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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#651

congo for century...

awesome update...

loved it...

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#652

Kya baat hai . . . . . Rey to sudhar gya . . . . . Saari salary kriya ko pakda di 👏
aur kriya ne usse vapas de di . . . . . Usse bhi to control rakhna sikhana h na
off shoulder . . . . Reminds me of her dark pink rose-day dress 😎
gosh . . . Ye cheap culture . . . . . Apne frnd ki wife pe line maaring 😡
& rey ko ye casual lag raha hai . . . . . Arrgghh 😵
she's deeply hurt . . . . 😔
puri raat shower me sitting . . . . & 5 din se bimar . . Wat? 😲
rey ko samjhana bhi worthless hai . . . Dono hi dheeth hai 😆

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#653

Chalo Rey koi kaam toh acha kar raha hai , usse ghar chalana toh agaya...

Usse Kria ki attention se faraq parta hai 😉...

But woh yeh baat kyun mane ga 🤔...

Promotion hua nahi ke party shuru 😆...

That Jack is a moron 😡...

Rey bhi kam nahi hai , uski wife ko kisi ne 'Kiss' ki aur woh keh raha hai 'It's common n don't create a scene' ...

Is he out of his mind 😡...

Kria puri raat shower ke neeche aur usse 5 din se temperature tha 😲...

Aur Rey ko kuch pata he nahi hai , iss se achi baat aur kiya ho sakti hai...

Bohat acha kia Neelima ne , achi bhali sunai Rey ko ...

Superb part 😃...

Loved it ❤️.

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rubykriyansh

@rubykriyansh

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#654

Awsome update..!
Loved it .!
Update soon ..!
Waiting ..!

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magical_mania

@magical_mania

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#655

Deeths m so in love with this story😃

Rey realized his mistake soon

achcha hai sudharne ke asar lag rahe hai hahahahaha😆

Mujhe pata tha Rey apni salary khatam kar dega but Kria is intelligent n smart

i like how Rey complimented her and said 'tumhare haatho mein jaado hai'😃

Loved it babes 😃

Update soon

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#656

ok i was jus checking k u hv updated or not n look
wat i found an update...yeyyy...
vese m happy k u didnt made kriya mod...
varna iss story ka essance chala jata..
are wah chalo ek aadat to kriya ne rey ki sudhar di...
k use money ki value karna aa gya...
chalo dhire dhire hi sahi rey sudhar rha h...
but in very next second i was like🤢
rey friend kissed kriya n he's saying k its culture...uff
iska kuch nahi ho skta...
poor kriya..bimar hi ho gyi rey atyachar se..😆
m so loving this ss...
now cant wait for tommorow...

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shalini saroha

@shalini_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#657

srry 4 d late replyfrstly... I was out of town... Nw about update 6th... Rey n kitchen m entry ki...*shockd* nt jst entry..he tried to prepare sumthing...b'cz he dont wanna distrb her wife... Not bad mns he is developing feelings 4 kriya jst wow... Nd he said thanks to her nd evn lykd her idea...*agn shocked* ...nd he is trying to handle d situation without her father's hlp...gud going...spoilt brait becuming mature...loved this side of rey... Nd kriya made pizza 4 him...wow wow wow wow wow...!!!! Amazing nd he loved it... Nd even shared wid her...wow...!!!! This is d sweetest thing 4 kriya...jst loved d update...nd thanxx 4 pm

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shalini saroha

@shalini_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#658

nd 4 7th part... Again ooosssooommm updatee...!!! He is getting possessive for her now but dont wanna show that... May b b'cz of her rep. Or ego... Nd kriya is having high fevr poor soul...:( stupid ko doc. Ka no. Tak b ni pta... But kind of acha neelema goes to knw d truth btw two... She is too smart... Within min. She got to knw d prob. Btw two... Yeh rey ko b ni akal tab aati h jab wo usse dur rehta h... But neelema handled d situatn vry well...:) she is really vry sweet...:) nd rey ko di hui uski advice may b rey ko kch feel ho... Waise kriya jack ko hott but iss stupid rey ko kyun ni lagti... Hope rey ko uski imp. Jaldi s smaj aa jaye... Nd yaar ab toh mila de inhe bahut jhel liya kriya n... Fabulus update... Loved it... Thanxx 4 pm ND PLZZZ UPDATE SOON...:)

Edited by shalini_arsha - 12 years ago