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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: surprising
Dostoon, I'm back with chandrika😳...plzzz hv a look & share ur likes-dislikes😊

I know- blood donation in 325 B.C is so so far away from reality...but it's a fan fiction at all😊

actually dear blood donation existed even before maurya period.😆so you didn't write anything odd.

😆

even cataract operation and anesthisia also existed.😆

Edited by lucykaede - 13 years ago

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

surprising :

firstly, may i know your name please 😊? commenting on the 8th november update, it seems that you have taken up the last days of the life of CGM after he embraced jainism as your concept😊 ..must have to appreciate your attempt, and seems that you do write well⭐️ .. will comment on your remaining updates soon.

ps : you can address me as polly here.😊

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Susmita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: polly_03
surprising :

firstly, may i know your name please 😊? commenting on the 8th november update, it seems that you have taken up the last days of the life of CGM after he embraced jainism as your concept😊 ..must have to appreciate your attempt, and seems that you do write well⭐️ .. will comment on your remaining updates soon.

ps : you can address me as polly here.😊

I'm Rumpu😊...thanxxx a ton for commenting...

yes, the story is about CGM's realization of life...uske sath CGM se jure hue logo ka life me unke nehi hote hue kaisa effect padha...wo bhi included hay.

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: lucykaede
thank you so much for giving us chandrika.
but one thing i didn't understand what was that horse thing?

what mihika did that chandu slapped her so tightly?

please explain me i can't understand it after reading to two times.

and...

your hindi is awesome dude,thank you so so so much.

and...

i hate that nandini.

i think its acharya who is gonna donate his blood to chandu.right?😉
awesome update.

are...tum itni asani se kaise samajh gaye ki blood-donar Acharya hay??...congrats

...horse...there is another story...😉

& Mihika?...plz think a bit deeply when a person slaps one who is very close to him...bt circumstances doesn't allow them to open their hearts??

& than q very to the power infinity much for enlightening me the medical part😃

...I knew totally wrong😲

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

suprising :

commenting on the 19th november update, did you write the verses of your own😕 ? if yes, they are lovely👏⭐️. you have brought out the inner turmoils of both CGM and Chanakya well as the past, present and future came flooding their minds😭. bdw, who's Nandini 😕? i dont remember reading anything about her in the forum and these lines

I was ready to tie the knot of husband-wife's relation with Nandini,...her actual purpose was revealed.

...She was determined to take a powerful revenge for her father's death...she was the chief spy of Amatya Rakhas!!...the wedding night...turned too heart-wretching...

arent helping much .

hope my doubts gets cleared in the upcoming updates, will comment on them soon.😊

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Susmita

@surprising

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: aru_86
nandini ko pura villain bana diya..she was not that bad though..but beautiful part as well..want description of cornelia's story too

Nandini pura villain thi...par koun jaane human heart kab kaise kise chun lay!!!!! Cornelia ke saath aur koi bhi hay...jo CGM se bahot jura hoga.😊

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Loved This Part...Well What Was Mihika Doing ??

Mihika was doing something what had hurt CGM..😭...He couldn't believe that😕

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

surprising :

commenting on the 24th november update, the durdhara-chandragupt faceoff was very well depicted👏, and i almost took it for real when i saw that it was only a nightmare, CGM's imaginations running wild at the thought that HIS acharya was responsible for such a great personal loss 😭. no wonder, Bindusar's accusations on Chanakya too, looked real 😭. but Nandini'd mystery isnt still revealed yet and that's leaving me utterly confused now. and CGM had haemophilia 😲?? never heard or read about any such thing ever .. where did you get this info from 😕?

update soon😊. there are a lot of questions unanswered.

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proteeti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: surprising
Mihika was doing something what had hurt CGM..😭...He couldn't believe that😕

Well, I Can't Guess What's It ? Perhaps Talking As If To Hurt Bindusar?

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

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Posted: 13 years ago

#110

rumpu :

commenting on the 6th december update, Nandini was Dhananand's daughter 😕😲? i mean is she a creation of your mind or was she really dhannu's daughter😕 ? coz in either way, she has a genuine reason for avenging her father's death ..if we consider her as a daughter and forget our bias towards CGM for the moment. and yes, the lines ..

nehi na??...aah?...ahh?...bolo...bolo...kiya gupt? Chandragupt! (again that evil smile exact copied & pested from her father).

wow, brilliant👏👏. now that's called inheritance and i'm glad that you have shown it⭐️. mihika was attracted towards chandu 😕? well, i dont mind that actually. but blood donation and transfusion in 300 BC ..and all the info related to it which was only discovered post 1625 AD ( approx, i dont remember exactly ) as medical science improved with time ... yeh thoda zyada nahi ho gaya 😕?

i'm not going to ponder as to why chandu slapped mihika or why were the medicine bottles broken. i guess i'll get my answers in the next updates. so update soon.😊