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kria1996

@kria1996

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

its beautiful!

nice work..!

thank yu for the pm.. :)

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

This was awesome and too much relatable. One could totaly see such situation arising in once life. So it was quite pleasant to read an OS on such situation on SwaRon and how they would react to this. You completely did justice to the both chracters and the ending was jsut perfect. Loved this OS.

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BeulaSwaRon

@BeulaSwaRon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

sucha sweet OS...dats how swayam and sharon are like...i cud feel tensed when they wre trying to open emails...you have written it beautifully...Sharon luring swayam as to him going abroad will get make it easier for their marriage...sweetest part...

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704537

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Awesome work Neeti...loved it...thnx for d PM 😊

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Mihika

@Legilimens.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Neeti,

This was such a sweet OS!!It was refreshing and soothing..really sweet..I loved how both of them handled the situation so well!

His hesitation, to not leave her..She kept on persuading him to go..Aww...They are so cute!!

She was sad but at the same time I am so glad, she understood his point of view too..

In her hurry to click on the email, she ended up clicking on the one below. Finally she managed to open the mail.

Poor Sharon..I feel so sorry for her..

"Swayam smiled at her. " Remember, Out of sight, out of mind." He said, half smiling at her.

He turned to go out. She taped his shoulder.

"Huh?" He said, surprised by her gesture.

" But, Distance also makes the heart grow fonder" She said, grinning wickedly.

Even though both of them didn't want to leave each other, Sharon managed to convince him!!

I LOVED the ending..It was not at all abrupt, it was just perfect!!

Amazing work 😊

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

The most realistic idea portrayed in this Neeti.

Even though it had a sad ending, but it gave an idea so as to how profound their relationship is. To get admission in the same college in foreign countries we really have to kick our arse, and with Swayam being the extra conscious with what is going on in the surroundings, added more to his chances. Okay I got sidetracked, coming to Sharon, she was such a sweetheart, how badly she wanted to be in Stanford Univ with Swayam, but when she couldn't get through it and Swayam could, how cutely was she trying to encourage him telling about it would increase their marriage prospects and how she loves Bangalore and how distance builds up the relationship to all together a next level!!

So to end with I absolutely LOVED this piece and the idea behind it

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

edited 😊

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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swa-ron

@swa-ron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

simply great
loved e ending too
even though they were being separated for a tym being

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-.Nisha.-

@-.Nisha.-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

nice os...
loved it
very well penned down...
thanks for the pm

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Neeti! Again a very good OS! You wrote right in the starting..that the concept is very random..but you wrote it very well! I loved every thing in it...swayam didn't even bother to look at his result..in his place sharon got excited..i liked that! And the fab part was the teasing..haha suitors for sharon :D It was really very nycc :))

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