Start of something beautiful#Dil Se#pt7&8pg100&113

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello peeps!!!!..womdering who this newbie is??

kk then lemme clear its not a newbie...

its I ME MYSELF...deetha

u all know me ri8????

if not then know me...

hehe lolz kuch bhi boling mai...

kknow ur thinking y this new account??

ri8???

den SCROLL DOWN!!!😳


index!!!!!!!!




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Edited by ..tulip.. - 12 years ago
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okay!!!!so here goes my new piece of work... u will get short and cliffy updates...even though the story is not that much intresting...i will try to keep it up intresting... hope u ppl like this piece of my work too!!!

and as u all are thinking the main reason behind this new ID is...

from now updates ... and pms will be sent from this ID...

so add this ID for pms... and haa ..i will filter ever week ...so do comment and like...

ps: for those who are inactive and wanted pms...just open this id .go to its posts and u will get the links for updates...

coz its purely for updates and from now i wont even comment from this ID on any topic ...

uff and many more reasons... chodo...

laila!!!!!! love u ...apne baal keech rahi thi ki title kya rakhun... ur edit gave the answer thus made it the banner!!!!! and how do u know me that well...maine iski BG dil se ...ghar pe decide kiya and edit of dil se written the title on it??? how????i mean how???

asma...i know maine tumhareb'day thread pe res kiya and didnt unres till now...2 os of urs pending rakhdi maine... par i think i cant unres those...so i thought y not decidate this whole SS to u!!!!

SO THIS IS MY GIFT!!!!!!

*bohut late hogaya na*

Edited by ..tulip.. - 12 years ago
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PART 1




He switched on the player and came to the centre... he always forgets himself while dancing... never minds who is present who is not...and this morning it was same...
somethngs different today...he is feeling pleasant...so choose to move his legs on that beat which always took him to another word...DIL SE RE!!!!!!!

he switched on and stood before the mirror in that glass reharsal hall on the top floor of their house...he closed his eyes and opened his arms and just tapped his ri8 foot to the beat...

he was very peacefully standing but some are on verge of loosing breathe... how can she??? it was HIM!!!!!!! that too dancing...that too on her fav song...and over all that ...he is SHIRTLESS!!!!! she stiked to the glass wall seeing him through it and caressing the glass as if caressing his back...

*refresh*

he started dancing seeing himself in the mirror and she was continuously drooling over him... but chup chup ke...finally he blindfolded his eyes...he was dancing perfectly and each move of his muscle made her sweat and she too moved along with him but outside the room caressing the glass ...he stepped near the sidewall...she ran to it...he did a side moonwalk and she sticking to the glass took turns moving along with him...his every incomplete step... she completed standing outside and dancing as his partner...she loved him??? loves him??? nah LOVE is a small word ...

he finally placed hands on the wall *glass* and started singing...she placed her ri8 hand over his left and with left caressed his face

ps: glass is there b/w them...so if write she is caressing him then it means the glass...

he went back...she finally in trance entered the room...moved along with him...trying not to be caught...*imagine kriyaansh dil se*

finally he trapped her b/w him and mirror...he was moving his head according to beat but never aware that at any moment he may kiss her lips...

she in trance titled her head but suddenly realisation struck and she ran away...after few mins when song ended he removed the fold and went to his room...nah their room to freshen up...

finally he came down and had his breakfast... she felt bad...but she cant help it...she sighed at her fate...

after 1 hr rey's assistant arrived home with a imp file... and as usual rey moved uneasily gritting teeth...and finally sighed seeing her come with tea and snacks and left...

after 2 mins rey excused for water and went to kitchen where she was busy preparing lunch...

rey: thanks...itne dinon ke baad akal toh aayi...gawar banke nahi aayi...

he said gritting teeth and left grabbing a waterbottle...

she looked down sad...

hmm...but somewhere happy that he spoke her and somewhere she made him slightly happy...

she sighed at her fate...

she is a lower middle class girl...one and only child of parents...they tried their level best to take care of her like princess...but never able to give expensive and "wow"thingies to her...

but she knew what she has and also knew more than anything hr parents love her lyk hell...thats enough to her... she studied till 10th... hindi medium...

her dad tried to join her in english medium school but she saved that money and used it for the fees of her dance training...

she was the top dancer of that small insti of dehradoon...

thats how she met ...to be correctly said rey's parents met her...

the two days when they went for a charity event ...kriya as the leader of that dance insti *students mei leader* took the resposibilities to look after the arrangements for them and was ordered to be almost with the for anyhelp of theirs...

they liked her a lot...she is of 24 then...they loved her a lot...her humbleness character etc...

so finally decided to fix her marriage with their son REYAANSH SINGHANIA ...the RICH BOY!!!!!!! of 27...

rey was ...uff he is complicated... he is a perfect highclass man...he want branded thingies else they will directly reach dustbin...wanted a stylish rich ...well talented as him in software field as his lifepartner...

but destiny bought these two and tied together...

she used to be in saree and pallu over head always traditional as per the ghar ka parampara... rey hated it...first of all a low middle class girl and then this...arrgghh!!!!!!! he hates her to core...

3 months after their marrriage but still...they live in the same room...shared the same bed but the situation would be lyk she is one side ocean and he on other...no interaction nothing...

she fel for him the very first day...why not...he is the PRINCE CHARMING!!! ...his style...his attitude...how can she who always dreamt of a dream boy exactly like him not fall for her...

finally today she wore a simple frock as he already informed to his parents that his assistant would arrive anytym .and she heard it... everytym he used to get pissed off seeing her with that pallu in front of his workers and friends so she thought of changing the whole thing and wore that simple grey kneelength frock...

again a sigh...

she smiled weakly thinking of her life...her love ...her life doesnt even consider her as existed... she shaked her head and continued her work with that sarcastic smile at her own life on her face...








so kaisa hai???

good or bad???

jaldi jaldi batadena...

personally i like this start...

did u???

like and comment plz...

have a good day...

enjoy...

love


-deetha


Edited by ..tulip.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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can i res? 😕
unres

me commentin 1st! woh bhi on ur work...yayyeee...its a once in a life tym oppurtunity 😉
deetha...am sayin it again!!! Welcome bak!!!! 😃

And dis is truly a deetha-style comebak!! 😎

An SS, dat too on KR!!😳

uff

i loved part 1 a lot.👏

kriya wid pallu over her head???😲

rey's characterization is fabulous!😛

and d way he gets irritated wid her also.

kria ko luv at 1st sight!! awiiieee☺️

i so loved dis,,,


n dil se re...dat song toh makes me go insane always!!❤️

U knw ever since d tym d song was aired on KriYaansh, i renamed it on my fone from dil se re to dil se "REY"😆

my bro keeps askin me wad it means🤣

anyway, continue soon😊

Welcome bak, agn! happy days r here finally😃
Edited by sweetangelpayal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res
Unres
Awesome start deetha 👏
Loved it 😳
Waiting for d next part 😃
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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LOL koi aisa poochta hai kya??😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ki hua re???😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: wildcatdeetha



LOL koi aisa poochta hai kya??😆

arre i was waitin for 10 mins thinkin res karu ki nahi coz u were stil res'in na
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res
unres
wow awesome start deetha di 👏
loved it .
Dil se re.very good title
update soon and pm me.
Edited by ARPITAHAIT - 12 years ago

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