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part 45
awesome part...
loved it...
bechara Maan...
Geet is too naughty...
she didnt bring Neha?
she should bring her next time and Neha entertains the staff...
cont soon dear...
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Part – 46

That night…..at dinner…..

Maan comes home late….

Sab dinner kar rahe hai….

Maan also comes & joins them…..

Geet Maan ki taraf dekhthi bhi nahi……

Dadi smiles….Neha bhi has rahi hai……

Neha tries to look at Maan & tell something…..

Geet: wahan kya hai? Teek se beitkke khalo

Geet Neha ko khilathi rehthi….

Maan ko Nakul hi serve kartha…..

Maan tries to say something….

Geet Neha ko lekhe jaathi….

Geet: chalo, ab humme sona hai

Neha sign language mein Maan se baat karthi….kya hua?

Maan bhi ussi tarah react karta: mujhe kya patha?

Neha whispers: gud night papa

Maan: gud night darling

Geet Neha ko sulakke aathi…

Maan is still working…..

Geet goes & lies down…..

She pretends to be sleeping……

Maan: Geet

No response….

Maan: toh tu so gayi ho?

Geet: haan

Maan Geet ka bedsheet nikhaaltha...
Geet tries to get it back...
Geet gets angry...
Geet : mujhe kyun disturb karthe ho? ye aapka KC nahi mera ghar hai
Maan: teek hai, mein bahar jaatha hoon

Maan bahar chale jaatha…..

Geet: ye aadhi raat ko bahar kya kar rahe hai?

She goes to check……

Maan apne lappy mein koi kaam kar raha hai……

Geet: hare ye kya?ye mera ghar hai aap ki office nahi

Geet snatches the laptop….

Maan: hare Geet, sambalkke

Geet checks the lappy…..

Ye toh kissi hotel ki booking lagtha hai….

Maan kahin jaa raha hai kya?

Maan: kya dekh rahe ho?

Geet: ye kya hai?

Maan: hare Geet meinne bathaya nahi, mein Agle hafte Singapore jaa raha hoon

Geet: kya?

Maan: hare mein to tujhe bathana hi bhool gaya

Geet: kaise bathate? Aap toh apne Geet ko hi bhool gaye ho…..

Maan shows her the places that he is visiting……

He shows the suit he has booked…..

Geet: mujhe kyun dikhate ho?

Geet ko bhi jaane ki mann kartha…..

Maan: hare tujhe jaanne ka haq haina ki tummara pathi kahan kahan jaa raha hai?

Geet: koi Business trip hai kya?

Maan: nahi nahi

Geet: kya?

Maan: mujhe bahut din se Singapore jaane ki mann kar raha tha

Geet: kya? Toh aap akhele jaa rahe ho? Kanjoos Khurana

Maan: nahi toh, akhele jaane mein koi mazaa nahi hoga

Geet:phir?

Maan: mein apne friend ke saath jaa raha hoon

Geet: kisskke saath jarahe ho? Rahul?

Maan: nahi

Geet: Mr.sinha

Maan: nahi

Geet Maan ke sare friends ke naam lethi….

Maan: hare Geet tum mere Girlfriend ko nahi jaanthi?

Geet: kya? Aapke koi GF nahi hai

Maan: hai Geet

Geet: nahi

Maan: tum bhi ussko jaanthi ho

Geet: kya? Mein kissi ko nahi jaanthi

Maan: hare Geet, wahi jo har waqt mere peeche hi padi rehthi….patha hai KC mein bhi mujhe chaain se kaam nahi karne dethi…..

Geet: kya? Aaisa kaun hai KC mein? Woh ladhki? Nahi nahi,Maan aaise nahi hai, haina babaji?

Maan:har waqt bak bak karthi rehthi, hamesha mujhse ladthi rehthi,lekhin mujhe bahut pyaar karthi

Geet: mujhse bhi zyada?

Maan: woh toh tum hi batha sakthi

Geet: aur aap?

Maan: mein bhi usse kudh se zyada pyaar kartha hoon, haan

Geet: kya? Mein pehle hi jaanthi thi, woh kaise aapko dekh rahi thi?

Maan: kaun?

Geet: wahi, aapki GF, ek hi hai ya koi aur bhi hai?

Maan: tum hi dekhlo

Maan apne lappy mein Maneet ke photo dikhatha…..

Geet: kay? Hum Singapore jaa rahe hai?

Maan: haan, mein kab se ye trip plan kar raha tha, par abhi waqt milla, issilye mein thoda busy tha

Geet: achcha?

Maan: haan

Geet: wahan toh hum khoob sare shopping karenge, haina? Mein abhi list banathi hoon

Maan: hare usskki koi zaroorat nahi, no shopping

Geet: no shopping

Maan: haan

Geet: lekhin kyun?

Maan: kyunke mein ek zaroori kaam ke liye jaa raha hoon

Geet: phir kaam?

Maan: haan, ye kaam toh mein tere bina nahi kar saktha

Maan Geet ko apne paas keenchtha…

She falls on his lap….

Geet: achcha, aaisi baat hai

Maan: toh thoda practice karlein?

Maan lifts her & takes her in…..

Mahi mahi shuru hothi…..

Maneet ki Mahi aasie hi continue hothi……

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 46
awesome part...
so lovely...
so Maan and Geet are going to Singapore...
what about Neha?
cont soon dear...
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Part - 47

Singapore mein bahut mazaa karthe hai...

Neha Dadi ke paas rukhthi...

mahi mahi toh chaltha rehtha...

ab Maan ko patha chalgaya ki Geet dhere dhere Maan ki zaroorat bangayi hai, aur Neha unki duniya bangayi, phir bhi Maan chahatha ki ek aur angel hona chahiye, just like Geet...

Maan: Geet mujhe tumse ek gift chahiye

Geet: mere paas kya hai, seva aapki pyaar ki

Maan: pyaar ki nishaani

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan Geet, hummare pyaar ki nishaani, ye toh tum hi mujhe de sakthi, nanni munni Geet

Geet: kyun? nanna MSK kyun nahi?

Maan: nahi nanni Geet

Geet: nahi jr MSK

donno ladne lage

Geet: babaji aap sun rahe haina? jr MSK, samje?

Maan: Geet pehle apne babaji se prarathna karo jo Jr ka ya Jr ki intrezaam kar saktha

Geet: mein aapse baat nahi kar rahi hoon

Maan: ye baat karne ka waqt nahi hai

Maan apne mishty ko apne bahoon mein lekhe jaatha...

Maan ki mehnat ka fhal mil jaatha…..

Geet is pregnant……

Geet Naha ko usskke routine check-up ke liye hospital lekhe aathi toh ye news miltha…

Geet ye kush kabri pehle Maan ko bathana chahathi hai….'

Lekhin kaise?...Geet thoda sochthi……

Geet calls Maan….

Geet: aap kahan ho?

Maan: Geet , ye kaise sawaal hai, obviously KC mein

Geet: aap abhi yahan aao

Maan: Geet tum kya Video phone se baat kar rahi ho?

Geet: nahi toh

Maan: phir mujhe kaise patha chalega ki tum kahan ho?

Geet: hare itne jaldhi bhoolgaye, meinne subhe hi kaha na hum Neha ki check-up ke liye jaa rahe hai

Maan pareshaan ho jaatha…..

Maan: Geet, Neha ko kuch hua kya?

Geet: nahi nahi, aap fikar mat karo, she is fine

Maan: phir mujhe kyun bhula rahe ho?

Geet: lo aap hi Neha se baat karlo

Neha: papa aap aarahe haina?

Maan: nahi bte, aap mama ke saath chale jaayiye

Neha: nahi, aap humme shopping mall lekhe jao, abhi

Maan: Neha hum shamko jaathe hai

Neha: nahi, mein aap ke saath hi jaoongi, warna yahi rukh jaathi

Geet: hare, kitne pyaar se bhula rahi hai, aayiyena?

Maan: teek hai, aaplog wait karo, mein aatha hoon

Neha: kya hua? Success?

Geet: haan, well done Neha

Maan comes……

Thoda gusse mein hai…..

Maan: Geet, Neha toh bachi hai, lekhin tum toh jaanthi haina mujhe kaam hai?

Geet: ek din mein KC doob nahi jayega

Maan: Geeet

Geet: kya Geet Geet, Neha ne hi bhulaya, mein nahi

Maan: chalo mein aaplog ko ghar chodtha hoon, mein thoda jaldhi mein hoon

Neha: nahi, mein ghar nahi jaoongi

Maan: phir?

Neha: mujhe toys lena hai

Geet keeps quiet….

Maan: Geet tum issko samjathi kyun nahi? Ye bhi tummari tarah ziddi ho gayi hai

Geet: kyun? Aap ziddi nahi ho?

Maan had to concede in the end….

At the boutique….

Neha new born baby ke toys hi lethi….

Maan: Neha bte, ab aap bade ho gaye ho, ye sab rakhdo, hum kuch aur toys lethe hai

Neha: nahi mujhe yahi chahiye

Neha looks at Geet & smiles….

Geet: ssshhh chup

Geet: Neha chahathi toh ussko lene do

Maan ko shak hotha…

Ye Geet bina koi wajhe se aaise achanak mujhe yahan nahi bhuyagi…..

Ye donno aaj aaise ajeeb kyun behave kar rahe hai…

Waise Geet hospital se aayi hai…..

Wahan kya ho saktha?

Kuch toh baat hai? Mujhe patha lagana hai…

Maan ko thoda kuch samaj mein aatha…..

Toh aaisi baat hai?

Maan keeps quiet….

Dekhte hai ki aage kya kya karte hai ye badmashoon….

Geet aur Neha kuch secret batein karte hai…..

They look at each other & they look at Maan & smile….

Geet toh chup nahi reh sakthi…..

Par ghar jaake bathathe hai….

Yahan aade rasthe mein kaise batha sakthi?

Maan: kya baat hai? Donno kya plan kar rahe ho?

Geet: kuch nahi

Neha laughs…..

Maan: Neha bte aap hi bathao kya baat hai?

Neha: ye toh aap ko nahi bathayenge

Maan: kyun?

Neha: ye surprise hai

Maan: achcha, Geet tum bathao kya surprise hai?

Geet: mujhe kya patha? Aap Neha se hi poocho

Maan: chalo ye baat chodo, hum ice-cram kayege, kissko ice cream chahiye

Neha: Neha ko

Geet: Geet ko bhi chahiye

Maan: chalo Neha hum jaake ice cream lekhe aate hai

Geet: Neha, secret………..

Neha: haan , mein nahi bathaoongi

Neha winks…….

Maan: Geet tum bhi aao

Geet: nahi aap jao

Geet waits in the car……..

Maan comes back with Geet's favourite ice cream….

Maan: ye lo

Maan has got 2 ice creams…

Geet: hare , ye kya? Mujhe toh ek hi kaafi hai, mein aajkal dieting kar rahi hoon

Maan: Geet tummare liye toh ek hi hai

Geet: ab ye doossra kisske liye?

Maan looks at Neha…..

Maan had confirmed his guess from Neha…..

Donno saath mein bolthe hai…

Maan: ye toh baby ke liye hai

Geet: kya? Toh Neha ne aapko bathadhi

Maan: mein toh pehle hi jaatha tha

Geet: kya?

Maan: tumme kya laga, mein kuch nahi jaantha

Geet: lekhin kaise, doctor se poocha aapne?

Maan: hare Geet doctor se kyun poochoon?, tummare shrarat aakhen hi khaafi haina? Ye toh teri andar ke sare secrets pehle hi mujhe batha dethe hai

Geet: achcha, ye aankhen aapko aur kya bthate hai

Maan: yahi, hare buddu apne Geet ko thanks toh kaho

Geet: Maan aap toh bahut badmaash ho, sab kuch jaante bhi humko ullu banate

Maan: Geet yahan aao

Maan calls her closer….

Geet: gets closer….

Maan kisses her forehead….

Neha smiles…..

Geet sharmathi….

Ye baat Dadi ko bathane ke liye ghar chalte hai….

Dadi yahi kabar sunne ke liye taras rahi thi….

She informs Ranno….

Ranno aur Handaji aagle din hi Mumbai aathe hai…

Geet as usual Neha ke saath khelthi rehthi…..

Woh toh pehle ki tarah hi yahan wahan bhaagte rhthi….

Dadi asks her to take some rest….

Maan also orders her to be carefull while playing…..

Ye toh aage dekhkke teek se chalna bhi nahi jaanthi haina?

Har waqt Maan paas nahi ho saktha ussko pakadne ke liye……

Maan Geet ka khyaal raktha…..usske har quaaish puri kartha….

Geet ko mokha mil gaya toh woh Maan ko hukoom dethi rehthi….

Ranno Geet aur Neha ko apne saath Hoshiarpur lekhe jaana chahathi….

She tells Dadi about it…

Dadi ko bhi yahi teek lagtha….

Lekhin Geet is not interested…..

Maan ko chodke kaise jayegi?

Par Dadi aur Ranno kehte toh ussko manna hi pada….

Geet Hoshiarpur jaane ki tayaari karthi hai…

She starts packing her things….

Maan comes…

He finds the room messy with Geet's half packed bags…

Maan: Geet….Geeet

Geet comes runnig……Maan aaise kyun chilla raha hai?

Maan looks at ….

Maan: hare Geet, dhere

Maan goes & holds her in his arms….

He takes her to thebed…

Maan: beito Geet, itne tej kyun bhaagthi ho?

Geet: woh aap ne kyun chillaya?

Maan: aaj se tum aaise nahi daudegi, samji

Geet: hmm

Maan: Geet, ye kya hai?

Geet: ye mere salwar hai

Maan: ye pack kyun kar rahi ho?

Geet: woh hum Hosharpur jaa rahe haina?

Maan: kaun jaa raha hai?

Maan gets angry….

He stares her…Geet dar jaathi…..

Geet: woh….Neha…aur

Maan: aur

Geet: mein

Maan: kya?

Geet: woh dadi chahathi hai kii

Maan: tum kahin nahi jaa rahi ho

Maan keeps her dress back in the wardrobe….

Geet: lekhin Maan?

Maan: tumne suna nahi meinne kya kaha?

Geet bhi kush hai….woh bhi yahi chahathi thi….

She goes & hugs him……

Maan: tum mujhe chodke jaogi?

Geet: nahi

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Part – 48

Next Day….

Maan is having his breakfast……

Ranno comes….

She signals Dadi to ask Maan…..

Dadi: haan, Maan bte, Geet ko apne maa ke saath jaane dijiye, har ladkhi aaise samay mein apne maikke mein hi rehna chahathi

Maan: Dadi meinne pehle hi kaha, Geet yahi rahegi

Ranno: mein maa hoon usskki, mujhe bhi haq hai apne beti ko lekhe jaane ki

Maan: Geet

Geet comes….

Maan: Geet tummari maa ko tummari itni fikar hai toh woh yahan rukh sakthi, lekhin tum kahin nahi jaanewali ho, samji

Geet: kyun maa?

Ranno: nahi nahi, mein yahan rukhthi toh tere papa Hosiarpur mein akhele kaise sambalenge

Maan: toh aap apne pathi ko akhele nahi chodenge , magar aap chahate hai ki meri biwi mujhe chodke aapkke saath aaye?

Geet: mein bhi aapko chodkke nahi jaaoongi

Ranno: toh tum itni badi ho gayi ho, koi baat nahi, Neha aap toh aarahe haina?

Neha: nahi

Ranno: kya? Aap bhi nahi aarahe hai?

Geet: maa, tum yahi rukh jao

Ranno: kyunji? Aap kya kehte ho?

Mr.Handa: nahi nahi, Geet itne din tujhe kaise sambalegi? Hum ab chalte hai, aur then char mahinne ke badh aate hai

Ranno: kya?

Mr.Handa: toh Geet, apna khyaal rakhna, hum chalte hai, Dadiji humme aagya dijiye

They leave….

Maan: Geet tumhare maa ko toh tumhare papa hi sambal sakte, haina?

Geet: woh toh hai…

Ranno ke chale jaane ke badh Maan Geet ka achcha khyaal rakhtha…

Geet apne maa ko chodke Maan ke saath rukh gayi haina?

Dadi bhi Geet ko har waqt kuch na kuch khilathi ya philathi rehthi…

Maan ussko time pe khane ki insist kartha….

Geet kabhi bhool bhi jaathi toh Maan calls & reminds her….

Geet ki godh barayi ka function karthe hai...
Neha ko lagtha ye mummy papa ki shadhi hai...
ussne apne sare nanne friend (play school ka) ko apne mummy papa ki wedding mein bhulaya hai...
aur toh aur Neha ki nayi baby friend bhi aaraha hai...
Maan takes care that Geet is safe...
Geet tries to shake a leg and Maan helps her ...
ab Geet has become so dependent on Maan...
Maan helps her in all her activities...
bhook lagi hai toh Maan brings her food...
feeling thirsty toh Maan gets her juice...
feeling tired toh she has got Maan beside her to carry...
Neha bhi Maan ke saath Geet ki madat karthi...
raat ko chotu ke paas beitkke kahaani sunathi...
Maan hides behind Geet and talks with Neha in chotu's voice...
Neha is very happy and is desperate to play with chotu...
everyday she keeps asking " chotu aaj mujhe dekhne aajayega haina?"
Geet keeps tellig her excuses...
chotu abhi bahut chota hai thoda aur bade hokke aapse milnne aajaayega...
Neha would say, "aap bahut kam kathe ho, warna ab tak chotu itna bada hotha"
she would hold her arms wide...
Maan would enjoy those moments...
"haan Geet, tum kal se teek se kao takki hummara chotu jaldh Neha ke saath khelne aaye"
Maan would measure Geet's tummy and tell Neha that chotu bahut bada ho gaya...
Geet toh ye soup aur juice phikke tak chukki hai….

Ab toh Geet chaat bhi nahi kha sakthi…

Maan ki orders hai ki ab no spicy food….

Ab toh Maan ka diet hi Geet ka diet ho gaya!

Sab kacha hai ya boiled hai….hum insaan haina?

Koi bakra toh nahi jo har waqt greens kathe rahe?

Ek din Geet ko kuch alag khane ka mann kartha…..

Bahar ka khana mana hai…

Maan ki strict orders…..

Dadi ke paas ek idea hai……

Dadi ek amateur cook ko jaanthi…..

Geet: kaun hai Dadi?

Dadi: hare aapko nahi patha, hummare apne Masterchef Maan Singh Khurana

Geet: kya? Nahi baba, mein koi risk nahi le sakthi

Dadi: hare Geet, Maan Annie ke liye naye naye dishes banathe the, haan kabhi kabhi unnkke experiments fail hothe hai, lekhin phir bhi kuch exotic dishes bhi banathe hai, Annie ke liye kuch bhi karthe the

Dadi thinks of the past….

Geet ko bahut bhura laga….aaj agar Annie hothi toh Geet ke saath woh hothi….haina?

Dadi: hare…aap kade kade kya dekh rahe ho?

Geet: woh…kuch nahi Dadi

Dadi: Maan ko call kijiye, warna aaj bhi woh late aayenge

Geet: ji Dadi

Geet calls Maan….

Maan comes earlier…..

Aajkal Geet ke chote chote wishes ko bhi Maan turanth pura kartha….

Geet ne bhulaya toh Maan hazeer ho gaya….

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Part - 49

Maan comes in a hurry...

Geet ne kyun bhulaya?

koi problem hoga kya?

Maan: Geet... Geeet

Geet Dadi ke pass hai...

Nakul: Geet madam uppar hai

Maan goes to Dadi's room...

Geet: Maan

Maan: Geet, kya baat hai?

Geet: Dadi ne aaj aapki ek raaz kholdhi

Maan: kya?

Maan looks at Dadi...Dadi smiles...
Maan: Dadi aapne kya kaha?
Dadi: aap apne Geet se hi poochiye
Geet: aap itne din mujhse kyun chjupaye?

Maan: Geet aaisa koi baat nahi jo tum nahi jaanthi

Geet: joot

Maan: Maan Singh Khurana joot nahi bholtha

Geet: toh ye kya hai?

Geet shows his apron'.

Maan: toh tum isskke baat kar rahi thi

Geet: haan

Maan: Geet tumme koi galatfami hui hai, ye achcha idea nahi hai

Dadi: Maan bete, maan bhi jayiye, bechari petse hai, usski har ichcha ko appko pura karna haina?
Maan: Dadi, ye toh blackmail hai
Geet: aaj toh mein chef MSK ke haath se banaya khana hi kaoongi

Maan: toh aaisi baat hai

Geet: haan

Maan: achcha, m'am aaj dinner ke liye kya khana chahoge?

Geet: gobi paratha aur dum aaloo

Geet bahut excited hai''.it's her favourite ''..

Maan: Geet ye Hoshiarpur nahi aur mein teri ma nahi, samji

Geet: aapko ye bhi banana nahi aatha? Garam pani toh bana sakte ho, haina?

Maan: Geeet

Geet: mein kitne umeed lekhe beiti thi? Dadi ne kaha aap achche achche dishes banate ho?

Neha comes'..

Neha: papa

Maan lifts her & asks'.

Maan: hare, meri choti princess ko kya chahiye?

Neha: cup cakes

Maan: that's my girl'.aaj papa aapko cup cakes banayenge

Geet: aur mere liye?

Maan: chalo mein tummare liye chef ka special pasta banatha hoon

Geet: pasta?

Maan: Geet mujhe toh yehi banana aatha

Geet: teek hai, teek hai kuch bhi ho thoda katta meeta banalo

Maan: katta meeta?

Geet: haan

Maan: ye lo katta aur ye meeta, kush?

Maan gives her the tomato sauce & honey

Geet: Maan?

Maan: Geet tum log abhi jao, mein khana tayaar karke bhulatha hoon

Geet: mein chup chupkke aapki recipe copy nahi karoongi

Maan: Geet, mujhe koi disturbance nahi chahiye, samji

Geet & Neha leave''

Maan gets into his chef avatar'.

Maan: Nakul

Nakul aur Chandu Maan ko kitchen mein dekhte hi pareshaan ho gaye'.

Nakul: Chandu tu kitchen sambalo, mujhe Dadi bhula rahe hai

Chandu: aaahh aahh kahan bhaagta hai tu? Aaj toh tu bhaj nahi saltha?

Maan: Nakul'.kahan hai sab?

Chandu: kahan jaa rahe ho? Aaj tu bach nahi saktha

Maan: Nakul

Chandu: chalo Maan sir shuru ho gaye hai

Maan keeps ordering them'

They keep running around the kitchen'..

They can't keep pace with him'.

Maan starts off with the cup cakes'..

Half the ingredients in the bowl toh half zameen pe'..

By the time cup cakes are into the oven kitchen turns into a battle field'.

Poor Nakul & Chandu'..

Chandu keeps cleaning the mess'..

Maan: Chalo ab pasta shuru kate'..

Nakul: sir, woh toh mein hi bana saktha, aap kyun takleef karte hai?

Maan: nahi nahi Geet ne pehle bar mere haathon se kuch maanga hai toh chalo shuru karo, pehle garlic'Chandu garlic tayaar haina

Chandu: ji sir

Maan: hare ye kya? Crush nahi chop karo''..

Chandu: yes sir

Maan: Nakul'.Mushrooms ko teek se saaf karo'.oil kahan hai

Nakul: yahi hai sab

Maan: ye nahi, olive oil

Nakul ko kuch samaj mein nahi aatha''

Itne din se khana paka raha hai lekhin Maan ko dekhte hi haath hillne lage'.

Knife ko teek se pakad bhi nahi patha'.

Finally pasta bhi tayaar hai'

Neha aur Geet kab se dinning table pe intrezaar kar rahe hai'.

Neha toh plates aur spoon se music bajathi hai'.

Geet ka idea tha'..

Maan: hare kahna aaraha hai, thoda wait karo

Geet: Maan aa[ke khana aane se pehle hum bhookke mar jayenge

Maan: Geeet

Geet: Nakul tumne kuch banaya toh lao, mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai

Maan comes out with the cup cakes''

Maa n: Neha bte ye lijiye aapke cup cakes'

It smells good'.

Geet tries to take one'.

Maan: kyun? Tum Nakul ka dhal chawal hi kaalo

Geet: Maaan

Maan ussko bhi khilatha'.

Geet: hmmm bahut tasty hai

Neha: haan, mujhe aur chahiye

Maan: Nakul, cup cakes lao

Nakul brings the cup cakes & the pasta'..

Ye pasta kaun kaatha? Hum kya Italy mein hai?

Ye Khuranas toh aaise behave karte hai jaise seedhe Italy se aaj hi land hue hai?

Geet thoda hesitate karthi'..

Neha starts off immediately'.

Geet too try karthi , ye toh bahut achcha hai'.

Maan goes to wash'..

Nakul comes'..

Nakul: Geet m'am

Geet: haan Nakul, Maan toh kamala ka khana banathe hai, tum unnse kuch seekhlo

Nakul: m;am, agar aapko kuch chahiye toh humse kehjte hum aapko sab banakke dethe hai, magar aajkke baat Maan sir ko kitchen se dhoor hi rakhiye

Nakul is very upset'.

Geet: kyun? Tumme kaam se nahi nikalenge

Nakul: agle bar Maan sir kitchen ke andar toh mein apnea p bahar chale jaaoonga

Geet: kya?

Nakul: aap ek minute mere saath aayiye

Geet goes to check what's wrong?

Immediately she bursts out laughing'

Chandu looks like a clown with flour & sauce all over his clothes'.

Nakul: isskko saaf karne mein humme do din lagega

Geet: achcha, agle bar mein Maan se kehthi hoon ki kachda kam aur khana zyada banayein

Nakul: phir se? '.bechara Nakul bahut dar jaatha'.

aaise hi Geet har din ek naye quaish lekhe aathi jo Maan kushi kushi pura kartha...
guys ek confusion hai...
should I conclude here with happy happy family or would you like this to be continued with some more drama with sameera's entry and Neha knowing the truth and all?
please help me decide...
please leave Ur suggestions...
Edited by ghsp2fan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏 lovely update

plz no sameera plz coz there is no -ve char tll now,
keep it this way,
give neha aur maaneet baby moments




Edited by swabi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 48
awesome...
haye kitna possessive hai humara Maan...
he didnt allow Geet to go...
lovely...

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