OS:Arshi :: The game of seduction

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rimu

@rimzu

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

official bandage-tying guy for over a year...😆

arnav is too much...😳😉

nd khushi she is seriously innocent baby...

grt os..atleast sumthing to divert mind..from ongoing srtess!!

thnx

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rrd29

@rrd29

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

lovely OS...welcome back into the wonderful world of writing...
Best Wishes & God bless u with lots and lots of happiness always

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Hey Smitz!

Nice OS with lil *ahem ahem* Me likey Like it! ;)

I didn't know checking out the scars will be this 'SEDUCING'

Well Mr.Raizada do come with some nice 'BETS' and 'GAMES'

And the fact is he never loses ;D
And he's a very clever player indeed!

So I was thinking why dont you write more 1shots like this, Would Love to read!

And Did you mentioned Khushi as Nut-Crack ? Well I Liked it lol

TNX FOR THE PM.

Love,
'J'

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damonzlady

@damonzlady

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

this was just too awesome!loved it!so very Arshi and so very cute!👏

so so sooo glad you're continuing with your writing!

can't wait for the updates!

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shagun05

@shagun05

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

nice one!! thanks for the PM.

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summaiya

@summaiyasayed

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

it was cute and funny updt

thanks for pm

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MemoriesDieHard

@MemoriesDieHard

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

U made my day Smita!!!

I am glad that u started writing!🤗

This was so beautiful!!!

Khushi is so so so Naive!!

I loved the Arnav in this completely!!!

Great job!!!!

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Khadija

@fairy_stardust

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Aww such a sweet and romantic moment! The very clever Arnav to play such a game with Khushi who didn't even realized what would winning this bet mean for her. lol. Love the title, 😉

Glad you address something the CVs left out...post-marriage romance. Could you also do like an SS on a romantic honeymoon to Venice or Paris? That will be soo nice and a very much needed cheer for all Arshian. It's a special request, if you have time.

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smitzy

@smitzy

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: fairy_stardust
Aww such a sweet and romantic moment! The very clever Arnav to play such a game with Khushi who didn't even realized what would winning this bet mean for her. lol. Love the title, 😉

Glad you address something the CVs left out...post-marriage romance. Could you also do like an SS on a romantic honeymoon to Venice or Paris? That will be soo nice and a very much needed cheer for all Arshian. It's a special request, if you have time.

hehehe thanks khadija :) I'm glad you liked it.. oooh that sounds like a good idea, but if you don't mind can I keep it for my "the way IPK"? I'd really like to write about their honeymoon at some point of time.

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smitzy

@smitzy

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: sarunfanatic
Hey Smitz!

Nice OS with lil *ahem ahem* Me likey Like it! ;)

I didn't know checking out the scars will be this 'SEDUCING'

Well Mr.Raizada do come with some nice 'BETS' and 'GAMES'

And the fact is he never loses ;D
And he's a very clever player indeed!

So I was thinking why dont you write more 1shots like this, Would Love to read!

And Did you mentioned Khushi as Nut-Crack ? Well I Liked it lol

TNX FOR THE PM.

Love,
'J'