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coalfax

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Posted: 12 years ago

#671

totally loved this ff..

\Halfway thru

Loved it

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rana5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#672

My gosh, I cannot believe you have finally updated and 4 chapters! So intense! Finally Khushi gets it all out. I hope she doesn't take any shit from Arnav again.

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Anamika100

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Posted: 12 years ago

#673

I feel like its Diwali and Christmas rolled itogether...so many updates from you.

You described plight in an unknown country so well and her transition from mute acceptance to rage, fury and rejection was very well done. She has also finally found her toungue and managed to communicate those feelings to him.

Where do they go from here?

I was very much surprised that the expected explosion did not come from ASR...why did he mutely and in a stuttering manner accept everything and back off.

I hope Khushi did mean she has had enough and I hope her rejection will cost him his inheritance or something like that...the ass.

Also have found their interaction until now to be very impersonal but suddenly the level of interaction has changed to a very personal level.

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#674

AMAZING!! You've spoilt us now...we'll all be waiting madly for the next four parts to be posted together. It makes it SO much better to have that continuation of a scene rather than a break and the anticipation of how the scene progresses. Khushi's meltdown was perfect...400-odd likes can't be wrong!! 😃

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moonlight99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#675

You are amazing with emotions and details. I felt like crying reading about Khushi's difficulty with the language and her anger. I was about to cry but then I remembered that I was in the university library which would have been really embarrassing. Everybody would think I failed a final or something..

But this was a superb set of updates with the detailing and the anger. I wish Arnav gets a sense of his wrongdoings. He isn't being fair to her and her anger is justified. How much more bull is a girl supposed to take?

I wonder if he's going to take her home or not? Waiting eagerly to find out about the next part of the story!

Thanks for updating!

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Hope

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Posted: 12 years ago

#676

Yaar, you are awesome, 4 updates. Love you. You wonderfully depicted Kushi's feelings and her outbrust. I am so happy that all her anguish and frustration is out now. Hope Arnav changes his attitude, stops hurting her and even better if he is friendly with her. Poor Kushi went through enough but no more. Wish you bring little happiness into both their lives soon as since their wedding both are always gloomy and unhappy. Would like to see them being little friendly and understanding towards each other. And DAMN! can't wait for them to fall in love.

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prshetty

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Posted: 12 years ago

#677

You write so beautifully. One can actually visualize the scenes... Can't wait for the next update

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hellgirl

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Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#678

Omg 4 parts wow...
That was so beautifully potrait,the feeling ,emotions everythng is wow..
Khushi's outbrust is amazing...
All bottled up emotions finally out...
Aur wo bhi itni acchi tarah se...
Loved it