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Part – 61

One morning…..

As usual Neha is late for school…..

Maan is ready….he is waiting for Neha ….

Maan: Geet, aur kitne dher lagaoge?

Geet: Maan, bas do minute

Geet Neha ko khana khila rahi hai……

Maan: Geet roz aaisa hi karthe ho

Dadi: Geet bete Neha ko thoda early uttayiye

Maan: kaise Dadi? Ye jaldhi utthi toh Neha ko uttayegi

Geet: Maan, aap adhi raat ko hi utjaathe toh hum bhi aaise nahi kar sakthe

Neha: haan mama

Maan: Geet bachon apne parents se hi seekhthe hai

Geet: haan haan, Neha kal se papa ki tarah tum bhi dahi khalo, ye shehath ke liye
bahut achcha hai, haina Maan? Aap issko khakke dikhayiye

Dadi smiles…….

Maan: Geet?

Neha: haan mama, papa dahi khathe toh mein bhi zaroor khaoongi

Geet: aapne suna?

Maan: mujhe dher ho rahi hai, mein ghadhi mein wait karth hoon

Geet : dekho dahi ka naam lethe hi kaise bhaagthe hai?

Dadi: Geet bete aap bhi na, Maan ka har sawaal ke jawaab aapke paas hotha hai

Geet: warna Dadi aapkke pothe ko kaise sambal sambalthi?

Dadi: haan bete, humme bhi aap se kuch seekhna hai, itne saal se hum bhi koshish karthe rahe, par inne toh sirf aap sambal sakthe

Neha: bye Dadi, bye mama

Geet: bye Neha

Neha leaves….Geet aur Dadi breakfast kar rahe hai……

Nakul: dadima, koi madam Neha beti ko dekhna aaye hai

Geet: hare Neha se milne kahin usski teacher toh nahi aayi? Lekhin iss waqt toh woh school mein hi hogi

Dadi: Geet bete aap chalkke dekhiye kaun aaya hai

Geet: haan Dadi,I'm done, aap dawa lekhe aaram se aayiye

Geet goes to see who it is?

Mehmaan: namasthe, mujhe Neha se milna hai

Geet: aap?

Mehmaan: I'm Sameera

Geet: Sameera? Ohhh aapki beti Neha ke saath pad rahi hai kya?

Sam: nahi, mein Neha ke buaji hoon

Geet: kya? Lekhin mein kissi buaji ko nahi jaanthi

Sam: mein Arjun ki cousin hoon

Geet: Arjun ki behen?

Sam: haan, Arjun ne bathaya nahi?

Geet: nahi toh, meinne tumme Arjun ki shadhi mein bhi nahi dekha

Sam: kaise dekh sakhte?

Geet: kyun?

Sam: mein toh shadhi mein aayi hi nahi thi

Geet: kya?

Sam: haan, Arjun bhai ka mere papa ke saath jagda ho gaya tha, issiliye woh apne shadhi ke badh ko bhi humme nahi bathaye, ab dekho hum ab chahe toh bhi unse nahi mil sakthe

Sam starts crying……..

Geet ko patha nahi ussko kaise sambale?

Geet: Sameera….ro mat

Dadi bhi aajaaathi…….

Dadi: Geet bete ye kyun ro rahi hai?

Geet: dadima, ye Arjun ki cousin hai

Dadi: what? Par humme laga Arjun ki koi rishtedar nahi hai

Sameera: hummare taqdeer ko dekho? Itne sare rishton hothe hue bhi bhai ek anaath ke tara jee rahe the, aur ab unkke beti bhi unkke tarah

Sam couldn't complete the sentence……

Dadi: aaise mat kahiye, Neha hummari beti hai

Geet: haan, Neha meri beti hai

Sam: aapki beti? Ye kaise ho saktha?

Sam is shocked to hear that……

Geet: mein Maan Singh Khurana ki biwi hoon, Annie ki babhi, ab Neha hummari beti ho gayi hai

Sam: aapne bahut achcha kiya jo Neha ko aap apne beti manthe ho

Geet: sirf manthe hi nahi, Neha sach mein hummari beti hi hai

Sam: mein yahan Neha se milne hi aayi hoon

Geet: tumme Neha ke barein mein kaise patha?

Neha: jab mein Arjun bhai ke ghar gayi wahan unkke padosiyon se mujhe aap logon ke barein mein patha chala

Dadi: bete aap bahut tak gaye ho, aap pehle thoda aaram karlo, Neha shaamko aajayegi, hum badh mein baat kar sakhte hai jab Maan ghar aathe

Geet: lekhin dadi?

Dadi: Geet bete inkko andar lekhe jayiye

Sam: nahi Dadiji, aap mujhe Arjun ke ghar ke chabbi dijiye, mein shaamko aakke Neha se milthi hoon

Dadi: hare aap hummare Annie ke nanath hai, aapko hum aaise akhele kaise chod sakthe, aapko hummare saath hi rehna padega

Geet: Dadi, ye jaana chahathi toh jaane dijiye

Dadi: Geet bete aap abhi bhi yahan kadhi ho? Come on , take her to the guest room

Geet ko ye sab pasand hi nahi hai…..Maan ko aane do, phir dekho ye yahan se kaise apne aap bhaag jaathi

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pare 61
nice update
sam aa gayi..
geet to sam ko 1st time se hi pasand nahi karti...

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Part – 62

Geet calls Maan and tells about the new pareshaani(?)……

Maan: Geet, jahan tak mein jaantha hoon Arjun ka koi rishthedar nahi hai, tumne teek se poocha ki woh kaun hai? kissi bhi ladhki ko aaplog ghar ke andar kaise aane de sakthe?

Geet: nahi Maan, mujhe lagtha ye sach bol rahi hai, mujhe abhi yaad aaya ki ek do bar Annie ne Arjun ki kissi mausi aur unke pariwaar ke barein mein kaha tha, par Arjun ne ussko pure baat bathane se rhokli

Maan: kya? Par Annie ne mujhe kuch nahi kaha?

Geet: shayad Arjun ne mana kiya hoga?

Maan: job hi ho, ab woh yahan kyun aayi hai?

Geet: yahi sawaal subhe se mujhe pareshaan karkke rakhi hai

Maan: Geet tum gabrao mat, mein jaldhi ghar aatha hoon

Geet: teek hai Maan

Maan: tab tak tum usske barein mein aur jaankari karlo

Geet gets angry……

Geet: haan, mein abhi jaake uski interview lethi hoon

Maan: what?

Geet: Maan woh kya itni badi VIP hai? mujhe toh usski shakal hi pasand nahi hai

Maan: Geet, tum tension mat lo, mujhe patha hai ki tum itna chintha kyun karthi ho?

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, tumme darne ki koi zaroorat nahi, Neha hammari beti hai, sirf hummari, samji

Geet ko ye baatein sunkke bahut achcha laga, jab Maan hi usske saath hai toh ek buaji kya? Dus pachaas buaji aathe toh bhi Geet sambal sakhti, haina babaji?

Maan comes home for lunch…..

Actually Maan cancelled his programs and came home to meet the new guest……

Maan is also confused why someone related to Arjun would come to meet Neha after all these years….

She didn't even bothered to even meet Arjun since he left Amritsar…….

Not even visited him once? But why is she here now?

Geet: Maan aap aagaye? Itne jaldhi?

Maan: haan Geet, woh kahan hai?

Geet: woh out house mein hai, aap khana khalo, mein ussko bhulakke aathi

Dadi: Geet bete, pehle aap Maan ke saath khana khao, phir hum aaram se baat karenge

Maan: kya naam hai Dadi?

Dadi: Sameera, mujhe toh woh bahut achchi ladhki lagthi hai

Geet:magar dadi, woh yahan kyun aayi hai?

Dadi: ye kaise sawaal hai bete? Woh Arjun ki behen hai, shayad Arjun ke barein mein ussko abhi abhi patha chala hoga, issiliye apne bhaanji se milne aayi hai

Geet: mujhe toh shak hotha, kahin usskke irada kuch aur hotha toh?

Maan: Geet, tum toh aajkal bahut sochthi ho, pehle humme patha toh chale ki ye sach mein Arjun ki behen hai ya nahi

Geet: dekha, ab aap ko bhi shak hotha haina?

Sameera comes…..

Dadi: hare, Sameera bete, aap bhi aayiye, hummare saath luch khijiye

Sam: nahi Dadiji, mujhe bhook nahi hai

Dadi: aaise kaise ho saktha? Aap hummare mehmaan hai, infact pehle aapko khana chahiye, aayiye, Geet bete unkko lekhe aayiye

Geet gets up to call Sameera…..: "mehmaan? Haan do din ke mehmaan"

Sam: tum rukho, mein hi aathi hoon

Maan: toh aap Arjun ki cousin hai?

Sam:ji, you must bhi Mr.Maan Singh Khurana?

Maan: haan, Annie ka bhai

Sam: I have heard a lot about you, nice meeting you

Sam offers her hand for a hand shake….Maan responds…..

Geet ko ye bilkul pasand nahi hai……

Maan: toh Sameera….

Sam: Sam…..you can call me sam

Maan: how would you know about us?

Sam: mujhe toh Arjun bhai ke barein mein dus din pehle hi patha chal, I was so shocked to hear about his death, then when I came to know about his daughter I couldn't wait to see her, I just took the first flight to Mumbai

Geet: dekho kaise angrezi mein hi baat karthi hai? aur sirf Maan se hi baat karna hai kya? Dikhayi nahi detha ki hum bhi hai yahan pe

Maan: so you are from Amritsar too?

Sam: nahi, hum Ludiana mein rehthe hai, Arjun bhai used to stay with us during the holidays

Dadi: phir kya ho gaya?

Sam: hummare kuch rishdedar ne humse jalan hokke bhai ko kaha ki my family is eyeing his properties which is totally baseless, patha nahi Arjun bhai ko kaise itne bade galatfami ho gayi?

Dadi: I'm so sorry bete, Arjun itna bola tha ki ussne sab ki bathon pe yakheen kardhi

Sam: bhai toh itna naraaz the ki humme apne shadhi ke barein mein bhi nahi bathaya, maa ko bahut bhura laga

Geet: Arjun toh apne family ke barein mein bahut kam baat hi kartha

Sam: he just felt very lonely and left out

Geet: haan, ussko hamesha lagtha ki usski koi bhi nahi hai, par Annie se milne ke badh woh bahut badal gaya, woh chahatha tha ki ab usska bhi ek pariwaar ho, shadhi ke badh dhere dhere woh Annie ke pariwaar ko hi apna pariwaar banaya gaya

Maan: haan Geet, tum teek keh rahi ho, shuru mein thoda takrar hua par badh mein Arjun iss pariwaar ka hissa ban gaya

Geet ko ek baat ki kushi hui….itne din ke baad sab Arjun ko yaad kar rahe hai…..Maan bhi!...haina babaji?

Shayad babaji ne hi issko yahan bheja hai?

Sam: Neha kab aayegi?

Geet: woh aathe hi hogi, usskke aane ka waqt ho gaya hai

Neha just comes….

Sam: OMG! Arjun bhai ki beti? Mujhe toh yakheen hi nahi hotha ki bhai ka itni badi beti hogi

Neha looks at Sam…….

Sam: Neha bete, hummare paas aayiye

Neha looks at Geet…..

Geet hold her hand and takes her near Sam….

Sam: ye lijiye , humme patha hai ki ye aapko bahut pasand hai, haina?

Sam gives her some chocolates…..

Neha hurries to get them …but pauses for a while and she takes it only after Geet asks her to go ahead…

Dadi: Neha bete, ye aapke buaji hai, chaliye aunty ko halo kahiye

Neha: halo aunty

Sam lifts and kisses her……

Geet: chalo Neha, hum change karkke aathe hai

Geet takes Neha from Sam and goes to her room…..

Sam is a little disappointed…..

Maan ko patha nahi kya kahe? Kuch bhi kehtha toh Geet zaroor bhura maanjayegi……

Maan: Dadi, mein upar jaatha hoon

Dadi: teek hai bete

Maan leaves…..ab toh yahi sahi hoga…..

Dadi:Sam bete aap beitiye, Neha fresh hokke aayegi, ye Geet ko toh Neha ke aathe hi nahana chahiye

Dadi tries to manage the situation……..but it's quite obvious that Geet is not comfortable leaving Neha with Sameera…..she feels insecure……

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Part – 63

Dinner time….

Maan kissi dinner pe chala gaya….

Geet is busy with the baby…….

Dadi asks Sam to come and have dinner…..

Neha is with Geet……

Sam: Dadi, Geet kahan hai?

Sam wants to know where Neha is……

Dadi: woh apne kamre mein hi honge, Neha bhi usske saath hi hai

Dadi ko patha hai Neha kyun poochrahi hai……

Sam: Dadi humme ab bhook nahi hai, hum bhi unnkke saath hi khalenge, aap khayiye

Sam serves Dadi…..

Dadi smiles….: aap chaho toh unsse milkke aayiye, Nakul, m'am ko Geet m'am ke paas lekhe jao

Sam knocks……

Geet: Maan, ye KC nahi hai, aapko knock karne ki koi zaroorat nahi

Sam: Geet, kya mein andar asakthi hoon?

Geet stares her for a moment….

Geet: aao

Sam: toh Neha darling aap kya kar rahe hai?

Neha: mein coloring kar rahi hoon

Sam: aapko drawing pasand hai?

Neha: haan, ye dekho

Sam: hare wah, aap bahut achche artist hai?

Geet: haan, Neha bahut achche drawings banathi

Sam: achcha Neha? Toh aap bhi hummare tarah hi hai, hum bhi aapke tarah paintings banathe the, jab hum college mein the

Neha: aap paintings banathe hai?

Sam: lekhin abhi nahi

Geet shows Neha's drawings…..

Sam: art toh hummare gene mein hi hai, tabhi toh Neha bhi itne achche draw karthi

Neha: aap bhi kuch mere saath draw karoge?

Sam: nahi, hum toh aap jaise itna achche artist nahi hai

Geet: Sameera, Neha ko ye sab bahut pasand hai, par mujhe toh teek se gol(circle) bhi nahi aathi

Sameera: tum bhi mujhe Sam hi bhula sakthi ho Geet

Neha: Sam toh ye lo, mujhe mickey mouse draw karkke dikhao

Geet: Neha, Sam aunty kaho

Sam: it's okay, meinne dekhe, Neha tumme bhi aaise hi bhulathi

Geet: woh baat toh alag hai, maa beti ke rishtey mein aaisa hotha rehtha hai

Sam: kyun? Aunties naraaz hothe hai kya? Mein aaisi nahi hoon

Geet: aaise nahi hai

Sam: achcha Neha yahan aao, mein tumme Mickey mouse banana sikhaathi hoon

Neha is very excited……Geet bhi soch rahi thi ki Neha ko drawing classes mein dalne chahiye, but she is too young

Ab ghar pe hi teacher mil gayi toh Neha bahut kush ho gayi…..

Baby cries….Geet ussko sambalhti while sam takes care of Neha….

Sam: isska naam kya hai?

Neha: Sneha

Sam: ohhh Neha aur Sneha? Bahut achcha hai

Neha: ye toh mera choice hai

Geet: kya? Nahi nahi , ye mera choice hai

Ye donno toh aaise hi ladthe hai……

Sam smiles……

Sam: Geet tum donno ko dekhkke mujhe bahut jalan ho rahi hai, kash mera bhi aaise koi hotha jisskke ke saath mein aaise lad sakthi

Sam becomes sad…..she mostly looks depressed……

Dadi comes to see what's happening…..kahin Geet ne sam ke saath jagda toh nahi khi?

Dadi: toh tum log kya kar rahe ho ab tak? Kissi ko bhi bhook nahi hai kya?

Neha: Dadi dekho, ye kaiss hai?

Dadi: beautiful, ye toh sach mein Mickey hi diktha, aapne babaya?

Neha:haan Dadi

Geet: jootie, Dadi ye toh sam ne banaya hai

Dadi: ab humme patha chaltha ki Neha kaise itna achche draw karthi, hummare khaandan mein toh kissi ko bhi art mein interest nahi hai

Geet: Dadima, aaplogon ko toh bas dusron ko hokum karna aatha, kudh toh kissi bhi kaam le layak nahi hothe hai

Dadi: Geet, humme patha hai aap kisskke baat kar rahe hai?

Geet: toh ye baat aap ko bhi patha chal gaya

Dadi: unkko aane dijiye, hum aaj hi aapki shak ko dhoor karthe hai

Geet: kya? Dadi abhi abhi gahr pe shanthi lauti hai, ab mein ek aur jang ke liye tayaar nahi hoon

Dadi: woh baat nahi hai bete, hummare talents ke nishaani toh aapke haath mein hai

Geet: Dadi, ye toh sahi hai, Dadi jaise pothe bhi waise

Geet winks…..haina Dadi?

Sam ko innko dekhke nahi lagtha ki Geet iss ghar ki bahu hai, she is getting really jealous…..

This Geet has got a lovely sasuraal, aur Neha bhi hai…….

Mujhe dekho, mera koi nahi hai, babaji meinne aaise kya galthi kardhi?

Dadi: Sam bete, aap bahut achche painting karthe ho, zara dikhayiye

Sam is helping Neha…..

Dadi: hare aap bhi leftie ho? Neha bhi leftie hai

Geet: DAdi mujhe bhool gaye hai

Dadi smiles…..: haan bete aap bhi, lekhin Neha toh apne buaji ke Xerox lagthi

Sam is happy to hear this…..

Geet: kya?

Babaji, ye Dadima ko kya ho gaya? Kahin issne toh kuch jadu nahi chalaya?

Dadi: toh chaliye, dinner tayaar hai

Sab saath mein khathe hai….

Geet finds Neha starting to bond well with Sam…..

Neha: aunty, aap ko ice cream pasand hai

Sam: haan, mujhe toh ice cerams bahut pasand hai

Neha: mujhe bhi

Geet: ice cream toh har koi ko pasand hai, issmme kaunsi badi baat hai?

Dadi: aur patha hai sam bete, Neha ko dahi bhi bahut pasand hai

Sam: kya? But I hate yoghurt

Neha: Dadima joot bol rahe hai, mujeh bhi Dahi pasand nahi hai

Sam: what? This is great, haina Geet?

Geet: haan haan,aur Maan ko bhi

Geet is getting a little worried…..ye kaisa ho saktha?

Mujhe toh kuch teek nahi lagtha, babaji aap ye kaise nayi khel khel rahe ho mere saath?...

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part 60
awesome dear...
lovely...
these 2 are too good...
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part 61
nice part...
oh ho Sam is here...
and Geet is not liking this...
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part 62
nice...
Geet is too possessive of Neha...
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part 63
awesome...
oh ho Geet is feeling insecure...
and Sam J?
why?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally deepa is here! 😛
Edited by ghsp2fan - 12 years ago

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