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Posted: 12 years ago
part 49
nice part...
wow Chef Maan...
cont soon dear...

PS - this Ff is full of love and positivity so no Sameera or evil characters dear...but go on with this...post pregnancy and baby and Neha's bonding and fights and also include Geet's mood swings...
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Posted: 12 years ago
thamk you Swabi, Deepa and Dona
will continue with Maneet and Neha baby moments
I too don't believe in -ve chars
just thought of Sameera being a cousin sister of Arjun coming to know about Neha and her short term bonding with Neha, Geet fearing Neha's loss ,maybe some jealousy as sameera keeps admiring Maan and talks to Geet about getting a husband like Maan for her too, Maan to the rescue, Neha's love for Geet amd finally Sameera herself accepting Geet as the best blessing that Neha has got
will update in a short while
need some time to rethink
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Part – 50

Delivery ka samay pass aatha….

Maan tries to avoid leaving Geet alone…..

Ranno aur Mr.Handa bhi aagaye hai….

Geet bahut confident hai…….Maan paas haina?

Lekhin Maan bahut pareshaan hai….

Annie ke delivery ka samay bhi aaisa hi tha…..

Geet Maan ko aaise chote bache ki tarah gabrathe hue dekhke surprise hothi…

Kya yahi Maan Singh Khurana hai?...The MSK …….

Maan ek aur loss ko bardaast nahi kar saktha…..

Pehle hi Annie ko kho gaya…aur abhi abhi uss taregdy se bahar aaya haina?

He is not going to take any risk….

Doctors want to wait for a normal delivery….

But Maan insists that they go on with a ceasarian….

Ranno bhi chahathi hai ki normal hi ho…..Geet ko thoda takleef kam hoga…

Dadi asks him to wait for a while….

Maan is not listening….doctors ko operate karna hi pada…..

That was the right decision as there were some complications….

Maan Geet ka conscience gain karne tak chain se saans bhi nahi le paya….

Woh teek se baby ko bhi nahi dekhtha…..

It's only when Geet comes back to her senses & asks him about the baby that he takes the baby & admires her along with Geet….yes it's a baby girl…..

Maan : Geet bahut dard hotha hai kya?

Geet: nahi

Geet tries to hide her pain…..

Maan: Geet mujhe patha hai , meinne Annie ko dekha tha, woh bhi aaise hi apne dard ko chupathi thakki mein aur Dadi pareshaan na ho

Geet: Maan aap paas ho toh hummare dard bhi humme takleef nahi de saktha

Maan: teek hai tum sojao

Geet: Neha kahan hai?

Maan: woh Dadi ke saath ghar chali gayi

Geet: lekhin woh toh apne chotu ko dekhe bina kaise jaa sakthi? Aapne ussko zabardasthi yahan se bejha haina? Aapne meri bachi ko phir se ruladhi?

Maan: Geet Neha apne chotu ko dekhne ke baad hi yahan se nikhli, woh bhi tumaare tarah bahut ziddi ho gayi hai, Geet tumne ussko bahut bigadkke rakha

Geet: Maan woh abhi bachi hai

Maan: Geet ab woh badi behen ho gayi hai

Geet: lekin mere liye abhi bhi woh choti bachi hi hai

Maan: ab ek aur bachi aagayi toh ussko humme hi sharing aur caring sikhana hoga

Geet: aapko fikar karne ki zaroorat nahi, meri beti bahut samajdhar hai, ussko sab patha hai

Maan: Geet aaise hi sochkke tum ussko koi bhi baat ko samjnne nahi dethi

Geet: ye Ranno kahan hai?

Maan: Geet, tum abhi bachi nahi ho, tumme dekhthe hi Neha bhi sabko naam lekhe pukarthi

Geet: achcha pathidevji, maa kahan hai?

Maan: sab ghar chale gaye

Geet: kya? Ghar pe aaram karne hi woh Hoshiarpur se aayi thi?

Maan: Geet, meinne hi sabko ghar bhejdhiya, thoda aaram karenge toh hi subha tum donno ka teek se dekhbal kar sakthe, haina?

Geet: meinne socha aap apne mishty ke saath akhele rehna chahathe ho, lekhin babaji ye toh kal KC jaane ki tayaari mein hai, haina?

Maan: hare babaji, biwioon ko sambalna toh mushkil hi nahi, namunkeen hai

Geet: Mr. Don Singh Khurana, babaji se kya baat kar rahe ho? Seedha mujhse baat karo

Maan: Geet , tum sojao, baby utegi toh tumme sone nahi degi

Geet: par mujhe neendh nahi aathi

Maan: kyun Geet? Bahut dukhtha hai? mein sister ko bhulaoon kya?

Geet: nahi nahi

Maan Geet ke paas jakke leitjaatha

Maan: aankhen band karo aur needh apne aap aajayegi

Maan bhi bahut tak gaya toh donno sojaathe…..

Early morning sister comes to check…..

Sister wakes Geet….

Maan is fast asleep….

Geet tries to wake him up…..

Geet: Maan…..Maan

Sister: sshhh sonedijiye, ye toh do din se soye hi nahi honge

Geet smiles….

Sister Geet ko injection lagakke baby ko Geet ke paas lekhe dethi…..to feed…..

Baby cries….Maan wakes up….

Maan feels embarrassed…..sister kab aayi?

Maan: Geet mujhe utaya kyun nahi?

Maan thoda naraaz hai…..

Sister smiles and leaves…..

Geet: Maan meinne nahi utaya toh kya hua? Ab toh ye aapki nayi alarm haina aapko utanewali

Maan looks at the baby……he helps Geet …….

Ranno bhi aajaathi……

Geet: Maan ab aap ghar jao

Maan: teek hai Geet, koi bhi problem ho toh mujhe call karo

Ranno: hare damadji aap itna kyun pareshaan hothe ho? hum sab haina

Geet smiles hearing Ranno tease Maan…….

Maan: haan haan meinne dekha aap apne beti ki kitna khyaal rakhthe

Maan reminds about Ranno's frequent naps…..

Ranno: aaj se dekho, mein kaise Geet aur bachi ka khyaal rakhthi

Maan: Geet tum bhi inkke tarah soo na jao, take care

Maan leaves……

Geet: maa, Neha tayaar ho agyi kya?

Ranno: haan, who abhi aathi hogi, Dadima ke saath

Geet: kya? Ussko school nahi jaana?

Ranno: Geet aaj woh apne baby behen ko chodkke school kaise jaayegi?

Geet: par meinne kaha tha ki school jaana hai

Ranno: patha hai, meinne hi ussko chute lene ko kaha, ab woh bas play school jaa rahi hai

Geet: haan, ye Maan bhi na, bachi ko discipline sikhane ki chakkar mein bahut sathathe hai

Tabbi Maan calls Geet….

Maan: Geet ye Neha ko dekho, school nahi jaa rahi hai

Geet: Maan, kam se kam aaj toh ussko chodtho

Maan: lekhin Geet…….

Neha snatches the phone from Maan…..

Neha: Geet, baby kya kar raha hai?

Geet: tum hi aakke dekho, woh apne behen ko bhula rahi hai

Neha laughs….Maan ab indonno ke beech fusna nahi chahatha….

Maan: Neha, this is the last time, kal tumme zaroor school jaana hoga

Neha: teek hai

Neha goes to her room to get ready…..chotu(baby boy?) intrezaar kar raha hoga, haina?

Maan follows her to help her bath……ab toh ye papa ka duty haina?

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Posted: 12 years ago
yeppy me first !!!!!!!🥳🥳 loved da update aww soo emotional one
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Originally posted by: ghsp2fan

thamk you Swabi, Deepa and Dona

will continue with Maneet and Neha baby moments
I too don't believe in -ve chars
just thought of Sameera being a cousin sister of Arjun coming to know about Neha and her short term bonding with Neha, Geet fearing Neha's loss ,maybe some jealousy as sameera keeps admiring Maan and talks to Geet about getting a husband like Maan for her too, Maan to the rescue, Neha's love for Geet amd finally Sameera herself accepting Geet as the best blessing that Neha has got
will update in a short while
need some time to rethink




go as per ur plan

but kya haina ki sameera ki naam sunte hi negative feelings ajaati hai😆



lovely update but... i was expecting a baby boy😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part – 51

Maan comes to drop Dadi and Neha at the hospital…..

Neha has got a lot of candies with her…….

Dadi: hare Neha bte, itne candies, aap akele kaoge? Humme nahi denge?

Neha: nahi, ye chotu ke liye hai

Dadi laughs…..

Dadi: par ab woh kaise candy kha sakthi?

Neha: kyun nahi kha saktha?

Dadi: abhi usskee daanth nahi hiana?

Neha: daandh nahi hai? toh papa ussko bhi Dadi ki tarah nakli daandh lakhe do

Maan laughs: Dadi isske saath baat karthe toh aap bach nahi payenge, apni maa ki tarah bahut batein karthi hai

Neha: papa, jaldhi chalo, baad mein baat karna

Now dadi's turn to laugh at Maan……

At the hospital……

Geet: Neha yahan aayiye

Geet has got the baby on her lap….

Neha goes and sits on the bed beside Geet……

She is very happy to see the baby awake……

Nahe: mama chotu bahut bada ho gaya, kal kitna chota tha

Geet: achcha, ek din mein itna badi ho gayi hai aapki behen

Neha is not happy to hear this……

Geet has been telling her that it's going to be a baby boy…..

Neha was expecting a little brother……

Neha: Geet, ye boy hai, badi ho gayi nahi bada ho gaya hai

Neha laughs at Geet's mistake….

Geet: nahi bte, ye boy nahi girl hai

Neha doesn't like that……

Neha: nahi, ye mera chotu hai

Maan: Neha, ye bhi aapki tarah ek choti pari hi hai

Neha: nahi, mujhe mera chotu chahiye

Neha starts to cry……

Geet: Neha, yahi chotu hai

Neha: nahi

Ranno take s Neha out and tries to console her……Mr.Handa bhi saath chalthe…..

Dadi takes the baby from Geet and puts her on the cradle…….

Geet: Maan ye Neha ko kya ho gaya?

Maan: mujhe kyun pooch rahi hai? tumne hi usse galat samjadiya ki ye chotu hai, nanna MSK hai, ye hai, woh hai, ek bar bhi socha nahi ki ye ladhki bhi ho sakthi hai

Geet: toh ye meri galthi hai? kissne roz chotu ke awaaz mein Neha ke saath baatein kiya? Who bhi meinne, haina?

Dadi: tum donno bachon ke tarah ladhna kab chodoge? Hare babaji ab hum innkko sambalein ya ye bachi ko ya phir Neha ko?

Maan: mein Neha ko lekhe aatha hoon

Maan tells her that it's a girl and not a boy……

Neha: mama aap ne kaha aapkke tummy mein chotu hai?

Geet: haan bte, par babaji ne socha ki hummari princess ki tarah ye bhi ek princess ho jo Neha ko bahut pyaar karegi, ye toh aapki apni princess hai, dekho kaise ye aapki tarah hi dikhthi

Neha: ye meri princess hai?

Geet: haan, ye aapki princess hai

Neha goes and touches the baby's fingers…..

Geet: aapki tarah bahut cute haina?

Neha: haan, par chotu kahan gaya?

Geet: chotu?

Neha: haan, mere friend paayal ke ghar mein chotu aaya hai

Geet: agle bar hummare ghar mein bhi chotu aayega

Maan: Geet, bachon ko joote umeed nahi dethe

Geet: toh aapko agla bacha nahi chahiye?

Maan gets closer……

Maan: aaise baat nahi, lekhin agla bhi princess hoga toh?

Geet: toh kya? Agla try karenge , haina?

Maan: Geet tum bahut greedy ho

Geet: achcha, toh teek hai, aap mujhse dhoor hi raho

Maan: haan, kuch din ke liye toh tumse dhoor hi rhena padega,haina princess?

Maan looks at the baby…..

Neha: hare baby, tum fikar mat karo, ye aaise hi hai, mein hoona tere paas

Geet: dekho Maan, Neha kitne responsible ho gayi

Maan: haan Geet, ab kissi na kissi ko toh baby ka dhyaan rakhna chahiye haina jab mein paas nahi hotha

Geet: matlab sirf aap donno responsible ho, mein nahi?

Neha laughs……

Maan: Geet, ye bhi koi poochne ki baat hai

Geet: Maan

Maan: dekho tumne baby ko kaise khula chodthiya hai? woh towel do

Maan covers the baby……

Neha goes and lies down with Geet….

Maan: teek hai, tum donno sojao, mein shaamko aatha hoon

Dadi and Ranno come…..

Dadi: Maan bte,Neha ko aapne samjadhi?

Maan: haan Dadi, ab woh aaplogon ko pareshaan nahi karegi, haina Neha?

Naha: haan papa

Maan: bye Neha

Neha: papa baby ke liye toys lekhe aana

Geet: baby ke liye?

Neha: haan, ab hum bade ho gaye haina? Humme toys nahi chahiye

Dadi: wow Neha, aap sach mein badi ho gayi hai, toh ye teddy hum aapki naani ko dethe hai

Neha: nahi, ye mera hai

Neha comes and snatches it from dadi's hand….

Everyone laughs…….

that night too Maan comes and stays with his mishty...
Maan ki night duty ab hospital mein hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 50
awesome...
Geet bhi na...
she calls her mom by her name and likewise Neha too...
Maan has 2 devils in his life...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 51
lovely part...
these 2 will never grow up...
but Neha has understood...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part – 52

Geet comes home……Geet is very happy to be back from the hospital……

Maan leaves his room for the baby and he shifts to Neha's room…..

But Neha wants the baby to stay with her…..

Neha: paap aap apne kamre mein jao, ye bachon ka room hai

So saying Neha runs to see Geet…….

Maan: Neha, dhere chalo, kahin ghir jaayegi

Neha: maa

Geet: Neha aap ab tak soye nahi

Neha: babu soo gayi?

Geet: haan

Neha: ye toh bahut lazy hai, har waqt sothi rehthi

Maan bhi aagaya……

Maan: Neha chalo, mummy ko disturb mat kaor, hum chalte hai

Neha: nahi baby bhi mere saath soyegi, haina maa?

Geet: Maan aap jao, Neha ko yahi sonne do

Maan: lekhin Geet, tumme bhi aaram karna haina?

Geet: hare aap jao….Geet winks…..

Neha Geet ke paas leitkke sojaathi….

Subhe se baby ke paas beitkke usske jagne ki intrezaar kargayi thi toh ab bahut tak gayi hai….

Maan comes and takes Neha with him…..

Geet: sambalkke

Maan: goodnight Geet, sojao

Geet :gud night

Tabbi baby cries…..

Maan stops …..

Geet:hare aap jao, warna Neha utjaayegi

Maan: lekhin Geet tum akhele kaise sambaloge?

Geet: maa haina

Ranno just wakes up hearing baby's cry…..

Ranno comes and helps Geet change the nappy and gives the baby to Geet…..

Next morning Maan wakes up and finds Neha missing…..

Maan: hare Neha tum itne jaldhi utgayi?

Maan goes and checks the washroom….

Neha wahan nahi hai…..

Maan goes to check Geet's room……

Maan: Geet

Geet: ssshhh Neha so rahi hai

Maan: lekhin woh toh mere paas thi, yahan kab aayi?

Geet: abhi dus minute pehle, baby ko gud morning kehne aayi thi aur yahi sogayi

Maan comes and finds her sleeping with the baby holding baby's hand….

Ranno: Geet mein tere liye horlicks lekhe aathi hoon

Ranno leaves…..

Maan comes and sits near Geet…..

Geet rests her head on his lap….

Geet: Maan dekho donno kaise haath pakdkke so rahe hai?

Maan: haan, Neha ab apni princess ko chodkke ek minute bhi nahi rahegi

Geet: haan, jaise aap aur Annie the

Maan: haan Geet

Geet: Maan aap aaj office mat jao

Maan: kya? Par aaj mujhe Mr.sharma ke saath meeting hai

Geet: Maan, aaj mujhe kuch teek nahi lagtha, aap mere paas hi raho

Maan : teek hai, mein Adi ko inform kartha hoon ki woh ghar aaye

Geet ko raat bar needh hi nahi aayi….

Ab Maan paas hai toh Geet bhi sojaathi……

Ranno: Geet

Maan: Geet sogayi hai, aap jayiye, mein Geet ke paas rehtha hoon

Aaise hi har dusre din Maan aur Neha chuti lekhe baby ke paas hi rukhjaathe…..

Ab baby ko kya naam denge?

Maan has made a list of his favourite names…..

He shows it to Geet….

Neha bhi saath hai….

Geet reads out the names…….

Geet: heera

Maan: haan, ye toh diamond ki tarah unmol haina?

Geet: kya naam hai? heera mothi, Maan ye bachi hai, navrathan nahi

Neha: haan ye achcha nahi hai

Geet: Tara

Neha: kya papa? Badi hogi toh sab twinkle twinkle little star gaayenge

Geet: haan Neha, tumne sahi kaha, ye toh bahut purana naam hai

Maan: ab tum log hi bolo kya naam pasand hai

Geet looks at Neha…

They have already decided the name…..

Neha: mein Neha hoon toh ye Sneha hai

Maan: toh tum logon ne pehle hi faisla kar diya hai?

Geet: haan, aapko pasand haina?

Maan: ab tumne decide kar hi liya toh mujhe kyun pooch rahi ho?

Geet: Maan?

Neha: papa aapne kaha aapko bhi bahut pasand hai?

Geet: kya? Aap pehle hi jaanthe ho?

Maan: haan Geet, Neha ne kal hi mujhe bathadhi

Geet: Neha?

Neha: sorry mama

Maan: Geet ye baat bathane ke liye Neha ne dus dus bar chocolates leli

Geet: Maan aapne bachi ko rishwat dhi? Ye bahut bhuri baat hai

Maan: jab tum ice cream khilakke mere secrets Neha se bhulwathi toh usska kya kehthe?

Geet: job hi ho, ye aapne teek nahi kiya

Maan: Neha tum hi bathao, meinne kya galthi khi?

Neha: nahi papa, aap hamesha sahi ho

Geet: papa ki bachi, tujhe toh mein

Geet chases Neha…

Neha goes and hides behind Maan…..

Maan catches hold of Geet and pulls her closer……

Geet tries to reach Neha ….…Maneet passionate hug…..mahi…..

baby ki namkaran bhi ho jaatha...
Geet bahut busy hai...
lekhin Maan apne mishty ke saath jaisa bhi mahi mahi ka waqt doondh hi letha...
Dadi is happy to see them as a happy family...
Neha is still calling her little sister princess...
for her she is always going to the princess...
maybe till she gets a prince...
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Part – 53

Neha spends her time with Sneha ….

Geet sneha ko nahaathi toh Neha bhi paas beitkke Geet ko help karthi….

She helps Geet to dress her up and she even knows that she needs Geet when she starts crying….

Geet Neha ko usski bachpan ki kahaaniyaan sunathi without Annie and Arjun……

Kaise Neha aksar rothi aur jab bhi Maan ke gusse wale chehra dekhthi toh darkke chup ho jaathi….

Annie used this treatment to control Neha when she starts crying uncontrollably …..

Whenever Maan goes out of station Annie would show the recorded video of Maan and Neha would keep quiet immediately……

Arjun used to call Maan "Monster mamu"…….

Annie would get angry and frighten to tell this to Maan , and Arjun would say that even he is afraid of Monster mamu…….

Geet wonders how later Maan has mellowed down so much and turned into a pyaare papa for Neha…..

Nowadays Neha has become Maan's pet but still he would never let her spoiled by his love….

It's Geet who usally gets carried away by Neha's tantrums and spoils her a lot……

Dadi keeps warning Geet that this is not a good habit…..

Geet believes that she will learn to adjust as she grows up….

After all she too was spoiled by Mr.Handa's love and affection as a child….

See how she has grown up into a nice women?

Or it's Maan's turn to look after her instead of Mr.Handa…..

She has become so dependent on Maan these days that she keeps calling him for petty reasons….

"Maan, Neha ab tak school se nahi lauti"

"Geet,aaj mein hi Neha ko pick up karne gaya, hum aathe hi hai, bas sabkko ice crean lene mein dher ho gayi"

"Maan Sneha bahut ro rahi hai, aap jaldhi aao, muhje bahut dar lagtha"

By the time Maan comes home rushing Ranno would have put Sneha to sleep…..

Maan had to console his mishty……it's Geet who needs him more than Sneha….

Geet kabhi kabhi bahut upset ho jaathi due to the stress…..

At those moments she would break down and Ranno would immediately call Maan…..

Neha aur Sneha ko toh Ranno hi sambal sakthi, lekhin iss badi bachi ko toh apne Maan hi sambal patha….

Kabhi pyaar se ya kabhi darrakke ya kabhi gussa karkke….

Har haal ka solution Maan ke pass hai……..

All these days Maan had put off his work aside and stayed with Geet …….

Now the business needs MSK….

He had to go to Delhi to finalise a mega project that he had been working on for more than a year….

Adi used to meet the clients all these days but the clients want to meet Maan personally….

They belive it's always good to have MSK and that's why they come to KC….

Just for Maan's special care ,his working stlye and innovative ideas which would be possible only when he spends some time at the sight….

Adi informs Maan about the client's wish….

Maan knows very well that Geet would never let him go…..

KC se aathe hi Maan Geet ko doondhtha...
aaj toh Geet apne busy schedule se waqt lekhe Maan ke liye pasta bana rahi hai...
Maan peeps in the kitchen...
Maan thinks that this is not the right time...
Geet: Maan, aaj aap jaldhi aagaye?
Maan: Geet tumme ye sab karne ki kya zaroorat hai? Nakul haina?
Geet: babaji mein apne kitchen mein khana bhi nahi paka sakthi? inkko mere har kaam se problem hai, haina?
Maan: iss baat ko yahi katam kartha hoon, ye toh har waqt mujhse ladne ki bahaane doondh ke rehthi
Maan keeps thinking about convincing Geet……

"babaji ab toh aap hi mere madat kar sakthe, ye aapki ladli na mujhe chaain se rehne dethi aur na hi aapko, aap jaanthe haina kaise subhe se shaam tak so bar babaji ya MSK ko bhulakke rehthi? Ab toh Sneha bhi aagayi toh Geet 24*7 tension mein hi rehthi, patha nahi ab usska mood kaisa hoga? Babaji mera rakhsha karna"

It's bedtime……

Maan comes to take Neha with him….

Maan: Geet tumne dhoodh phili?
Geet: haan

Maan: aur dawa leli?

Geet: nahi, maa lenne gayi hai

Maan kudh jaakke medicine lekhe aatha….

Geet ko shak hotha, MSK aaj thoda zyada hi parwa karthe……kuch toh baat hai…

Maan: Gee tab toh Neha bhi tummari madat karne lagi, aur tummare maa bhi paas hai

Geet: toh?

Maan: aur Senha bhi zyada tang nahi karthi

Geet: aap kahan jaanewale hai? mein bhi soch rahi thi ki aap itne din apne business ko kaise bhool gaye?

Maan: Geet?

Geet: toh aapko lagtha hai ki ab mujhe kudh sabko sambalna hai

Maan: nahi

Geet: aap ko kahin bhi jaana hai toh jao, mujhe poochne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai

Maan: aasie baat nahi hai Geet

Geet: Mr.MSK , I'm sorry jo meinne itne din aapko disturb karli

Maan: babaji ye kya nayi musibat hai?

Geet: toh ab mein aap ke liye musibat bangayi?

Maan: Geeet

Maan gets angry……

Neha is worried…..

Neha: papa aap humme chodkke jaa rahe ho?

Maan: Geet dekho tumne Neha ko bhi daradhi

Geet: kya? Meinne daradhi? Haan mein hi har waqt chillathe rehthi hoon, haina?

Maan: tum samajthe kyun nahi ho? Kaam bhi zaroori haina?

Neha: papa aaplog laddo mat

Neha Dadi ko lekhe aathi….

Dadi : toh aap donno phir se shuru ho gaye? Dekho bte ab aap parents ban gaye ho, tum log bachi ke samne ladoge toh usska asar bahut bhura hoga, job hi baat hai aaplog tande dimag se sochkke faisla karlo, ab donno sojao, kal subhe baat karna

Maan:lekhin Dadi?

Dadi: Maan aap Neha ko lekhe jaayiye, abhi

Maan leaves, but he couldn't sleep……

It's midnight and Maan goes to see Geet….

She is still awake…..she knew that Maan would come…..

She gets up and takes him out…….

Maan: Geet, mujhe maaf kardho, mein tujhe chodkke kahin nahi jaanewala hoon

Geet goes and hugs him…..she starts crying…..

Maan: Geet, ab kyun ro rahi ho? Mein yahi hoon, tere paas

Geet: nahi, aap jao. Mein sab sambaloongi

Maan: nahi Geet, abhi Sneha bahut choti hai

Geet: nahi, aajkal mein bahut kamzoor ho gayi hoon, haina?

Maan: aaise waqt mein sabko aaisa hi hotha

Geet: nahi, mein aapko kuch zyada hi pareshaan karthi hoon

Maan: kissne kaha ki tum mujhe pareshaan karthi ho? Ye toh mera farz hai

Geet: nahi Maan, aapko business ka tension bhi hai aur upar se meri pareshaani bhi hai

Maan: koi problem nahi hai Geet, Adi haina?

Geet: Delhi wale project ka kaam hi chal raha haina?

Maan: haan Geet, Mr.Khandelwal ka project (Deepa, Mr.Rajeev khandelwal OK haina?)

Geet: woh toh shuru se hi kehthe rahe ki ye project ko aapko kudh handle karna hai

Maan: lekhin mera family bhi hai, aur mujhe tummare liye bhi waqt dena haina?

Geet: par Mr. Khandelwal aapkke bahut izzat karthe, aap ko zaroor jaana hoga

Maan: are you sure? Tum akhele manage karogi?

Geet: mein toh shadhi se pehle sab kuch akhele hi sambalthi thi, kaise Mr.MSK ko bhi meinne sambala? aur mein akhele kahan hoon?, Dadima hai, maa hai aur ab Neha bhi hai mere khyaal rakhne ki

Maan: toh mein jaoon?

Geet: kab jaana hai?

Maan: tum kaho toh mein kal hi jaakke bas do din mein lautkke aatha hoon

Geet: kal? Toh aapne pehle hi sare tayaari karli?

Maan: haan, mujhe patha hai ki meri mishty bahut samajdar hai aur bachon ko bahut achche se sambal sakthi

Geet: kya?

Maan: aur mujhe bhi

Maan gets closer and looks at his mishty…..Maneet eyelock…..mahi….

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