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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Amazing os neeti !!

this was such a adorable little heart warming SwaRon os .

i loved sharon , she being all strong and encouraging swayam to accept the application :)

had a nice time reading this .

thanks for the PM.

P.S - you do not suck at writing endings , it was a really cute and positive ending :)

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sky_fighter

@sky_fighter

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

wow totally different swaron. no dance no fights no misunderstandings

this was refreshing and yes lady u do not suck at endings i actually liked the ending the most. and i totally agree with sharon that distance does make the heart grow fonder.

this was totally refreshing. i actually liked these nerds 😛

p.s. neeti i hope i can call u that, can u give me links to ur other os/ss/ff

i dont think i have read much of them

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

I loved how maturely Sharon and Swayam handled the situation !! And truthfully speaking, you should always put your education first at this age !! If it's meant to be which SwaRon, you'll definitely end up together !!

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Damn interesting 😃
feels like,, got a gud story after ages 😊

but ending . . . 🤔

u knw wat . . . Its incomplete . . . . . U should write the last part to give an appropriate end

coz . . . . She had opened 2nd mail . . . . & jis din 1st mail khol liya aur tab tak bahot der ho gyi . . . . Fir to sharon shock me chali jayegi 🤣

maana iss padhai ke piche lovers ko door jana padta hai but yahan to case hi alag hai 😆

I hope ek din ki separation kafi hai fir vo mail check kar le 😎

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sanjana_D3

@sanjana_D3

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

AMAZING 😊 ...IT WAS NOT AN ABRUPT ENDING !!!!!!!! IT WAS FANTANSTIC...THE WHOLE THING !!!!!

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flirteyed

@flirteyed

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

A nice nd happy OS! Wat more cud i have asked for! Grt work neeti nd thnx fr d pm!

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Pankhuri Priyam

@SwaRonpankhuri

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

i luvd it neeti.. Ur Os r awsume.. I luve it ol.. Wel it reminded me of HSM3 where gabrilla went to standford..n distance doen't change relatn n ol..
It was nicely pen dwn by u.. Wel done..
N ya thanx for the pm.
Can i ask u sumthng?
U r frm?

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Neets yaar, it is soothing and sweet OS, you have so natural at writing yaar, but i wish you would countinue with this and make it an SS 😉 Well yaar it is clear fresh and fragrent like a beautiful flower. Both of them know each other in and out, and are lucky they could be part of each others welfare. sharon knows to pull swayam leg😆 and her spat answer that distance makes heart grow fonder! Well I wish you would continue well I loved it and You are the best!

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Sweet cute OS neeti..love how Sharon was crying like a baby since she was not selected but still convinced Swayam to go. Swayam was happy he got selected he never wanted to leave her.

"Swayam smiled at her. " Remember, Out of sight, out of mind." He said, half smiling at her.

He turned to go out. She taped his shoulder.

"Huh?" He said, surprised by her gesture.

" But, Distance also makes the heart grow fonder" She said, grinning wickedly.

Swayam smiled and walked out of the door" Neeti love these lines the most..simple yet deep..Thnx for the PM 😊

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kool kanz

@kool kanz

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

dat was so awsum...great work.👏..sharon keepin her sadness aside n lettin swayam achieve his dreams...😊😊😊i hv read all ur os's n u write amazingly...keep on writing such ones

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