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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...luvd virman bonding...they both r protective fr ech other n never let anyone dwn...luv thr emotional bonding...
Cntn soon n thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow yaar awesome pleasee continue...
Cant wait for your PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its so gud hate her uncle. . . Love Virat care fr Manvi. . . I heart ached wen Manvi hated Virat. . . But dey r together again. . . Hope dey will save Deepu. . . Plz update soon. . . N p.m me too
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey hey me again... just commented on your other FF

i haven't read the last few updates which i will soon...
i don't know if you realize it but you have brought up major social problems in this FF: child molestation, eve teasing.. the way you portrayed manvi's feelings and wrote of her dilemma, it couldn't have been better written.. you did justice to both situations, one where manvi was molested by her uncle and the other where she was harassed by some strangers in the parking lot.. you are an amazing writer and the thing i like the most about your FF is that they are so realistic!!

i'm going to finish reading it tonight so i'm going to say update soon because i'm pretty sure i'll want to read more...
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Posted: 12 years ago

***Part19***

Viren's study.

Virat, Manvi and Viren were sitting and thinking about the next course of action. Viren had called their ACP friend Ajay. Ajay was a character. He was a brilliant student while training and the initial year of his taking charge. He had been suspended many times for doing his duty properly. Seeing the unethical use of power and influence in the department, he began to realize how limited his role was. He slowly became a cynic and took his duties with a pinch of resistance and indifference. He was almost always passive-aggressive; always trivializing serious matters.

"Virat, Deepti is the grand daughter of Akash Kashyap, the high court chief justice." Ajay said

"I will not be able to take any legal action without a complaint from the girl or someone from her family. But unofficially, I can help you guys to smuggle her out of the house, without anyone noticing. We can go from there." He said.

"ACP openly commiting to smuggling a girl from her own house??" Viren observed.

Ajay: "If you don't want my help, I will happily go back to my game." He shrugged.

Virat in deep thought: "Nahi bhai. What is that going to do? We need to make her independent, so that she can live the rest of her life fearless and without any interference from her father."

Viren: "Haan Virat, you are right, but we don't have time for that. Our main concern is to get her out, like now."

Virat: "There is one way, where we can stop the marriage and get him arrested."

Viren, Ajay and Manvi looked at him with full attention.

He went and kneeled in front of Manvi. "Manvi, we will need your help." He explained her and everyone his plan.

Manvi looked at him without blinking, scared, imagining the scenario and gulped nervously.

"Manvi, we will all be right there. I will be right there." He held her hand.

She looked into his eyes "Virat, I will not be able to do this."

"You will, you are just a little scared now. This is the easiest and fastest way to get him to justice. This will free your friend from him forever."

Manvi closed her eyes tighly and squeezed his hand. "Ok, I will try. You will be there right?" she mumbled. He looked at her so vulnerable, her eyes tearing up.

Viren felt like they might need some time. "We will wait outside." He said and left with Ajay to give them some privacy.

Virat sat up beside her and pulled her close with his hand over her shoulder "I will be right there baby and if I sense anything wrong, even the slightest bit, I will get you out of there, the very next second."

He continued "Manvi, you are not that little girl anymore. You have come a long way from there. You are a strong, successful woman who has learnt to live life on your own terms. I think it will be better for you to see him to punishment, suffer for the sins he committed against you and your friend. Trust me this will only make you stronger and more confident."

He wiped her tears and pulled her closer into a hug "And, I will be right by your side through out, as your personal bodyguard. I can't wait to break his head" he said, his hand on her cheek.

Manvi felt a little relaxed "and give him company in jail? Please don't do anything like that. I need you, by my side" she hugged him tightly as he kissed her forehead and stroked her hair lovingly.

She looked at him proudly. This is a brand new Virat she is looking at. Not only did he take the driver's seat, but he was steering the situation so responsibly and so calmly. He had not allowed her to make a single irrational decision in all this chaos.

He looked at her remembering how strong she usually seemed, how in control she always appeared. And now? She was letting him see her weaknesses, her vulnerabilites. He promised himself that he will never let her down, he will protect her and be her pillar of strength.

"VIRAT??????" they heard a familiar voice. They looked up together, realizing who it was and what position they were in. They sprang apart in a reflex.

It was dadaji and Viren following him, trying to stop him from coming inside.

Ajay found the scene extremely amusing. "Virat, what the hell are you doing bhai?" he asked.

Dadaji looked at Virat shocked. Virat and Manvi looked in the opposite directions.

"Manvi, why don't you, ummm..go and get ready. We have to go to your friend's wedding right, we are getting late." Virat told Manvi without looking at her. Manvi left the room silently, looking down embarrassed. Ajay followed her, looking for an excuse to get out of the awkward situation.

"Chill Manvi, Virat is used to this. When he was a kid, he used to get in trouble just to piss off dadaji. Sambhal lega..don't worry." smiled Ajay.

"Ofcourse. Thank you for your help with the whole thing. We are taking so much of your time." She smiled back.

A: "Don't worry, I will find a way to get you return the favor."

M: "Woh kaise?"

A: "Well, waise toh, Virat mera bhai jaisa hai, toh tum rishtey se meri saali banogi, par..?"

Manvi was listening to him attentively folding her hands and raising her eyesbrows. "par???"

A: " tumhari jaisi koi aur hai toh atleast intro toh ho sakti hai na?" he asked nicely with his best smile.

M: "accha? You haven't finished doing your work yet but you are already thinking about the favor I will have to return??" she paraphrased him.

He pretended to blush.

M: Aap hamesha aaise baat karte hai??"

A: "ji, absolutely, whatever the situation, I am always like this."

Manvi shook her head and left smiling.

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They all dressed up as if they were going to attend the wedding. They arrived a lot early and waited outside Deepu's house for the right time. Seizing an opportune moment, Manvi covered her head with her chunari and managed to find her way to Deepu. She was sitting with a few girls and they were touching up her make-up. Deepu saw Manvi and understood her signal. She introduced her to everyone and asked them for a few minutes of privacy saying that she hasn't met her friend in so many years.

Sending the girls outside, they locked the door. Deepu hugged Manvi and broke down unable to control her emotions.

"Deepu, you have to be strong, in a few minutes, we will take you out of here." Manvi explained her the plan briefly.

Manvi opened the window and called up Virat saying they were ready for them. She then hugged Deepu tightly, cupped her face and assured her again that everything was going to be fine.

"We are going to stick to the plan, don't worry, we have a lot of back-up." She said trying her best to put a brave face for her. Deepu was all decked up in bridal attire, looking very pretty. But, her eyes told a different story, they were swollen and red and they reflected nothing but pain and helplessness.

All three guys tactically climbed into the room through the window.

"Hadh hogayi! You guys are making an ACP break into a house. What a day!!" Ajay exclaimed.

"Haan, first of all Ajay, this was mostly your idea and if you are caught, your lawyer, instead of bailing you out, will give you company inside the cell beta, don't worry. It is a lose-lost situation."Virat, this has to work otherwise we are in deep shit." Viren joined Ajay.

Virat hushed them both angrily and they looked at Deepu and Manvi, both of them were looking petrified. Virat walked to Manvi and tried to calm her down a bit. "Manvi, your job is to talk to him, just keep him engaged. We are right here. Ok?"

Manvi nodded silently, but still very nervous.

"Deepti, just a few more minutes and you will be out of here. Hang in tight. Ok? And don't worry, we got you guys covered. Nothing is going to happen to you both. Our friend here is in police, he has a gun and everything. Right Bhai?" Virat assured Deepu.

"Nahi, I forgot" Ajay said scratching his head. Virat and Viren looked at each other and at Ajay, ready to kill him.

Ajay: "Ofcourse I got it yaar, now get the ball rolling already, NOW."

"Nahi Sir, please don't shoot my dad, ya, he is not a good person but I don't want him to die." Deepu told Ajay innocently, looking at Manvi for support. Manvi looked at Virat. Virat and Viren looked at Ajay who seemed lost looking at Deepu.

"Busy much???" Virat nudged him angrily.

"Abey, kya kar raha hai. Marvavoge kya?" Viren shook Ajay as he reeled into reality.

"Ohh no, don't worry about it, the gun is only to scare him. Why will I shoot your father, he said smiling and fixing his hair." Manvi rolled her eyes looking at Virat.

"Bhai, please focus on the task otherwise we will all shoot YOU." He threatened Ajay. 'Yeh toh comedy circus ban gaya hai' Virat pulled him and Viren behind the curtain and signaled Manvi 'all ready' assuring her that they have everything under control.

Manvi held Deepu's hand as she telephoned her father. She informed him that she cannot marry Prakash and that she is ready to retribute her sins in any other way he likes."I can't marry him" she said.

His father rushed into her room like a mad elephant. He saw Deepti and was about to slap her but then realized they had company, his niece, sweet little Manvi was standing by her side.

"Ohh, I see, she is the one filling your head with this rubbish, now I get it." He laughed the most wicked laugh.

He turned towards Manvi "Welcome princess." He said looking at her with his evil eyes as Manvi's legs began to feel weak. "Waise, manna padega, you are here, in my house. I never thought I will see this day Mannu." He laughed sarcastically.

Now where is your loverboy? He is not here today? Uss din bada hero giri dikha raha tha? Where is he now haan? Tera wala bhi chod ke chala gaya??" Bahhahahaha..he continued laughing.

Manvi held Deepu's hand and squeezed it tightly. All three guys were peeking out, tensed. Virat's heart was pounding explosively. He couldn't listen to this. He took a step forward but Ajay and Viren pulled him back. It took all this strength to control himself. His eyes became blood red and he clenched his fingers into a tight fist. He looked at the mamu murderously.

"tum ladikhiyon ke liye ghode pe baite kar rajkumar aayega? Hai na? Yeh hi sooch ke isne bade sare rang khilwaye college main. Kya naam tha uska??? Boyfriend chahiye tumko, pyaar karne ke liye?" he twisted Deepu's hand hard. Manvi pushed him away angrily. She didn't know where all that strength came from but she did.

"Stay away from her you monster. You think we are still those helpless girls in your basement? She started punching him with all her strength using her tiny little fists. Jo chahe karoge aur koyi pooch ne wala thak nahi hoga? How could you do those things you monster, we were hardly ten years old? You pervert, you obnoxious godless, heartless son of a bitch. How could you?"

Virat and Viren were getting terribly restless back there seeing all this, but Ajay signaled them that this is what they wanted and a couple of minutes more is all that is required.

"toh kya hogaya, badi hogayi toh main kuch kar nahi paunga?? You stupid girls are as helpless as you were then. See, the door is locked, whatever I do now, stays in this room. Do you want to complain? Kar ke dekho!

Koyi nahi sunega tumhari..

kya bologi? that his own blood molested you and his very own daughter? good luck with that!

Judge mera baap hain. Koyi nahi yakeen karega tumhare iss rone dhone wali kahani par. Pata hai kis par yakeen karenge? mujh par.

Do you know how many murder cases were filed on your father's name? Nahi na, you don't want to know. He eloped with my sister, and my dad can never ever see past that." He was coming close to Manvi while talking and was almost in her face. Manvi was sweating profusely, looking terrified.

What kind of daughter would he have given birth to?? A liar and characterless daughter like you, who makes-up unfounded accusations against a well known public figure. Jaise baaap waisi beti."

He was about to touch her with his index finger when he felt a thunderous slap on his face. He landed with a huge impact on the ground breaking the other side of his head.

"Chinta mat kar, tera public portfolio hum banayengi ab." Virat kicked him in the groin gathering all the force in his body making the guy scream like a beaten street dog.

Manvi and Deepu did not even turn their eyes away. They were not crying, they were in a trance. Their heads were blank with shock or with vengeance or the joy of liberation, they didn't know. But tears were flowing away from their eyes uncontrollably.

Virat hugged Manvi and made her and Deepu sit down in the corner. "You girls ok?" he asked. Manvi nodded hugging Deepu tighly.

"Ajay, bandh kar video. Our work here is done." He signalled to Ajay who still had the camcorder on.

"Nahi yaar, mera entrance abhi baki hai." Ajay said seriously still taping the groans of the old dog.

Virat and Viren looked at each other puzzled. Ajay gave the video to Viren to continue recording.

Mamu was slowly standing up in a daze realizing the situation. Ajay stood smiling over him, and cheered him until he stood back straight. He then slapped him on the other side of his face, stronger, as he fell back down, with a thump, balancing the collision impact on both sides equally. His head was like glued to the floor.

"Now his head is broken and the video is complete." Ajay smiled proudly.

Viren and Virat looked at him with their hands on their hips.

"Chill people, the girls are scared, I was just cheering them up." He said looking at Manvi and Deepu. Deepu was looking at her unconscious father, in shock.

"Don't waste any of your emotions on him Deeptiji. Yeh pakka aap ke father nahi hai. Matlab, khud koh deekiye aur iss kamine ko. Iss ne aap ko bachpan main kidnap kar liya hoga." He said.

Virat didn't know whether to laugh or cry "Yaar, pehle iss case ko solve kar, phir tu apna kidnapping ka case kol lena, abhi yaha se chale?? Plzz..plzzz..FOCUS BHAI!!!." Virat said super annoyed but he did see that Deepu and Manvi felt a little relaxed from all this banter.

Ajay lifted the Mamu, hand-cuffed him and dragged him out to lock him up. He thought about all the attention he was going to receive momentarily on arresting the son of the judge. Virat and Viren took Manvi and Deepu out of there.


>>>part 20-i

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This update is drama, but again the story needs to move and it is 5 AM and I havent slept, so forgive my typos and any out of character dialogues. take care. will update TLF in a day..babye!

Edited by bluebolt - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm so happy hope that mamu rots in jail for the rest of his life.
Edited by sapphhire - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update anu.Loved Virat here so much.He was with her and gave her the necessary courage which she needed to face her worst fear to help her cousin. I am in love with this couple so much and in love with the love they have on each other. Loved the cute moment before dadaji came , his hug, his words everything.Loved the way u showed how much belief they have on each other and how she shows her weaker side to him showng her belief ,trust a nd love on him and how she sees his stronger , side. .Loved that so much anu.Loved that new guy ajay too. now that disgusting mama😡😡😡 will rot in jail Now her cousin can breathe some fresh air.Loved their conversations and the way Virat trashed her mama and ajay too.
Love dthe whole update so much anu. I crazily love this couple.thanks for the pm😊
Edited by preetipc - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update dear
Loved it
Thank God mama is send to jail
Thanx 4 d pm
Waiting 4 ur next part... Update Soon dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Was an awesome update loved how virat
Made manvi gain strength loved ajays role please keep
Him in for a while that mamu deserved what he got
Hope he rots in jail an awesome update loved it
Continue soon and do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update
Contine soon xxx

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