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PART 16

G-Sure. Here's the pass

She gives him

M-oh chlo phir ye show bhi dekh lete hain

G-Will you come?

M-What? We aren't going together?

G-Arre I will have to prepare and go early naa

M- Prepare for what? I am not a psychic here

G-For the show naa

Maan opens the door for her

M- What show?

G-Maaan don't you know what show?

M-Geet, no I don't. I said I am not a psychic

G-Then don't speak to me ever

M-Fine be like that. I won't come

G-What classes do I go in?

M-Violin

G-Then????????

M- So you have a concert, not a show

G-Tch ! Its not on a big level

M-Tch tch! It's still called a concert

G-No its not. There will be some arabic dance and all too, then some group will also be performed, then lots of things

M-Arabic dance? You mean like belly dance and all?

G-Yes

M- ok so when does this thing start?

G-7

M-And we call such a thing an exhibition. So you want me to drop you at your home or where this event will be held?

G-Home. Actually you can drop me here. I'l take a cab

M-Why would I do that now?

G- Because that place is really far

He ignores the topic

M-So what are you playing, classical? Anything I would know? And when is the dance? Before or after your show?

Geet, who was in her own thoughts, says-

G-You know, tomorrow I guess I wouldn't be able to come home in the night, will have to stay with the group, as it would be late

M- I'll drop you, no problem and I'll pick you up if it's that late; you don't have to stay there

G-No..I am a performer I will have to wait after the show ends and formalities etc

M-And I am saying that I'll wait till late

G-But why? You don't have too

M-Why not?

G-Its really far Maan

M-So what? I like driving

G-Hmm

Maan drops Geet at the venue

M-Andar aao naa

He goes inside

M-Should you be introducing me around? Kisi ne tumhari maa ko bata diya to?

Geet holds his hand and drags him

He quickly follows

G-You sit here, I'll just come

M-ok

Udhar sab wo dancers aur sexy German belle dancers practice bhi kar rahi thi

Maan ko bithake gai Geet

He gets up looks around, takes note of the program sequence

Wo saari ladies wahan Maan ko private si smile pass karti hain

Maan smiles back in acknowledgement but he just gives a hello wali polite smile

As the queue starts and the belle dancers were thumkauing

Geet is visible in a line as the stage is still under construction, praying as her lips were moving in nervousness

Dance hota hai, uske baad ka bhi performance hota hai

Maan bhi vantage point se enjoy kar raha hai

Geet is looking for Maan's reaction as dance is happening

He likes the dance

But like in general we all like good quality dance, nothing about wanting the dancers

The dance ends

Jaise sabne applaud kiya, Maan ne bhi kiya

Geet ka group enters

Everyone is blind there except Geet

Maan gives her thumbs up

She smiles

They start playing the initial node

'Stoppp !'

Someone says on the mic

'Who's this gal on the right? Third right'

The coordinator's voice booms on the mic

Geet par spotlight

Geet bechari blank

Maan is confused

'Gal,out frm there'

Geet frowns quizzically

'Don't you know it's a special show by blinds?'

G-But'but..I am blind'I mean I was till I had a surgery'

Her lips are quivering

G-I practiced a lot'I read Braille and I'I have been in the group from a young age

'But thing is, you aren't blind now, so don't waste our time. LEAVE'

Maan is silent though he feels bad for Geet par wo kya kar sakta hai; although he organizer shouldn't get so rude

Should he say something? He doesn't know if he should

He is willing to but he is not sure if he should intrude in Geet's life like this... dono ka milna and spending time alone is one thing lekin if he speaks for her like this in public then they will be linked

He is not sure ki Geet phir ussi par gussa na ho jaye besides usse Geet par bharosa hai

Wo usse lad padi to ye tuchha organizer kya cheez hai

Geet looks around in verge of breaking down, takes her violin and exits

She does not want to fight, she is feeling lost, she was not blind not normal; somewhere in middle, nobody is accepting her; as if her identity was lost

In violin class also she has felt cold shoulders, jealousy, diffrent behavior

She is upset

She goes off from stage

Maan rushes to her side

Par najaane kahan chali gai, mil nahi rahi

He calls her but she disconnects the phone

Maan goes and waits near the exit, jayegi to wahan se hi jayegi

But after a while when she doesn't come then Maan he goes and looks for her

Geet kisi wood ke stairs ke upar andhere mein baithi hai

M- Geet? Are you ok?

She had hidden her pace in her palms as she hears him she springs up

He goes and sits beside her and puts his hand on her back

M- Geet?

She takes her violin and starts walking

He holds her hand

M- Kahan bhag rahi ho?

She jerks his hand

M- What? Maine kya kiya hai? Mujhse kyun nahi bol rai ho?

She starts walking again

He holds her back once again

G-Pleaseee!

M- Please what dammit

G-Leave me alone. Mujhe kisi se koi baat nahi karni

M- Mujhse kyun durr jaa rahi ho?

He pulls her close

G-Ahhh!!! JUST LEAVE ! Please chodo

She pushes him a little

M- Shout if that makes you feel batter. You wanna fight? Hit me? Go ahead hit me

G-Tch! Just leave me

M- No

G-Pleaseee

She hisses

G-Leaveee

M-Geet, you are upset. Why should I leave you when you are upset? Come here darling

G-I am not upset !

He pulls her close again

M-Shh

G-I can handle it. Leaveee

M- Off course you can

G-And, I am no darling of yoursss

She pushes him

M- Off course you are. No? You don't like darling? How about babes?

G-Justtt shut up !!!!!!!!

She hisses

M-Baby?

G-Shut up!

M-Honey?

She snapsss

She is really irritated

G-Let go of me

M- Never

G-This is no time to flirt !!!!!!!!!!!! Just leaveee. Gooo

M- Do I look like I am flirting? Would I have come after you if I was just a flirt?

Geet looks away

She doesn't know the answer

M- Hey. Look at me. I am not playing around with you ok. I crack jokes coz they make you happy, nothing else

Her lip wobbles

M-Don't worry about this show

He holds her hand and guides her into his car

She is gravely silent all the while

He looks at her and stops the car near an ice cream trolley, in an attempt to make her little happy

M- Kya khaogi?

Geet to ankhein band

M- Geet... kaunsi ice cream khaogi?

He nudges he shoulder gently

She opens her eyes looks around ki ghar nahi hai, looks at him questioningly

M- Ice cream?

She shakes her head

M-Nahi? Phir meri mrei se mat mangna 'ek bite ek bite'

She shakes her head and closes her eyes

M-Kha lo..tell me your flavor. You liked chocolate and vanilla, right? Which one you like more?

Geet kuch naa bole

Maan khud hi apna judgment use kar ke le leta hai

Opens up one for her and puts it in her hand

M- Nahi khai to tumhare upar phighal jayeegi

She takes it

Maan bhi apni khane lagta hai

M-To ab aage ka kya plan hai?

She looks at him questioningly

M-Well?

She looks away

M-Theek hai mat batao.. but here is what I think'you play well enough.. Obviously your group overlooked the fact that you can see and the organizers didn't and hence the whole situation' no one's fault although people could have been more polite...next step which I would taken have I been in your place is to join another group more advanced and there won be any ore blind people in it coz you love to play and you won't want to give it up coz of some silly miscommunication

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M-Well, so what? We'll learn

He says with an encouraging smile

Edited by storywriter - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the part ! geet finding herself in between two parts of the world... but loved maan here...how he is trying to encourage her to take a step ahead...never leaving her to fight in her own misery...trying to cheer her up...
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Posted: 12 years ago


awesome update...

last mein couple of dialogues mein Maan-Geet ke dialogues badal gaye...

Maan is interested in belly dance more than Geet's Violin show...

but organizers didn't let participate because she is not fully blind now or not fully cured...her eyesight is hanging in between right now...

loved how Maan tried to cheer her up...and made her understand that taking part in this show is not necessary then practicing with different group...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...



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Posted: 12 years ago
wid evry next update I love dis ff even more.
so now maan will make geet read n dat too wid faster pace...
conti soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
I can so relate to geet's feeling of being in the middle and not fitting either one! (Although its not the same scenario)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Her dreams shattered Yaar...bichari and maan is pacifying her...
lovely
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nice to c him be there for her...
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 16

She looks away

M-Theek hai mat batao.. but here is what I think'you play well enough.. Obviously your group overlooked the fact that you can see and the organizers didn't and hence the whole situation' no one's fault although people could have been more polite...next step which I would taken have I been in your place is to join another group more advanced and there won be any ore blind people in it coz you love to play and you won't want to give it up coz of some silly miscommunication

G-Cant read notes

M-Well, so what? We'll learn

He says with an encouraging smile

M-Let's put other things on hold then

G-Listen, I can help myself. I don't need anybody's care or sympathy

M-Sympathy sounds awfully like pity. I understand why you don't want that. But what's wrong with care? You don't want it but it's good, personal experience'remember when I had that hangover and you took care of me... even I hadn't wanted it but it was good that you did take care of me

G-I don't want your or anybody's care

M-You don't want but you need it. There's a difference

He starts the car again

M-Let's meet tomorrow and see what we can do

Geet doesn't say anything

Maan pats her head once

M-It'll be ok. Don't worry

He drives silently drops her home

Geet chali jaati hai, bina kuch kahe

Agle din-

1.30 baje nahi aai

Wo toMaan ko pata hai ki aaj class nai jayegi, kya karegi jaa kar. Par 5.30 bhi nahi aai

Maan ne call kiya, nahi uthaya

2-3 bar call karta hai

G-Hmm

M- Kahan ho?

G-Ghar

M-Mujhse nahi milogi?

G-uh hun

M-Tumahri maa kuch nahi kahegi?

G-uh hun

M- Main aa jaun phir milne?

G-uh hun

M-Aese to nahi chalega. Chalo mujhse milne aao tumhara mood bhi achaa ho jayega

G-uh hun

M-See its either you coming or me coming

G-Maan, nahi

M-Ahh! Finally aapne muh to khola. Achha batao aaj nahi to kal milogi?

G-Nahi

M-Fir kab milogi?

G-Kabhi nahi

M-Mujhse breakup kar rahi ho?

She smirks

G-Hmm

Maan laughs aloud

M-Jaise main karne dunga. Tumhara mood off hai isiliye socha ki theek hai , aaj mann nahi hai tumhara kahi jaane ka to chodo I shouldn't insist lekin agar tumhe laga ki I'll let you continue this to..you know what I am gonna do?

G-Maan stop joking around! Stop doing this!

M- I am not joking and I haven't done anything yet

G-Kya hai ye sab break up-wreak up

M-You don't know? Dekho when two people are seeing each other in capacity of more than just friends then if they fall of that relationship its said that they have broken up

G-Tch! I know. We are not seeing each other

M- Not right now in literal sense but otherwise we are. I thought you know that

G-Stop it. This is not a joke. Tum logon ke lie joke honge, mere lie nahi hai

M-Why does everything I say come out as a joke to you? And, I am definitely not joking. Kaan kholkar sun lo; tumhe kuch bhi lagta ho ki ye kuch bhi hai main tumhe bata chuka hoon I am not playing around with you . I am serious about you. Tumhe aaj nahi milna theek hai, nahi milte kyunki tumhara mood zyada kharab hai, you don't wanna go out. But I am not gonna be around dwindling my thumb waiting for you. I'll come and get you out of your house or call your mother

Geet is stupefied for a moment, and then she gathers her words and says

G-Serious about me..in what sense?

M-Serious about you in sense that not everything I say to is a joke, you better start to believe it

G-Maan'ye..ye'ye break up nahi hai.. Maan break up wahan hota hai jahan...

M-Whatever, it is not happening

G-Whatever..it's not a break up

M-Fine then since nothing is wrong we are meeting tomorrow. I'll let you go back to your melancholy now

G-Tum itne ziddi kyun ho?

M-Well.. I frankly don't know; maybe coz I've always got what I wanted or maybe I just like having things my way. It's not like you didn't know I am like this; so what are you complaining about?

G-Tum chahte kya ho?

M- Why are you asking me that? Kitni baar ek baat hi wapas bolun main?

G-Ek baar ache se clear kar do, main wo deke chutti kar lun

M- Now what are you talking about hmm?

G-Why don't you just answer?

M-I am a greedy guy... I want it all.. not just one thing...or just once

She raises an eyebrow

G-All means what?

M-Your time, your attention, your sweet company and everything else what comes with it, daily

G-I am no celebrity that you would want that so badly

M-Digging for praises Geet?

G-O please

She rolls her eyes

M-Well, then why all the questions...'what's so special about me?' 'Am I a celebrity?

Maan says in a bad imitation

G-Well, the point is'

M-umhmm

G-'find someone else to play with

She disconnects

He calls her again

G-What? I don't want your explanation

M- I am not playing with you. I don't know what'll make you believe that? And, we are meeting tomorrow, bring your violin along

Maan ne kaata is bar phone

Geet ne bhi nahi kiya phone

She goes to kitchen where maa is

Maa- Arre tu taiyaar nahi hui? Tujhe padhne nahi jaana?

G-Maa, maine aap se jhooth kaha [head low]

Maa-Kya?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

G-Wo koi teacher nahi

Ma-Kaun?

G-Naa hi meri koi saheli hai

Maa-Kaun saheli?

G-Jiska maine zikr kiya

Maa-To phir kaun hai?

G-Maan Singh Khurana

Maa- Ye to tere techer ka naam hai. Tu pehle se jaanti thi? Saheli kyun kaha usse?

Geet nods

G-Aap mana karti..daanti islie

Maa frowns

G-Sorry maa

Maa- To ye ladka koi teacher bhi nahi hai?

G-Sikhata hai, jitna bann padta hai. Professional teacher nahi hai

Maa- To waise kya kaam kart hai? Yaa awaara hai

G-Maa, yaad hai meri kisi se ladai ho gai thi, police ko bulwaya tha. Meri surgery ke baad jab main pehle din jaa rahi thi class

Maa-Haaan

G-Ye wohi hai

Maa-Wo ..woo..!!!!!!!!!!!! Teri usse kyun baat hoti hai? Aur ye sab mujhe aaj kyun bata rahi hai? Huh?

Geet chup

Maa-Ussi ne sikhaya hoga tujhe ye sab jhoot bolna haina

G-Maa, wo kyun sikhayega

Maa-Khud to gawar badtmmez hai hi, saath mei tujhe bhi bana diya. Wohi tuition le raha tha na. Tuition hi le raha tha ya'kuch kiya to nahi usne tere saath? Bol?!!!

G-Nahi maa, wo kya karega, ussi ne hi to mujhe uss din kuch lafango se bachaya tha, bataya tha naa maine

Maa-Tu nahi jaanti ye log kaise hote hain. Tujhe kuch bhi pata to hai nahi. Tujhe behla fusla ke kuch bhi kare, phir na tu mana karegi; aur jab mann bhar jaega to tujhe chod dega. Unn lafango se bhi bhida sirf tera bharosa jeetne ko; usse kya padi hai, aur tu' tu aaj bata rahi hai ye sab mujhe

G-Mujhe bhi laga ki itna bada aadmi..mujhe kyun. Par jitni baar mujhe aisa laga, usne kaha 'I am serious about you'

Maa-Wo to kuch bhi kahega. Mujhe aur baat nahi karni hai iss bare mein. Kal se kahin bahar jaane ki zaruruat nahi hai tujhe. Sahi hua ye gana bajana ka silsila bhi khatam. Main sahi aadmi ko dundh rahi thi par aag to tujhe lagi thi

G-Maa, aisa mat kaho uske baare mein. Wo bohot caring, bohot parwah karta hai meri

Ma-- Chup!!! Ek shabd aur bola to muh sil doongi. Pehli hi pata nahi kya kaam karke aati hai ab mujhse zabaan ladati hai. Caring to wo hai, main to dushman hoon teri; tera bhala sochti hi nahi hoon. Sab meri hi galti hai. Main hi bewakoof thi jo tujh bewakuuf par bharosa kar baithi. Meri hi kismat phooti hai ki meri beti ne mujhe aaj aese din dikhaye

Ma grows hysterical

G-Maa, aisa kya kiya hai maine. Jab Kiara sau ladkon ke saath ghumti hai tab to aapko nahi dikhta

Ma-Wo to hai hi aisi, haath se bahar. Kam se kam ye hi soch ke khushh ho leti thi ki meri ek beti achhi hai, sachhi hai; lekin meri aisi kismat kahan

G-Maa, aap agar Kiara pe bekaar paabandiyan nahi lagati to haath se bahar nahi jaati wo. Hum par bharosa kyun nahi karti tum?

Ma-Bharosa nahi karti, nahi karti??!!!!!

Maa is shouting and crying

Ma-Dekh lia bharosa karke kya hua teri behen ka? Bharosa karke tujhe akele bheja to dekh liya kaise ladke se jaan padi aur kehti hai maine pabandiyaan lagai. Haan aur jahill hoon main to, : khushi nahi dekhi jaati mujhse meri betiyon ki haina.

G-Kaise ladke se? Maan bohot acha ladka hai

Ma- Naam mat le uska mere saamne. Aur ab to tu waise bhi meri kahan sunegi. Meri baatien to hathkadiyaan hai, jo karna hai kar, jisse milna hai mil. Uske baad jo karna hai kar. Jab aana hai ao jana hai jao. Main kuch nahi kahungi, samajh lungi tu bhi Kiara ki tarah hai

Ma stalks of to go and cry and sulk in her room

Geet follows ma

G-Maa please mat ro. Mujhe aapko aise dekhke acha lagta hai kya?

Maa to roye jaa rahi hai Geet se muh pherkar

Ma-Jaa yahan se, nahi baat karni tujhse. Tu jaa apne aashiq ke saah. Yahi chahti hai na jaa. Kuch nahi kheh rahi main. Jaa yahan se

G-Koi aashique nahi hai mera, basss dost hai

Maa is beyond reason or listening or rational argument now

Geet bhi chali gai apne room mein, let gai bed par

Usne to bass socha tha ki ab wo jhooth nahi bolegi par agar uski zindagi ka kismat ne ye hi faisla kiya hai to thik h. Waise bhi kya pata, Maan is probably playing with her. There's no reason for him to like her

Aese hi nikal gaya ye poora din

Maa to is behaving coldly indifferent whole day with occasional sniffing an crying spells

Geet bhi kya karti, chup chap book padne ki try karne lag gai par usme bhi Maan ki yaad saath aati hi hai

Next day-

Maan ke tution ka time nikal gaya par Geet phir nahi gai

Maan ne call kia

M- Kahan ho?

G-Maa ne mana kiya hai baat karne se

M-Tumhari maa kyun mana karegi?

G-Kyunki unko sachchai pata hai

Maan is silent for a moment

M- So you told her and she has forbidden you to meet me?

G-Hmm

M- On what grounds?

G-Mera ghar se nikalna band hai

M- What?! That's so archaic. She can't do that. It's like curbing your civil rights. Mujhse problem hai to mujhse nahi milne ko kehna hai, ghar se bahar naa nikalne ka kya matlab banta hai? Tum koi exotic species nahi ho jo tumhe aese band karke rakhe ki koi aur galti se na dekh le

G- I have lost her trust. But it's ok

M- Nothing is ok!

G-She is right. Galti meri hi thi

M-I don't even know what she said but I am sure I won't agree with her. I don't care unhe kya lagta hai ki kiski galti hai. Tum believe karne lagi ho ki tumhari galti hai. What is important is that this be fixed. Tumhari maa ko mujhse objection hai na, theek hai. Main hi aajata hoon, tumhari maa se mil leta hoon. Maine pehle bhi kaha tha par tumhari baat sun kar ruk gaya. Tumahri maa ghar par hi hai na is waqt?

G-Dekho...mujhe tumse nahi milna, kabhi nahi milna

M-Sirf tumhari aur tumhari maa ki kyun hamesha chalti hai? You think I give up that easily? Keh do tumahari maa ko ki main aa raha hoon, jo karna hai kar le

Maan phone kaat deta hai

Geet ko to Maan ka kuch samajh nahi aata, naa apna aata hai, naa iss rishte ka aata hai

Geet soch mein magn Maan ke baare mein house, samajhne ki koshish ki Maan chahta kya hai, what does he actually feel, what does she actually feel

Maan gaadi mein baith kar vroom vroom, target Geet's

Par Maan ko Geet ka flat nahi pata par wo wo pochta hua pohonch gaya

Everyone were tripping over their feet to help him out of curiosity ki chal kya raha hai

Aas paas ke bhi log; ki aaj iss ghar mein ladka kaise, wo bhi itna handsome and 'oh what a hunk' type wala

Thodi der mein Geet ke ghar ka door bell rings

Geet opens

G-Tum??

M- Main. What are you so surprised about? Tumhari maa kahan hai?

G-Ghar pe nahi hai, jao

M- Tch.. maine kaha tha tumse ki maa ko rok kar rakhna. Ab mujhe wait karna padega

He sighs warily

G-Jao tum

M- I am waiting here only. Waise bhi tumhare manners kahan hai? I though your mom taught you better

G-Tumhare manners kahan hai? Akeli ladki ho to chale jana chahie

His jaw drops with surprise at her words

M-As if I have dishonorable intentions? My lady, if we don't have a chaperon around then I shall wait outside your door and enjoy the company of your neighbors. Your virtue shall not be in question

G-Why don't you just go?

M- Tumhari maa se baat karni hai. Sheesh! kitni baar ek baat repeat karaati ho

Geet shuts her mouth

Maan raises his eyebrow

M-Jao andar jao...wo dekho tumahri neighbor aa rahi hai. She guided me to your door; nice little helpful thing. Main yahin tumahri maa ka wait kar leta hoon

G-Well'

She smirks

G-Tumse yehi expect kar sakte hain. Aaj Geet kal Puja, to parso koi duja aur udaane ke lie bohot saare paise

M- Her name is Pooja?

G-Jii, jao line maaro

s- Hmmm, main to yahin khada hoon, usne line marni hai to wo yahan aa sakti hai. Tumhe zyada jealousy hai to tum mujhe andar bula sakti ho. Then you can lock yourself in your room and I can wait in common room. Tumahri marzi hai. See, I am not that stubborn I do give out choices

Geet moves aside

He raises an eyebrow

She pulls him in by his collar

Maan thode halke shock ke baad gives a self satisfied grin

She looks at him blankly

Maan jaakar chup chap jo sofa dikha wahan baithne gaya

Par Geet ne baithne naa dia, haath pakadke khincha, kund gai Sual pe...lipat gai, climbs on him..tip toeing

Almost peeche girne wala tha Maan

He leans against the wall door slant hokar

He bends his knees a little and lets himself get taken advantage off, putting up no resistance at all

He wraps his arms around her tightly; tight enough to let her know he would hold her even if she lets go

M- I missed you too

Geet shuts her eyes...she feels so comfortable...pura din kaisa sa feel kar rahi thi..this was the best feeling

G-Jhooth..

She mutters

M- I missed you more than you know. One day is much more than enough for me. Upar se, I knew how miserable you were. I wanted to come yesterday. I just didn't know if you would come meet me at all

G-Tumne phd ki hai naa

M- Kisme?

G-Jhooth bolne mein

M-Why do you think I am lying? Tum kyun nahi maanti ki main sach keh raha hoon? Kya kiya hai maine jo bharosa nahi hai tumko mujh par? Kaunsa aesa jhoot bola hai?

G-Mujhe lagta hai tum do alag alag insaan ho

M- Kyun?

G-Wo ek insaan hai jisse main mili thi pehle din aur ladi thi aur ye ek alag insaan hai

M-Tch! I am same. Just my feelings for you have changed. Give me another unknown hell cat, I would give her worse treatment than you

G-Then treat her the same way you treat me now? Hmm?

She asks raising her eyebrow

M- Nope. You are an original piece beside, why would I meet her again when I am spending all my free time with you and spending most of my non-free time worrying about you?

G-May be, by chance'.

M-What chance?

G-By any chance

M-You are not just random girl I picked up...I haven't felt what I feel for you for any other girl

Geet looks at him with a happy love expressing eyes

M-And I'll be dammed if I have ever chased anyone else as much as I have chased you and frankly since we have been together ...and even before that, there hasn't been anyone else. Any girl you see hanging around me is just that 'hanging around' and not by my invitation and if it looks like I have sent out invitations then that's probably coz I try to make you jealous

G-You didn't have other friends before me? That's bad

M- You are not just a friend or a friend who is a girl. You are much more than that. Don't have words to explain it, just like you don't have word to explain your action

G-Best friend? That's called best friend?

She asks with an innocent smile

M- No Geet, it's even more than best friend

G-Bestest friend

She announces with a huge ear to ear grin

Maan smiles and then laughs

M- Are you that hopeless or are you pulling my leg? Hmm? I think it's time you read pride and prejudice...

G-I can't read

She says sadly

G-And, why would I pull your leg? And, stop calling me hopeless! You are hopeless. You can't even say bestest friend

M- Well'about reading Pride and Prejudice. I'll read to you or we'll try and see if we can find one in brail...and about emotions, not every emotion and feeling has a name...nor is it always clear

G-But why is it imp to read that book?

M- It is not important. You can read something else too if you want

G-Your emotions are not clear because you are hopeless..you..you are hopeless. you

M- Hmm hmm

He pats her head

M- I know I know... it's all my fault; it's always the guy's fault

G-What? What does that mean?

M-Nothing

G-Is it some new stupid philosophy of yours?

M-Nope, it's an old philosophy of women...

G-Why don't I know about it?

She asks raising an eyebrow

M--Coz you don't live with women other than your mom; which reminds me where is she? I want to meet her. If she thinks I am that bad then we'll have to try and change her opinion

G-Kitty party

M-See even she goes out and socializes, you need too

G-Off course she allows me to socialize

M-With?

G- My friends in the institute

M-But most of them are blind too

G-All of them are

M-So its not balanced socializing. What people with vision do feel think behave react is different, isn't it? Shouldn't you also then try and enlarge your social circle to learn more?

G-I interact with Sid..sometimes

M-People your age...

G-He is my age

M- Sid kaun hai? Tum kisi ladki se baat nahi kar sakti ho? Ladke batayege tumhe saari female philosophy ke baare mein? Hum ko bhi -3 cheezon se zyada kuch nahi pata hota

G-Arre Sid is my sister's boyfriend. Jiski family se uss din milne gaye the aur tumse nahi mil paayi

Maan is silent, he hates this guy already

G-Waise Maan, humne itni baatein kari hain but maine to kabhi tumse pucha hi nahi, whose your girl friend?

She asks smugly

M-Geet... if I had a girl friend.. would you be jealous of her?

G-Why?...Tumhari to girl friend hogi hi

M-Would you be jealous of her or not?

G-Why would I be jelous..no naa. Ab naam to batao. Actually she should be jealous of me..[she chuckles]. You spend most of your free time with me, instead of her

M- To agar main wo tumhari neighbor se baat karta hoon to tumhe kyun problem hoti hai?

She becomes serious now

G-Mujhe kya problem hai karo

M-Maybe some Shakespeare or some other poem...I'll find out. And for the record; I don't have a girl friend. Didn't have one for quite a while and maine nahi kaha ki mujhe kisi aur se baat karni hai

G-Kyun? Why don't you have a girl friend? Strange

M-The girl's in denial. She says we are just friends, she doesn't feel anything more for me

G-Did you tell her about your feelings?

M-I did'she doesn't understand

G-Tumne ghatiya tarike se kaha hoga, ache se kaho, ache se pyaar se samjhaake. Kaise kaha tumne?

M -Maine kaha tha, you are not just a friend or a friend who is a girl; you are much more than that. I don't have words to explain it

Tabhi Maa comes aur Geet ka saara dhyaan maa pe hi chala jaata hai instead of Maan's words

G-Maa !

She squeaks

M-Huh? Oh

G-emm..aao naa

Maa- Mera hi ghar hai!! Mera hi!

G-m..maa..wo..ye'

ma- Kaun ho tum?

Maa asks Maan ignoring Geet

Geet swallows in fear

M- Maan Singh Khurana. Nice to meet you

He says extending his hand

Maa th dekh kar naak chadha leti hai, does not hake hand, dheere dheere karamjala kalmuha...types wale words bad bada rahi hai which no one can hear

G-Ye aapse milne aaye hain

Maan bhi wapas neeche kar leta hai haath with a shrug, then nudges Geet

M- Shouldn't you get her some water or tea ?

Maa snaps-

Maa-Mera ghar!! Main khud le lungi

M- I thought you would be tired, that's all

Maa glares at Maan

Maa- Nikal jayie yahan se aap

M- Pehle aap se baat karni hai phir chla jaunga

G-Maa, maa jaisa aap soch rahi ho aisa bilkul nahi hai; maa, par waise aap soch kya rahi ho?

Maan to soch raha hai ki maa ne aise kya socha jo Geet ne kaha ki aesa kuch nahi hai; baat kis baare mein hai.. Maan to iss soch mein gul

Maa- Tu chup reh. Bilkul chup! Apne kamre mein jaa

G-Maa

Maa- Jaa!!

Par Geet to wahin chipak gai

M- Ahem...

Maa- Theek hai koi mat jao tum dono yahin raho.. jo karna hai'main hi uninvited guest hoon, chali jaati hoon

M-umm nahi please aap mat jayie, main aapse hi milne aaya tha; aya to pata chala ki aap hain nahi. To maine socha ki wait kar loon

Maa- Theek hai, ho gaya wait, aagai main mil liye aap.. ab meherbani karie aur jaiye

Maa hath jod deti hai namaste aap ja sakte hain types

M-umm mujhe aapse kuch baat bhi karni thi

Maa- Mujhe nahi karni hai. Aap jaaiye yahan se aur thodi sharam ho to meri beti ko bhi akela chod dijie

G-Maa, sunn to lo. Maa, aap kaise beizzati kar sakti ho ghar aaye mehmaan ki; aap hi to kehti ho naa mehmaan bhagwaan samaan hota hai

Maa-Tu chup reh! Yahn Raavan bahar khada hai aur tu mehmaan banakar andar bula le; bevakoof!

Maan ko thodi haasi aa jaat hai at Maa's analogy'


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Edited by storywriter - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow..superb update
Just love it
Maan n geet are cute
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Posted: 12 years ago




nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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