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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DeewaniRimi

The starting and the ending...
Two state of a mere life.


If u r born...u hv to die one day...it's destined since u
were in zygote state.
bt the start of a man's life differs man to man coz it's upto him when he wants to begin it in a true & dedicating way. Death i.e end is unstoppable & nonperishable. So everyone has to surrender before him.It's like a leafy desire to die with ur beloved ones...bt if God wants to get u in his touch,u'll surely achieve a peaceful death.Life is such seed that is come out of sheer love & hatred as well.If u sew hatred's seed,fruit will be devastation & damage.When another is accepted, u r blessed with affection,care& ❤️. I'd loved a love once-the quote is not true.If love is real & divine,it'll surely find right path to perfume others with it's faint smell.


Life is a daffodil, not thunderstorm.

Yes you are right...and for me affection, care and support can change the hatred into love...because hate is not exactly opposite of love. Hate is Love's deformation... as you told "if love is divine, it will surely find the right path to perfume others with it's faint smell..." and love is divine because God gifts these to us...and with these love we can make our life a blooming daffodil for sure.



In between the starting and ending point,
A soul must have to learn how to survive?

A soul??...
what's a soul??All or none in our life? How many of us realize it's spiritual value? yes,beginning point is as important as the end point. In the beginning, you should have an idea that leads you towards a path-may be of creation-may be of devastation.But at the end, you have none as your guide,but then you will be a complete person with all of your gained experiences in the whole life-span.You may be too full of sleep to understand everything while lovingly led by Mother Nature...but your sub-conscious mind is completely agreed to achieve a sky-full of peace...so wants to go another world i.e imaginary door of Paradise..to survive,to feel,to laugh & TO LOVE.


But only Survive??
No a soul must have to learn how to live?

Survive...such a word that has a great emotional & rational power as well.At the time when one needs to survive,he can disobey all the laws & can do every & everything just to live. To all the creatures,life itself is most valuable...then other things.But,yes-everyone doesn't know how to live lively,lovely,amazingly.That's their personal view & fault as well.It's too difficult to make one realize the actual sense of life as well as changing a drop of stone into water-drop without forcing.


And how to let live?
Everything will be destroyed by the TIME.
Because whatever is created and nurtured is for purpose.
And when the Purpose will be served.
Creation must be ended ...
To create new things once again.
The Galaxies which are dying today...
Once were created from the greatest Energy..
And after its end the Energy will return to its source.
This is the very law of Universe and Nature.
But still we human are blessed because we have our conscience.
If we do something for the mankind and this world.
DO anything which brings good for the mankind.
It will bestowed us with Immortality.
May be death burn our mortal body.
But our thoughts will be alive through everyone's conscience.
Thus a mere Human may become a Galaxy.
Because Galaxy may die...
But it leaves its thoughts as Black wholes..
Black Wholes are so powerful
That it absorbs light.
If we do something good which may have this kind of impact.

After our death our thoughts will be more powerful...
Than a Black Whole.



Edited by surprising - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

This was awesome...such powerful emotions expressed with so much of ease...loved it...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
daydreamer::

it's incomplete dear...the poem by Rimi & explanation by me😊...yet a lot is left...I'll pm you after completion😃

ohh...srry...blue words belong Rimi...her opinion about my explanation 😉
Edited by surprising - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Whimsical poems on various themes




To Build I In Me


Something very delightful & full of light...

Needs a plot of darkness to bloom
Something darker than darkness...who knows
It's significance?...perhaps pure tears.

Love to live in the dreamland where I'm the Almighty-want of everybody
But...the real life has a different essence that hepls u to find I IN ME.


Entity


One's thought tormenting him more...
When the dead emotions begin to alive,
A child is just like a peaceful shelter on the river bank...
That snatches all pain & sad memories as well.
A man having pseudo-gravity
Is really the one who is being broken down 1st of all.



...Wait For None...




The truth is shinning before you...
Is it really called SHINE??
Human being...turns into a demon
When the beautiful roses with several possibilities are molested.

On the last day of this blue planet...
Demon turns to a seed drop by drop
But where is Mother Nature??
...DESTINY FOREVER...



Hoito Tomari Jonya
Perhaps Only For You



Harie jete chaoya ki abantar??
Does Want for being introvert is restless??
Ami jani na...tabe anumaan korte pari
I Don't know...But trying to guess
Hoito haan...hoito na...
Perhaps yes...perhaps no...

Bhalobasar ekta bindu...
Just a drop of love...
Koto kichhu korte chai;
Want to achieve a sky;
Kotota samman ba sujog se pay??
But how far it's loved by men??

Tabu manush swapno dekhe...
Still men love dreams...
Swapno dekhte shehkhai k?
Who is the pathfinder of it?
Kaalpurusher teer dhunuk ki nirdesh kore?
Arch of galaxy symbolizes what?

Nive jete jete jwale otha
Something flashing just before the end
Ar jwaleo nive thaker modhye parthakya toto tai...
& something dead in the whole life-span differ
Jotota neel ashru r laal rakter-
Just like blue tears & blood-


I heartily wish My Helen will give reply-poems in response. Will her Samrat's call of heart compel her to do so?? Let's wait & watch.


Edited by surprising - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: surprising

Whimsical poems on various themes




To Build I In Me


Something very delightful & full of light...

Needs a plot of darkness to bloom
Something darker than darkness...who knows
It's significance?...perhaps pure tears.

Love to live in the dreamland where I'm the Almighty-want of everybody
But...the real life has a different essence that hepls u to find I IN ME.



Who Is He?


One's thought tormenting him more...
When the dead emotions begin to alive,
A child is just like a peaceful shelter on the river bank...
That snatches all pain & sad memories as well.
A man having pseudo-gravity
Is really the one who is being broken down 1st of all.



...Wait For None...




The truth is shinning before you...
Is it really called SHINE??
Human being...turns into a demon
When the beautiful roses with several possibilities are molested.

On the last day of this blue planet...
Demon turns to a seed drop by drop
But where is Mother Nature??
...DESTINY FOREVER...



I heartily wish My Helen will give reply-poems in response. Will her Samrat's call of heart compel her to do so?? Let's wait & watch.



Your bewitching words leave me speechless,
Forcing me to ponder and reflect.
Like a stream flowing with twists and turns,
A soothing agitation is your poetry's effect.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Your bewitching words leave me speechless,
Forcing me to ponder and reflect.
Like a stream flowing with twists and turns,
A soothing agitation is your poetry's effect.

The red sky symbolizes the STORM'S EYE
My mind wants to achieve a void sky...
In which there will be only sigh,
But none of them containing a drop of lie.
Blue treas i.e purer drops make a heart dry-
That is waiting to get alive by a hearty try.



this is my 1st rhythmic poem😊...unfortunately I can't write them with good rhythm😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
The red sky symbolizes the STORM'S EYE
My mind wants to achieve a void sky...
In which there will be only sigh,
But none of them containing a drop of lie.
Blue treas i.e purer drops make a heart dry-
That is waiting to get alive by a hearty try.

i liked it...😊
everybody has their own strengths...i'm not good with free verse...😭


CONGRATULATIONS ON THE 100TH PAGE!!!!!!!!!!👏
Edited by daydreamer... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
🥳wah.....100 pages😎





😳Immeasurable number of🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗to all of my readers😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

To begin my life with the beginning of my life….

Ehesaas kuch naya sa-she closed her magnetic eyes with teary effect. The childhood companion of th disguised boy-actually not disguised by attitude, disguised with hidden fire & an eternal guide,now was l gazing vacantly at her wedding attire.ohh…..why time doesn't lead to past.the heedful past,the glowing past with him in adolescence…….

……Just an atrocious joke!! For whose?? For whose she had to take bridal seat?? DESTINY obviously.But the man behind it??...a mask full of politics!...

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Posted: 12 years ago
You still remind me??
At the beginning...
I was a bud...ready to bloom.
I was destined to dedicate to the Emperor...
Alexander...the great.
A living God...stronger than GOD Zeus.
But suddenly you came Sandro...
With Deodara...your love of life.
Your innocence couldn't hide your attitude...
Which was indicating another Future Emperor.
Remember my love you were Savior...
You saved me from the Emperor's wrath...
Without thinking about your fate.
By that time I found something new some unknown feeling in you.
And now I realize...by that time i have started to admire you.
And now at the point of a new turning point of my life...
I realize I am incomplete without You.
But I won't stop you...
As I promise to not to bind you...with anything.
So good bye Sandro...from everything.

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