Sachha Pyaar-virman- ff-updated part 21

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Kiekeboe

@Kiekeboe

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#321

*res

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Awesome update, happy to see that monster cut in his own game.

Edited by Kiekeboe - 12 years ago

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shona9

@shona9

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#322

Awsme update dear...
Loved it...
Ajay to jail... Thank god...

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#323

Wow nice yaar awesome...

Please continue..

I cant wait for your next PM...

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#324

Awesome update Anu .. Superb ⭐️.. Loved it veryyy much.. I hope that monster mama rots in jail for the rest of his life.. I loved the part where Virat and Ajay thrashed him.. Ajay is the star of this update for me 😃.. I loved his character.. and his dialogues are very well written 👏.. I guess he is the perfect match for Deepu 😛.. I also loved this brand new Virat very much.. He has been Manvi's pillar of strength all this while.. and Manvi also trusts him immensely.. Loved their bonding ❤️.. Im eager to know whats going to happen next.. Will be waiting for your next update.. Thanks a lot for the pm.. Take care 😊

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Kidrauhl

@Kidrauhl

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#325

It was an action packed update hope mamu the B*****D rots in jail muahahHahhahHHah
Thanks for the pm hun update soon xx

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Swati

@sweetyyyyyyy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#326

hey dear , in ending its drama bt m njyng...
n thanx for pm...

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#327

Nice update...! finally the creep guy is arrested..nice u made another love angle..n Virat's kept reminding him that they r here for work...great maanvi si a strong person...Thnks fr the PM!

P.S: Waiting for TLF update.. :)

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MadhuChowdary

@MadhuChowdary

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Posted: 12 years ago

#328

hey anu...u updated SP...its so good to see ur update...it was a longgg and awesome update as usual...how can u manage such long updates anu...i must appreciate it...now coming to this update...the way virat supported manvi and how he felt when mamu was talking to manvi was well written...new character was funny a bit...their adventure was good...i liked this part...now i hope to read next update soon...u r updating TLF tomorrow...wow...yesterday PT,today SP and tomorrow TLF...working hard ha...hey u r not from India...i thought u r from India...anyways thanks for the pm and take care anu...

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Bhabani90

@Bhabani90

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#329

Superb, action thrill nd wat not. Luvd it nd yeah eagerly waiting for tlf.

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#330

Wow...awesome update Anu...loving the drama...Ajay character is great...he is funny... 😆 ...loved the way virat gave courage to manvi... 😊 ...the emotional bonding between virman was great...continue soon if u can...will be waiting for the 2 left feet to
Update...thank u so much for the pm... 😊