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Mints23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#661

4 at one go... 👏

Awesome updates dear... the more you write the more I want to read!! 😊

Update soon!!

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Saraa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#662

Am I really dreaming? You updated four parts in one go!

I loved the display of emotions! I was actually on the verge of crying on seeing Khushi's State!

In this FF, I used to consider Arnav the Satan but he turned out to be good!

Khushi could have fainted and I would have loved Arnav cursing himself for her state! That's only the place where it could have got an edge otherwise it was picture perfect!

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Saraa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#663

Can you please make them go on whitesand beach there in Australia? Its an amazing beach and one of the most beautiful beaches in the whole world.

Have you been there? You live in Melbourne don't you?

And I loved Arnav apologizing! And I just admired his words which he said with emotions!

I love you Krani as a writer!
You are one of the few writers who expresses all the emotions through her words!

I just have one line for you-

HATS OFF TO YOU!!

LOVE YA!
Saraa

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Polkadots78

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Posted: 12 years ago

#664

Ah angst! How beuatifully you write angst...I was swallowing hard to get rid of the lump in my throat when I was reading 27 and the built up to it in the previous chapters was spot on.

Thank you for posting these updates together. It was so much more effective to have the emotions of the previous chapters intact when reading the next chapter.. It was just an emotional ride..I can only imagine how drained you must have felt penning these updates down...

I huge round of applause to you...👏

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zonera1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#665

Wow!That was truly brilliant!Loved Khushi's outburst!That was fully justified.

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Kishmish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#666

Awsome ...

Can understand the feeling of desolation ... feeling unwanted ... and a myriad of other feelings go through her mind at being left alone as though just discarded aside as some unnecessary unwanted baggage ...

Her outburst was absolutely necessary to make Arnav realise his mistake ...

and make the rightful amends ... am so glad she gave it off to him ...

more to come ...

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garash

@garash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#667

loving the way the story is shaping. i especially liked that the main protagonists do not dive into the feeling of love. I loved the way that you have taken the characters and given them more depth. lovely keep it up!!!!

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crizal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#668

hailla itne sundar parts...u wrote well dear👍🏼

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kunav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#669

got to know about your story today and it's an awesome piece of work!!! i'm just in love with the storyline and the characters...never been amazed.. i'm just sad that u stopped here when i so wanted to know how it will unfold further, the feelings of both of them, will they be in love soon...but guess i have to wait a little bit...but i think your updates will be worth the wait...so waiting waiting waiting waiting and waiting

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raapunzel...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#670

was eagerly waiting 4 ur updates...thanx a lot for fis triple dhamaka...u r brilliantly potrayd khushi...wonderful...beautiful...amazingg...
waiting for another wonderful.update...