Door Jakar Bhi Tum...(ak)ch-14 pg.20 - Page 8

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Posted: 19 years ago
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I'm so so srry I couldn't continue. My tests were going on and my comp. had some problem in it 4 a couple of days.
Well now to continue.


CHAPTER 10

She turnes around to c angad.

A= kri…p…

But kripa just walked backwards ant turned aroung and walked rite into nishant and kanan.

N= thanks so much Tanya . ajj thurari vegh se mhuge appna pyar vopis mil gaya.

K= please nishant yum mere friend hoo aur dost ke liye intna chalta hain.

Ka= ya kri.. Tanya thanks a lot

K= kanan tum bhi app thanks bolna band karo aur jao enjoy karo.

N= actually hum aur bhi app se kuch manga na chatte hain.

K= kya

N= please ajj app humari liye ek gana ga dejeye.

K= what

N= yes plese iss din ko yadgar banana ke liye.

After a lot of insisting kripa gave in and went towards the stage with nishant.

N= ladies and gentleman . today we have a special person who will sing ………Tanya .

The lights went dim and kripa started singing

Lamha lamha zindagi hain
Lamha lamha pyar bhi hain
(by asha bosle) not gonna post it because I know no one reads them ;)

Theuught the song she walked around nishant and kanan and bumped into angad too. But walked away now on the stage she was done and everone clapped as no one knew she sang that good kripa was walking away when she heard angad

Tu hi meri shabb hain subha hain
Tu hi din hain mera
(gangster)

He was sitting on a stool with his guitar and looking straight at kripa while singing . kripa ingnored it and was talking to the guests. His song was over too and nishant came up too her and sais please app aur angad el gana ga de jeye. After arguing a lot kripa gave in.
Kripa walked up to the stage where angad was waitning 4 her. She closed her eyes and started singing .a lso remembering the time they both had sung together.

Meri zinsagi mein aee hoon aur asse aee hoon tum( armaan)

Throught the song angad tries getting close to her but she kept her distance.

The song was over and kripa rushed ou of the hall. But she felt someone grab her hand real hard and knew it was anagd.

K= mera haath chooro

A= tum mhuge ase ignore nahin kar sakti plese kripa I need to talk to u ( sort of pleading)

K= I said leave me (shouting)

At the same time tannu. Buaji. Nishnat and kanan came

Tannin = how dare u Tanya how could talk to angad like that. He is such a big rock satr and u , a simple governess who wanted to owm a fortume and that's why u were marrying my chachu. But he left u 4 good. And now when u have caught a bigger fish u r showing ur dramas what Tanya wha.

Some1= just shut up tannu (sounding real angry) and this voice belonged to angad.

A= do u know who the he** ur talking to

Tannu= taken back= ya… Tanya…

A= ye koi tnay wanya nahin hain iska namm hain kripa.

K= angad ..please

A= no because of me u hve tolertated a ot not anymore now
Looking at everone now and saying

A= yeh hain kripa khanna ………. MRS. Kripa angad khanna.

Everyone just stopped dead in their tracks




How was it????

G2g bye
Edited by BABY-GIRL7 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#72
wow!! amazing!! i wish this would happen in the show!! lol!! amzing once again! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: .:KYPHlOvEr88:.

wow!! amazing!! i wish this would happen in the show!! lol!! amzing once again! 😊

thnaks a lot😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
gr8, awesome, can't wait for the next part too. plz can you post it today or tomm. plz plz plzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey great part! We dont need Ekta for KYPH all we need is you! I wish this would happen in the show!
Continue soon! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#76
Great part!!!

Plz cont very soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#77
awesome part cont soon plz !!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#78
really great part...someone finally put tannu in her place....hopefully angad and kripa will get back together 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#79
cool..hope u continue soon coz i cant wait to find out what happens next
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Posted: 19 years ago
#80
Baby Girl 7 u wrote tht the song meri zindagi main ayay ho is frm the movie kuch na kaho well its wrong its frm the movie Armaan of anil kapoor preeti zinta 😊

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