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sarb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#651

Great work.

DId not have the words to describ love all the chapter read it in on go...

👏👏👏👏👏

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darya20

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Posted: 12 years ago

#652

superrrb

i loved the way khushi shouted waw that is wt arnav deserved muah to khushi :P

i was so angry when khushi didnt say anyting when he came late instead just become happy 😡

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Kishmish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#653

That's some treat for someone in deep depression ... Thanks just saw all the updates ... 🥳 Party time ...

Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago

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Suma_786

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Posted: 12 years ago

#654

Wow. Amazing update. Loved khushis outburst and puting arnav back in his place ?

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shonagudia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#655

wow 4 parts... You are truly on roll ...
Loved the parts. From Khusi's fear to anger and finally the outburst. It's much needed. I loved the way she threw back everything on Arnav's face. Specially when she declared that "she doesn't accept him as her husband" My heart really went for her .It' so true that in mrg a gal has to sacrifice the most in making the mrg work. Every morning she has to put up a smile for the whole family just to make sure everyone is happy.
I hope Arnav did apologize cos he felt he did wrong and not because of he 's shocked or surprised to see Khusi like this. . Make Khusi always this strong ...

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--BumbleBee--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#656

Firstly, awesome updates.

The flow of thoughts in the update was- for lack of a better word- awesome!.

Love the way you have brought out all of Khushi's pent up emotions- her anger, pain, frustration, fear.

Beautifully penned.

How you have brought out the fact that Arnav thinks of her as nothing more than a responsibility, but without any attached feelings. beautiful.

Could you please give a detailed account of Arnav's feelings when she goes missing and when she is yelling at him? I would love to read it..

I read all 4 parts and was going to go to the next page to read the next chapter when I realized you had updated only till chapter 27.

I loved this mega update.

Please please update sooon.

Waiting to see what effect this confrontation has and how it changes the dynamics in their relationship.

Can we hope for another mega update?😛

Edited by AparnaKrish - 12 years ago

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romaria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#657

ooh i luvd it !! amazing .. especially d way u built up khushi's anger n frustration ultimately leading to her epic outburst .. brilliantly written !! that i cud actually feel her anger irritation n pain n wanted to slap arnav myself for being so stuck up n acting so high n mighty as if he was d only one suffering in this marriage ! awesome ! m a huge fan now :) he he ! :D

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Eleanor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#658

Apologies for missing the last 2 updates- I have been away on holidays but I am back now and thanks for so many parts- had a great time reading all of them together. Coming to the chapters:It was going to explode- the vent up anger, the confusion and most importantly the hurt. I feel for Khushi- she doesn't deserve this kind of treatment and all that she was feeling was going to surface soon- I am glad that it did. Arnav needs someone who is patient with him but at the same time someone who can let him know how it is. I love the journey that your taking with Khushi- she is turning into a strong willed girl- it's not that she wasn't stronger before but the strength she has been achieving is clear in the chapters.

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sonia jangotra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#659

arnav can become lion for the world but before khushi he is a lamb. it was necessary for arnav to know that others too have feelings. khushi was pushed in the marriage like him. now arnav will actually start f thinking from his heart. hope he realises value of khushi before it's too late. want to see nk for jealousy. i m waiting for arnav to get a push of jealousy.

Edited by jangotrasonia - 12 years ago

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momb24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#660

I came across this story by chance yesterday, and I am extremely happy I did, I spent every spare time I had since than in completing reading all chapters. Apologies for not commenting until now; you are an extremely talented writer who has captured my attention with your writing as I was too eager to complete reading until there were no more chapters left.

I'll keep a look out for the next chapter😊