh enjoy karne ka umar hai

Geet: lekhin bachon ke saath khelne ka maaza hi kuch aur hai

Pinky: tum toh aaise hi ho, jab dekho Neha ke saath khelthi rehthi thi, Annie toh hamesha kehthi thi ki tujhe bhi jaldhi shadhi karna chahiye aur maa banna chahiye, ab dekho tumne Maan bhai se shadhi bhi karli aur unnkke bache ki maa bhi bangayi, aaj Annie hothi toh kitne kush hothi?

Pinky's mom: Pinky toh tum Geet ko rhulanne hi aayi ho toh chalo, hum chalthe hai

Adi: haan, ye toh bikul bhudoo hai, hamesha aaisa hi bak bak karthi rehthi, bina kuch soche samje

Geet: Adi, ussko bolnne do, mein bhi hamesha aaisa hi sochthi aur apne mann ki baat ko kissi ke saath share bhi nahi kar payi, Maan se toh ye batein karna bahut mushkil hotha

Adi: haan Geet, ye baat toh tum unsse kaise kar sakthi?

Pinky: sorry Geet, mujhe maaf kardo, mujhe bhi ye baat nahi karni chahiye

Geet: kyun nahi karni? Tumse ye baat nahi karthi toh kisse karthi?

Pinky: Geet?

Geet: waise tumse aaise batein karkke mujhe bahut achcha laga

Neha bhi aajaathi……

Pinky: Neha, hare hummari Neha kitni badi ho gayi?

Neha: haan, ab mein school bhi jaathi

Adi: very good

Pinky's mom has got the baby in her lap….Neha keeps looking at her….

Neha: maa ye hummari princess hai, innke paas kyun hai?

Geet: hare ye toh princess ko wish karne aaye hai

Mr. Handa bhi Hoshiarpur se Adi ke saath lautkke aaye hai…..

Mr.Handa: Neha yahan aao, dekho humne aap ke liye kya laya hai?

Neha: naanu

Neha goes and hugs him…..he has got her laddu….she loves those laddus made by Geet's bhuaji…

Geet: Neha aap jaakke nahalo

Neha: nahi mein princess ke paas hi rahoongi

Neha ko lagtha hai ki ye log princess ko apne saath lekhe jaayenge……

Pinky's mom: hum sab haina tummari pari ke saath

Neha: issiliye toh mein ussko chodkke nahi jaa sakthi

Geet: Neha, papa aathe toh dhaantenge

Mr.Handa: Geet, kyun bachi ko darathi ho? Neha beti,aap badh mein nahalena

Neha: ji naanu

Geet: aap aagaye haina? Ab ye meri koi bhi baat nahi manegi

Pinky's mom: Geet, teri beti toh bilkul teri jaise hi hai, wahi aakhen aur dekho hasthi toh bilkul nanni Geet ko yaad dilathi

Ranno: haan, ye toh mujhe hamesha Geet ki bachpan ki yaad dilathi, usski harkat bhi Geet jaise hi hai, bahut badhmaash hai

Pinky: haan Geet, ye bilkul tummari tarah hi dikhthi

Neha: mein aapkke jaise kyun nahi hoon?

There is silence for a moment…..isska kya jawab demge?

Magar aaj toh Ranno ne pehle bar samajdari se baat ki…..

Ranno:Neha toh bilkul apne papa ki tarah hai, haina Geet?

Geet: haan maa, bilkul Maan ki tarah, wahi gussa, wahi attitude aur sawaal bhi unkke jaise hi karthi rehthi hai

Mr.Handa: Neha, Geet ko dekho jaise bilkul mere jaise hi hai, sundar, suisheel aur samajdar

Neha: lekhin mein maa ki jaise kyun nahi hoon?

Mr.Handa: hare hamesha pehle bache papa ki tarah hi hothe hai, jaise Geet hai, achcha hua Geet mere jaisi hai, warna socho ye tummari naani ki tarah hothi toh tummare papa issko dekhthe hi bhaag jaathe

Neha: aap naani ko dekhkke kyun nahi bhaage?

Mr.Handa: hummare jamaane mein shadhi ke pehle ladka ladki se nahi mil saktha, kash mein ek bar isse mil patha , mein toh ussi waqt kahin dhoor bhaag jaatha

Ranno: bachon ko apni bhuri kahaaniyan mat sunao

Neha: joot, naanu aap joot bol rahe ho

Mr.Handa: kya?

Neha: haan mujhe patha hai ki aap naani se milne chor ki tarah deewar pe chadkke gaye aur ghir gaye ho, issiliye aapki haath aaisa hai

Neha shows his slightly tilted left hand….

Ranno ne Neha ko bedtime stories mein apni stories ko bhi kehdhi…..

Geet: maa, ye toh mujhe bhi nahi patha tha

Ranno: hare ye ladhki har din mujhse kahaaniyan sunthi rehthi haina?

Mr.Handa: toh tum ussko aaise kahaaniyan sunathi ho?

Neha: naanu naani bahut achche kahaaniyan sunathi, Geet ki stories, hoshiarpur wali stories

Geet: kya? Maa tune mere barein mein kya kya kaha?

Ranno: kuch nahi Geet, tum bachpan mein tummari school se har rang ke chalk piece churakke aathi thina?

Geet: kya? Maa , ye kissne kaha?

Mr.Handa: haan Geet, tab toh tum bahut choti thi

Geet: aaj se Neha ko tujhse dhoor hi rakhna padega

Pinky: hare Geet patha hai kaise tumne ek din uss ladhkke ko tappad mara tha?

Neha: haan, jab ussne aapki khaane ko break mein khaaliya tha,aur aapko bahut bhook laga, haina?

Pinky: haan wahi, toh tum sab jaanthi ho?

Geet:maaa

Ranno: ye Geet ko kya ho gaya?

That night…..

Geet: Maan aaj Pinky aayi thi

Maan: haan,Adi ne mujhe call kiya tha, mein noida mein koi zaroori kaam mein fusgaya tha, issiliye nahi aapaya

Geet: woh baat nahi hai

Maan: phir kya baat hai?

Geet: kuch nahi, aap sojao

Maan: aaise kaise so saktha? Tum mujhse kuch kehna chahathi ho, haina?

Geet: nahi, bas yuhi kuch bolna chahathi thi, haan Pinky bhi pregnanat hai

Maan: Geet tum mujhse kuch chupa rahi ho

Geet: nahi

Maan: Geet mere aankon mein dekhkke kaho

Geet raises her head…..she is in tears…..

Maan: toh pinky ne tujhe Annie ki yaad diladhi?

Geet: Maan?

Maan: mujhe bhi Annie ki bahut yaad aathi hai Geet, jab hummari shadhi hui thi, aur tummari godh barayi ke samay aur abhi tummari delivery ka waqt, aur jab bhi Neha ko dekhtha hoon

Geet: mujhe bhi usski bahut yaad aathi hai, bas aapse kehnahi payi

Maan: tumme kuch bhi kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai Geet, ye toh hum donno hi jaanthe hai ki Annie ko bhoolna namunkhin hai, phir usske yaadon se kyun darna? Bas Neha ke samne usski baat nahi kar sakthe

Geet: Maa, mujhe laga aap Annie ko bhool gaye ho

Maan: kaise bhool saktha hoon Geet? tum toh bas ussko theen saal se jaanthi, mere barein mein socho Geet

Geet: Maan

Geet hugs him tight and tries to console him…..

Kabhi kabhi Maan ko lagtha ki Geet usski biwi nahi maa hai……aaj Maan ki maa hothi toh shayad Maan ko Geet ki saath ki itni zaroorat nahi padthi?

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Posted: 12 years ago

me first yeppy !!!!!!!!!

awesome update
loved it

n d picture at d end aww me going faint seeing it
Edited by mounacuty - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 56
awesome...
glad Neha is fine...
poro Geet...
Maan how could u...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 57
awesome...
Geet should have taken a good class for him...
lovely part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 58
awesome...
lovely moments...

PS - sorry for the late replies dear...time hi nahi mili...but thanks a lot for bringing up Raj here...

PSS - whats ur name?
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 59
awesome...
yeh Pinky bhi na...
hope Neha doesnt come to know about this in the hard way...
cont soon dear...


tooo busy...😉 - no dear...was postponing to read at the end...this is happy one na thats why...

missing Ur comments...😲 - me too...
looking for a new face for Maan's friend...
thought of U and remembered Raj
I too like him but came to know only from LRL... - thanks dear...loved it so much...i too came to know about him from LRL only later saw KTH and got stuck up with it...

Edited by spvd - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
@deepa woh kya haina ki tummari aur dona ki prompt responses ki itni aadat padgayi ki unkke bina update karne ka mann hi nahi kartha! Swabi ka emoticons are like bonus 😃 😃
thank you all for ur cmts 😊
Edited by ghsp2fan - 12 years ago
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Part – 60

The following week……

Geet aur Neha Maan ke liye wait kar rahe hai……

Maan has promised to take them out today……

Maan is a little late as usual….

Geet ko ye baat ki aadat ho gayi aur woh aaram se tayaar ho rahi hai…

Par Neha is not used to it….actually Neha ko Maan itna wait nahi karwatha….

Neha calls him…..

Maan: tum log shopping mall aajao, mein bhi dus minute mein wahan pohunchjaaoonga

Neha: Geet, jaldhi karo papa aagaye

Geet is not yet ready….

Geet: hare, woh aagaye? par kahan?

Neha: papa yahan nahi aayenge, chalo hum chalthe hai

Geet: teek hai, unke liye wait karthe toh hum bhi nahi jaa sakthe

They go to the mall…..

Maan has already got there…..

Maan: Geet tumlog itne dher kyun lagaye?

Geet: kya? Hum late hai, ha ha ha aap toh bahut jaldhi aagaye haina?

Maan: haan mein paanch minute se wait kar raha hoon

Geet: paanch minute, hare babaji, hum kaise mr. MSK ko paanch minute wait karwa sakthe? Maan, aap bas paanch minute wait nahi kar sakthe? Hum toh kitne bar ganton aapke intrezaar karthe rehthe the?

Maan: ab kal hi Neha ke liye tumne naye kapde kareedha tha, ab aaj woh kya purane ho gaye hai?

Geet: Maan, aap MSK ho har din kya har gante aapkke beti ke liye naye kapde kareedh sakthe, samje?

Maan: aaise hi chaltha toh MSK ek din pagal hokke sadak mein gooomega, haina babaji?

Geet: Maan agle hafte Neha ke school mein fancy dress competition hai

Neha: haan papa, aap bhi aao

Maan: of course, hummare Neha ko kaunsa dress chahiye? Aap ye lelo, aur ye bhi

Geet: dekho beti ko dekhthe hi shuru ho gaye, babaji mein bhi dekhthi hoon ki ye donno itne sare kapde kyun lethe hai? mujhe toh lagtha humme KC chodkke kapdon ka dhookaan kolne chahiye, ghar ko toh inhonne godown banadhi

Maan: Geet wahan kya kar rahi ho? Dekho ye kitna cute hai?

Geet: Maan, hum yahan pura dhukaan khreedhne nahi aaye

Maan: Geet tumme kaunsa dress pasand hai? woh bhi lethe hai

Geet: Maan ye laal dress bahut sundar hai

Maan: kya? Meri betei ko tum danger light banadoge?

Geet: toh ye hara suit lethe hai

Maan: Geet tumme ye pasand hai?

Neha: Geet, ye princess ke liye lethe hai

Geet: haan, ye bahut achcha hai

Maan picks up a white gown for Neha…..

Neha: papa ye bahut ahcha hai

Geet: ye, Maan aapko har waqt safed hi pasand aatha

Maan: haan Geet, mujhe toh safed hi pasand hai, tum kaho tumme kaunsa rang pasand hai?

Geet: mujhe toh blue pasand hai

Maan: kal toh tujhe laa pasand tha, aur usske pehle pheela

Geet: Maan, har din naya hotha haina? Issiliye humme bhi har din ko naye andaz se jeena chahiye

Maan: tum jaise bhi jeelo, magar humme toh yahi pasand hai, iss dress mein Neha Pari lagegi

Neha: haan papa, choti princess hai toh mein Angel hoon, haina?

Maan: haan meri pyaari Pari

Geet: pyaari pari? Ye toh kahin suna hai meinne? Kya? Pari?

Maan: haan Geet, dekho hummari pari kitni sundar lagthi?

Geet: wow, Neha toh bilkul Angel lagthi

Neha: toh mujhe yahi chahiye

Geet: par babaji, aapko nahi lagtha ye Maan kuch zyada hi pari pari karne lage?

Maan:Geet kisse baat kar rahi ho? Chalo chalthe hai, pari ko ice cream khana hai

Geet: pari?

Maan: hare Neha ko

Geet: babaji, zaroor kuch gadbad hai

Maan accompanies Neha to the school for the function…..

Sneha ki tabyath achnak karaab ho gayi toh Geet ko usske paas rukhna pada….

Par Maan kept her updated and sent her Neha's photos and video whish Geet enjoyed watching at home….

Neha ko pretty Angel ka tittle milla aur ek choti crown bhi milli….

Actually they had rewarded every child with diff tittles to suit their dress, jaise snow white, chindrella, Barbie girl, princess, etc.

Neha is very happy and she wanted her little sister to come with her….

Geet promised to take her to Neha's school next time as she is not well this time…..

Ghar aathe hi Neha heads straight to baby's room…..

Geet: hare, toh tum Pretty Angel ho? Kitna cute crown hai, bahut pyaara hai, Neha ye aakke haath mein kya hai, mujhe dikhao

Neha: nahi ye toh meri princess ka hai

Maan: Geet, ye toh Neha ne specially apne princess ke liye laya hai

Geet: par ye aapko kahan milli?

Maan: ye bhi Neha ki teacher ne hi diya hai, achcha hua unkke paas ek do crowns extra tha, warna mujhe aaj pura mall doondhna padtha, Neha toh ye crown ke bina aathi hi nahi

Geet: achcha, meri bachi kitna smart ho gayi?

Maan: lekhin Geet, mujhe lagtha ye thoda zyada hi ziddi ho gayi hai

Geet: Maan aap hamesha hummari galthiyaan doondhthe rahthe ho, haina babaji?

Maan: tum toh mere har baat se problem hotha hai

Geet: maan, woh sab chodo aur humme ek snap lo

Maan: Geet sach kahoon toh tum bhi pari se kuch kam nahi lagthi

Geet: phir se pari? Maaan

Maan: Geet aaj toh tum bahut hot lag rahi ho

Geet: hare Maan, bachon ke samne?

Maan: toh chalo mere saath

Geet: Maan?

Dadi: hare, hummari Angel aagayi

Dadi just comes to see Neha…..

Maan signals Geet to comewith him…..

Geet: Maan, aap jao

Maan: Geet, woh mera watch ko tumne kahin dekha?

Maan hurriedly removes his watch and hides it…..

Geet: Maan?

Dadi: hare Geet bete, hum haina, aap jao

Dadi smiles…….ye Maan toh aajkal bahut shaitan ho gaye hai

Geet leaves…..nakli gussa karthi magar Geet ko bhi aaise sharaarat pasand haina?

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 60
nice update..
cute neha
naughty maan...

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