OS:Arshi :: The game of seduction - Page 6

Originally posted by: crazyforsanaya

This is very good. Maybe you should be the writer of IPK as the CVs and PH have no clue what to do!!!

Originally posted by: asr13

Smitzy !!!

Ramanchi ...kahan pe end kiya yaaar ...haaawww !!!😳

You know your IPK feels so real with Hindi dialogues ..sach mein...I think they play a big part in the story-telling !

Very cute, I have to say I had a biiig smile on my face ever since he sat down in front of her ...

* nostalgia hits hard, Diwali poolside payal scene flashes past*

Haaai !!! *sigh*

He surely knows how to trap her with his challanging words ...loved it ...massage from the wifey indeeed ...turns out to be a game of who-has-more-scars ? 😆 ...while only s** on the mind all along ! 😉

Loved it ...you should have continued ...silly woman !!!

Originally posted by: Maddy1270

a fun-filled os with its underlying vein of passion! well-written... leaving the rest to one's imagination was a nice move!

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva

Smitaaa! I love you damnit!<3<3🤗

You made me smile, laugh, grin and blush all over!! :D<3:*

I just loved it!<3<3
And it doesnt look like uv taken a break of 5 days at all!!

Hayyeee ... Kahan rok dia yaar tune! :*☺️

I soo loved the flirty Arnav and an innocent, naive Khushi!!<3


I just cant tell you dude...im still smiling,blushing like hell! XD

And im obviusly waiting for FFs update though iv got to catch up with two! :/


PS - Sorry for such a late reply! Havent been checking my pms! Sorry!

Originally posted by: smitzy

Shwetha!!! Woman!! I was wondering where had you disappeared off to! See I was waiting with baited breath for your comment hahahaha aww dear 🤗

with all this depression looming over the forum, I figured people could do with a distraction now.. I am back to writing, yes! And will update the way IPK tonight 😊

love u too dammit!!