Door Jakar Bhi Tum...(ak)ch-14 pg.20 - Page 9

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Posted: 19 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: me_iq

Baby Girl 7 u wrote tht the song meri zindagi main ayay ho is frm the movie kuch na kaho well its wrong its frm the movie Armaan of anil kapoor preeti zinta 😊

Iqra

oops😕

srry i didn't relize that

but thanks

i'll continue later on as i have a test 2morrow

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Posted: 19 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7

oops😕

srry i didn't relize that

but thanks

i'll continue later on as i have a test 2morrow

its okkie ..np...okkie i m gonna wait

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Posted: 19 years ago
#83
awesome part i just read the whole story awesome
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Posted: 19 years ago
#84
well done datz reli good...i tink u shud tke ektas place lol...u will rox!!! 👏 👏 👏
Edited by Rim_ - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#85
thanks a lot next part up in 10 mins
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Posted: 19 years ago
#86
CHAPTER 11

A=shouted again=yeh hain meri zindagi, mera pyar , mera sabkuch yeh hain kripa meri biwi.

All of a sudden anagd felt his hand being jerked away. He looked at kripa with a question in his eyes .because she had jerked angads hand away from hers.

A= kri..p…

K= bas . bohth hogya. Tum ne mhuge samaj kya raka hain. Jab chaha nikal diya zindagi se aur jab chaha bula liya. Huh . what do u think of urself. (tears streaming down her face). Main bhi ek insane hoon ek insaan.

And saying that she turned around and ran up the stairs towards her room.
Angad was just left heart-broken . and tears started swelling up in his eyes too. He knew kripa was rite he hadn't trusted her and he punished her 4 something she hadn't done. He felt totally broken from the inside.
All of a sudden he felt a hand on his shoulder.

Nishant= angad jao aur ta.. srry kripa ko manou

A= tum ye.. saab

N= kanan ne mhuge saab bata diya shaddi ke baad isle maine kripa ko force kara that ganne ke leye.

A= main hi befkoof tha . usse ne kuch nahin kiya aur maine usse sazza de di.

N= ha mhuge saab pata hain usse thume bacchane ke liye jhooth bola.

A= tum ye saab.

N=looking towards kanan= kanan ne mhuge saab baya diya.

A= thume pata tha…… ki kripa ne …jhooth……bola tha.

Ka= looking down= ha

A= temper rising= phir batya kyun nahin thume….ne mhuge se bhi…..

K= I'm srry par kripa ne vaada kar vaya tha ke main ye baath kisiko na bathou. Aur mhuge maana padha kyonki thumse phele vo meri dost hain.

A= par

N= abb time mat waste karo aur jao isse mainou.

With that angad ran up the stairs. He only knew one thing he had to get kripa back. He never hated her but loved her and wanted her back at any cost.

While kripa was standing at her window still and thinking of what had just happened . everyone knew who she really was . but the thing that scared her most was what would angad do.
And while thinking she felt a hand on her shoulder and turnred to c angad before her.

A= kri..pa I'm…

K= please angad just go from here

A= par

K= sternly= just go

And she brushed past him but angad caught her hand and pulled her against him (like in yesterdays's episode)
Kripa was struggling to ge her hand free but coulnd't while anhad was just watching her

K= angad let me of me chooro mera haath

A= kripa ………. Why do u always do this to me huh tum hamesha mere saath hi yeh kyon karti hoon.

K= looking up at him now= kya kiya maine huh thume bacchane ke liye jhooth bola hain bolo tho ? abb kya?
Finally realeased her hand and turned her back to him

A= batha kyon nahin phir

Now turned towards him . they both had tears in their eyes.

K= batha nhain angad? Kine bar batane ki koshish ke ? uss rath bhi maine kaha tha ki maine thumse k zarrori baath karne hain jabb tum un ladkiyon ko ghar laye the par thumne……. Angad please go

Now stepping infront of kripa.

A= nahin kripa agar maine nahin uss waqt thumari baath nahin suni to phir tum mhuge batadeti khabhi bhi chaye kaise bhi par tum ne kya kiya mhuge, appne ghar aur sur ko choor kar chale geyae . kyon akkir kyon

Both with tears in their eyes

K= kyonki main cahhti thi thum mhuge se nafrat karo . kyunki agar hum phir se mil bhi jate tho mishty vopis akkar appne badla zarror lete.
App thume sari baath pata chale gaye to tum……..

A= main kya………..( afraid of what she would say)

K= jao yaha se and turned aroung

A= kripa main jaoonga to zarror par thumare bina nahin.

K= turned around= kya

A= kripa I'm … srrry maine itne baddi galti kar di par please forgive me please meri saath chalou came back to me.

K= what do u think of urself angad .
Huh jab chaha nikal diya aut jab chaha vopis bula liya .

A= please kripa….

K= uss rath thume ne kaha tha ki maine thume dookha diya par main kethe hoon ki thumne dookha di hain.
Ka ha tha ke mhuge pyar ka matlab nahin pata par main kethe hoon ki thume pyar ka matlab nahin pata.
Thume ne kaha tha ke maine saari dunya ko humari beeche anne diya par main khete hoon ki thumne, thumne saari dunya ko harami beech anne diye saari duniya ko

Saying that angad knew what he had to do.
He took kripa's hand and dragged her out of the room.

K= angad ye tum kya kar rahe hoon chooro mhuge.

Angad dragged her acroos the room where everyone was sitting, waiting 4 them( nishnat , kanan, bua ji, dadi ect..) (but all the guests were gone). Evyone stood up but angad didn't stop.
Angad took her to the mandap picked up some sindor that was laying on the pooja thali and filled kripa's mang with it so fast that no one had even time to react

A= to kripa= mitha diya dunya ka fassa humari beech

K= while kripa just touched her mang and then looked at her fingers. And turned and ran back to her room.

Nishant= kuch hua , voh manie

A= abb jada manana nahin pade ga ahhda kam to hogya.

AND SAYING THAT ANGAD ALSO WENT AFTER KRIPA

How was the part?
Srry but g2g bye



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Posted: 19 years ago
#87
awwwwwwwww...... awesome!!! 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#88
omg!!!

awesome part!!!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#89
great part i hope he is able to get her back that would be great
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Posted: 19 years ago
#90
awww that was an amazing part 😳

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