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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#641

Krani, you are on a roll! 4 updates in a day??

I really feel for Khushi and I am glad she retaliated finally. I think she has taken enough shit from him already.
I thing Arnav is kinda emotionally stunted , for all his cunning and sharp business acumen. He deserves tight slap (Not necessarily physical). I hope Khushi has the spunk to drive some sense into his head!

Though you gave 4 updates now I am impatiently looking forward to what happens next.

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#642

Please update soon!!!!

Its been so long!

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Shreya

@-MKB-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#643

Phew

Ok I read the entire story in one go

And have just one word for it -PERFECT...

Loved the way you showed Arnav as a dark personality and did it not make him fall for her due to her looks

Loved the way he was shown as the same ruthless egoistic arrogant rich business man ...and I hated him in this story...

Let's see if my hatred turns into love

And as for Khushi my heart just reached out for her..and in few instances I cried with her...it was so heart breaking to see Khushi 's pain

I so want to see Arnav regretting bad time for all of it

And this time Khushi should show attitiude BAS

And you are one fabulous writer..keep it up

Pleas update soon...will be waiting for it :)

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Deepa876

@Deepa876

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Posted: 12 years ago

#644

Hey Krani, I think I've already posted my comment before but in case I'm wrong than do let me tell you that u are just amazing, brilliant, fantastic & just the best writer on this forum ever. I was reading the chapters again & once more I had tears running down my face during Khushi's emotional outburst. Arnav totally had this comng to him, now I hope he tries to redeem himself & this marriage cos looks like there won't be any more efforts from Khushi's side.
Again thank u for the 4 updates & for writing so brilliantly :)

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Barun_Addict

@Barun_Addict

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#645

omg just loved the updates...!!!!

i love your FF because of its pace...👍🏼

its slow and that is why i love it more...!!!

i love slow romantic stories much more...

anyways enough of my blabbering...😆

i just loved the khushi's outburst...👏

u added everything in it...

all of arnav's anger his views on their marriage...

his rude behaviour his constant taunts to her about her status...

it was just perfect...

plus i don't think you have not missed anything in her outburst...!!

i even cried when i was reading about khushi's turmoil

how she thinks that no1 loves her anymore...and at her buaji's house every1 just used to adore her...!!! 😭

also i loved the fact that arnav did not fall for khushi for her looks..

instead he was attracted to her because she made every1 happy in RM...be that shyam or anjali or nani...!!! 😃

all in all a perfect !!! 😳

P.S u were right these updates were highlights of your FF...!!! 😉

Edited by arshiobsessed - 12 years ago

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shona136

@shona136

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Posted: 12 years ago

#646

i truly luved the way arnav said enough quite a few times in a whispering and low voice...shows the inside he knows he was wrong in what he did...shows his inner turmoil as well...great work...😃😃 👏👏

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noreen

@noreen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#647

GREAT UPDATES!!!!!!!!!

THNKS!!!!!!!!!!

you must have worked overtime doing all these ud in one go!! really appreciate the hardwork👏

i am glad khushi has made her feelings verbal, she truly deserves some respect

arnav has heard khushi's dilemma ,will this make him repent and soften towards khushi? i hope so!!!!

eagerly waiting for more!!

p.s. please ud the excellent ff caught, thnks!!!!

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Wah_taj

@Wah_taj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#648

um sorrriee...but m already stalking for the next updates 😕 i just cant wait..see,wt ur ff has done to me

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kinjalcp87

@kinjalcp87

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Posted: 12 years ago

#649

khusi did nice with arnav he has to learn when he is not giving respect to her how can he expect to follow him like his servant and listen his nonsense