Sachha Pyaar-virman- ff-updated part 21

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MadhuChowdary

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Posted: 13 years ago

#291

yayyy...me first...u updated soon this time...as usual wonderful one...i hate manvi's mamu...what kind of a creature he is...where do they exist in the world...psychos...emotional update...i felt bad for both manvi and deepti...i liked the way u made virat evevn stronger than before...his care and protectiveness and his support to manvi made me love virat even more now...thanks for the pm and take care anu...

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Jannat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#292

😊
I will cmnt on next page

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avika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#293

Wow. Loved the way hw story is moving. .it was terrifyng. .can't wait to read more. Update soon

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Jannat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#294

just superb dear rather than that it was so emotional
That called a cruel world
Hope everything sort out soon as well as virat family get convinced about their relationship
Just superb dear superb
Thanx 4 d pm
Eagerly waiting 4 next part... Update Soon

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Syed695

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Posted: 13 years ago

#295

Nice and Unexpected Update...! Loved how Virat supported Maanvi..Felt really bad for maanvi she has gone through worse as well as day monster din leave his own daughter whidh is pathetic i hope they stop n as virat mentioned give the taste of his own medicine..wonder whts his plan..

Now the whole family drama i guess gonna hapen soon...as u have mentioned earllier updates tht he would b asked to choose between family n maanvi..i am waiting for that confrontation update..u make even the sad moment very interesting, by ur writing..Thnks for the PM Anu..:)!

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Aenna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#296

ufff yr dis update was vry
emotional thinking about manvis past
plz update soon...

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Kanwal_chohan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#297

Omg you finally updated this loved it
Cant believe manvis mama is so cruel
Hope manvi virat and viren are able to
Save deepti awesome update loved it
Continue soon and do pm me

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Shivani Rajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#298

Oh new twist... Deepti nd another tension Vadhera family... loved it... cant wait for next update... ❤️

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.Yamin.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#299

Wow..great update anu as usual...loved it to the core...hate tat manvi mamu...feeling pity for manvi cousin...hope viraat's family don't misunderstood virman...continue soon if possible...thank u so much for the pm... 😊 ...

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Meera Chaudhuri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#300

Awesome update Anu⭐️.. Very emotional.. The twist was totally unexpected.. Manvi's Mama is just disgusting😡😡.. He doesn't deserve to be called human.. He didn't even spare his own daughter🤬.. and now he is getting her married to another monster.. feeling really bad for both Manvi and Deepti.. You have described Manvi's nervousness, her fear beautifully.. I really liked Virat in this part.. Loved his protective and caring attitude towards Manvi.. Im really eager to know how they are going to save Deepti.. Will be waiting for your next update.. Thank you so much for the pm.. Take care 😊