Swaron FF:U & Me.Back to Us.Thread 2.part-15.pg93 - Page 10

Originally posted by: Satluvsd3

res...
this is just the 1st res di.wait for more!!😉😆
unres.
chap 1:
the starting description was like awesome!!!really loved it.that shows how beautiful your writing skills are di!⭐️ lovely.
i really loved how the dad made the daughter sleep by telling her a cute story.
nice start di.😊
so different from each other but MADE for each other ...MAD for each other... 😊
i know this line isnt a part of your update but seriously i liked this one.

chap 2:
wooow ok finally you cleared a part of the confusion!!
lovingthe dad-daughter relationship!! 😳 how he was so protective of her...which tensed him the whole day and made him restless... 😊 awww.. super cute Dad Swayam!😳😆

Aaa...aa...Aachuuu...

He got his answer ...
this was the cutest part of this update!! 😳😆

She is a perfect combination of me & her Mom...my maturity and her innocence...my brain and her beauty ...at times she also throws tantrums like her Mom...her eyes are just like her Mom...big..greenish ...beautiful...i guess her cute smile is like me...in fact that's the only thing...other than her smile...everything else is just like her Mom...she is a perfect photocopy of her mom...well ...a smaller version... he smiled at his own thought ...
and this para has to be my fav one!!😳 loved the way you related both of them to her!! 😳 damn awesome di.👏⭐️

chap 3:
would be ONE OF MY FAV chaps of this beautiful FF!!:')
OMG!the way you spoke swayam's life till now with HER.i was literally! 😭
love u di.😊the end of the story.the beginning of his flashbacks(was the BEST part of this update)!! :')
OMG!!loved each and every word of it. you are really one of those writers who described SwaRon journey till now beautifully and how he preserved those special Sharon-touched things!!!😳 :')
even the chits ...you didnt leave 😊😳 my eyes were filled with tears as i finished Swayam's part!:')
gosh!i am in love with the way you wrote di.*thumbs up* for it!
and also 🤗 words would be too too less to describe the way you wrote this update esp the New york part!😳 it can't get any better than this.and the connection of those eyes with pari.the dreams n the precap 😃 nice nice.

chap4:
woooww nice update.
oh!cool so Swayam's parents n many pl coming in the pic.looking fwd to all their parts 😊
rest all was also nice,from swayam's talking to his asst. then parents then finally to our cutie Tanya.😳

Originally posted by: SwaRon_Dreams

When are you updating next part yaar??? please tell me atleast..

Originally posted by: sajan_swaron

di 🤗

like i already said ur amazing

ur ff is so like a fairy tale

awww poor swayam lost sharon in an aacident and left india

tanya was such a sweet heart in ur entire ff

yeah they came to india and on tanyas request went to shimla

pari- i knew she was sharon

loved the way pari and tanya connected

swayam and tanya bond was super cool

awww tanya found her moms look alike in her angel

then pari and swayam searching for tanya

and yippeee finally swayam saw sharon

but yeh kya sharon faint hogayi

finally sharon gained her senses and finally found those eyes that she dreamt everynight in swayam

the flash back of swaron were amazing

hats off to you di

so swayam came to know that sharon lost her memory

and yippeee the super cute perfect family will be together once again

plzzz continue soon di

Originally posted by: SwaRon_Dreams

Muah muah muah muah to me!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏👏👏

head off to me...agar main tumhe aise hi dhamki's dete rahungi...tu hayed tum kahi...time pe update krna start kardogi..hai na?? i guess still not!😛😡

You idiot?? u didn't like it...it was awesome...i loved it..😊

and thank you as for after a very long time you have given a long one...

I can't tell how much i love you,and your writes!

Mera kya hoga agr tunai likhna bandh kardia...mujhe tu 104 bukhaar char jana hai...medicine se bhi kuch nahi hoga...tu hi meri dawa,daru hai DEEPS!

Love you from bottonm of my heart...you know tunai aur nehal ne mujhe pagal kardia hai...i love both of you a lot..😊😊

I just started follow IF 2 month ago..shit i was idiot not to follow it before..agar mujhe pata hota na ke tere jese witer bhi IF pe hain...tu beta..main sirf If pe hi hoti..mujhe ab bhi meri mkom daant daant ke laptop se hata ti hain...all the time i do is to read your update again and again...i always try to read it as much as possible..it helps me evn on writing my update properly...

now again here are som eline,i lved a lot!

He climbed the bed after changing in to nightwear '. The moonlight coming from the window gave him a chance to look at his sleeping angel's face'. She was looking heavenly with the moonlight falling on her angelic face'her beautifully carved eyes'. Small but perfect nose'.full lips ' she was glowing '.looking unreal'.her beauty was unreal'.

And HE is my husband'the love of my life'that is why my heart recognized him at the first sight though my mind couldn't'..his eyes are captivating me'.he is controlling my whole body'my heart..my soul'.at this very moment'.i can't avoid this fact'.can this be the truth'..this beautiful family'it can be mine'.her thoughts were having no boundaries'she was busy searching for her past in his eyes'. (this line towards me showed that after 3 long years of disappointment on finding her family...she gave it up..it shows that she was feeling blessed that MAY be this can be her family..she wanted them very badly..to regain herself...)👏

That house was filled with heartbeats...One heart was searching for its identity...one heart searching for ways to find out its lost love...one heart which connected both of them to each other...one heart searching for a solution to tie all the loose ends...together... (how to you end up writing such lines..gosh..am i ever gonna write like this..wish it!)😕😕😊

Again,you must and should know that you are beautiful at heart,and i think i don't have to say anything more on you! do i??

Zalim aurat promo tu de deti...MAAR DALA ALLAH!

(jab jab main koi line red se likhoon in my comment and font comic sans MS ho..tu samjh jana ke yeh line danger sign hai...agr yeh comment nehal parhe..tu please yeh USS ke liye bhi...aisa nahi hai ke woh bach gea)

Love

Tanya

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

no idea swthrt 😊

hell busy in office work...

mostly weekend 😳

Hey guys...This is the 12th chapter of this FF...hope you all will like it ... thank you so much for these lovely comments ...they are really very encouraging...they inspire me to continue writing...didn't get time for proof reading...please bear me with mistakes...😊

Recap:

Swayam was tries to understand the strange behaviour from sharon...he gets to know about her memory loss from aloknath...doctor advices to treat her with love and affection to get back to her normal state...

Chapter-12

Inside the room:

Pari was sitting on the bed….with Tanya sitting on her lap…..Tanya being close to her was giving her the feeling of completeness….she was lost in a new world…a world of hope…a worl of love… a world of togetherness….

A world of togetherness and love…her,Tanya and HIS…with his thought her heart started running in faster pace….somehow her heart didn't wait for any proof and witness to accept him….unlike her mind….her heart already accepted him as hers….a heartfelt smile crept on her beautiful lips….HIS thought made her smile….she blushed to a deep shade of red….it was a new feeling for her…after three years of emptiness ..her life was now going to be full of colors…full of love….full of life….

Angel…

A sweet voice disturbed her thoughts….she came out of her imaginary world…

Yes Princess….she answered her…

Heyy...How do u know that my daddy call me princess…she asked …with a cute confused look on her face….

Because u look like a princess….my princess….last words just slipped out of her mouth….

Tanya heard this and the expression on her angelic face changed …from confused to serious one…she placed her finger on her chin and tried to figure out something….

Pari was enjoying her cute antics..her each and every expression…her voice…her touch .. it was amusing… the strange kind of happiness she felt watching Tanya saying her sweet nothings…it was inexpressible…

Angel…..

Finally Tanya spoke …after thinking hard for few minutes…and pari was staring at her all the time..lovingly….

Hmmm…she answered…still lost in her cuteness ….

Are you my Mom's look alike or ...she took a pause….or my Mom? she asked and looked at her with eyes full of innocence and expectation….

She was not expecting this question….she knew this was coming her way….but not this soon….her innocent face and angelic eyes full of expectation….she just couldn't ignore them…

She took her hand and kept on her heart….what does your heart tell you princess…?Who am I?

She kept her hand on her chest…and closed her eyes….her forever lively and cutely naughty face was serious…..

Pari looked at her little angel….she didn't know what is truth…but she wanted to be the mother of this sweet angel of hers….she was staring at her beautiful face…lovingly….

Slowly a her angelic face was enlightened by a beautiful smile on her rosy lips….she opened her eyes….

Soon her infectious smile was spread on Pari's lips….

So What did your heart say princess….she inquired…cupping her cute face…

My heart says that…..

Ummm…

That you are my mom…..she said and jumped on her for a hug ….

Pari took her into her embrace ….tears rolled down her cheeks….her happiness had no boundaries when she heard Tanya calling her Mom….the feeling itself soothed all her pains…the pains she went through in these three years….as if the pain was worth it….she was ready to go through any pain just to see her little angel smile….

Tanya buried her head in pari's chest….the place seemed so familiar to her…as if she belonged there…she felt something wet on her nape….she looked up and saw tears in her angel's eyes….

Hey Angel…please don't cry…I know u r not well…doctor uncle ne medicine diya he na…u will be better soon…she wiped her tears and gave her a sweet peck on her cheek… she smiled through her tears…

He wiped his tears….. He was watching them standing near the door…

He felt happy watching his angel and his cute princess so close to each other…finally she could feel the beautiful feeling of motherhood…and his little princess was finally blessed to get her mother's chest to rest upon….

He felt someone's touch on his shoulder… he turned around….it was Aloknath….

Swayam baba…mujhe aap se kuch baat karni he…..finally the old man broke his silence….

Haan chacha ji…aayiye …beth ke baat karte he….he responded….his eyes were still moist …he tried to hide it from aloknath….

They settled down in the hall….Aloknath stared at swayam's face…as if he was trying to read something in his eyes…on his face…

Chacha ji…aap kuch baat karna chahte the…he asked…though he knew his question….

Swayam beta….aap….he took a pause…swayam gave him a assuring look to go ahead….

Aap ….aap pari ko kaise jante ho?kya rista se aap ka usse?he asked…looking straight in his eyes….

A lone tear escaped from his eye….he never thought a time will come when he would have to give the proof of his relationship with Sharon…the reason for his concern for HER…explanation for his care for HER….

But the person sitting in front of him…deserved his proofs…his reasons…his explanations…..he was the person because of whom he could finally meet his Sharon….who had taken care of her for three years…like a father…when she lost her own identity ….no doubt…he deserved his explanation….

Chacha ji….me …wo….wo meri patni he….she is my wife….teen saal pehle ek hadse me wok ho gayi thi…bichad gayi thi mujhse….

Me sach bol raha hu..mene bahut koshish ki use dhundne ki …par dhund nhi paya….mujhe toh ye bhi nhi pata wo pune me accident ke baad shimla kaise pahunchi….me usse apne jaan se bhi jyada pyar karta hu…jee nehi sakta uske bina….he choked due to pain..due to tears….

Aloknath was spellbound by seeing such miracle by destiny….a cruel game of destiny separated two heart full of love and now it was upto him ….to unite them….to tie them into a strong bond …forever….

Par swayam baba…kya aap ko yakeen he ki pari hi aap ki khoyi huyi patni he….he just wanted to make sure….he loved pari dearly…just like his own daughter…he couldn't take any hasty decision about her life…

He opened his wallet….and handed over something to aloknath….he looked at the picture…it was swayam and pari….they looked like their pair was made by god with extra care and attention….they were looking so perfect together….with beautiful smiles on their faces...

Just that destiny separated them…..he promised to unite this heavenly couple again…

Mujhe pata he wo shimla kaise pahunchi…wo mujhe mili thi…maharastra ke ek gaon me…mere ek ristedar ke yahan….uski halat bahut kharab thi…usko dawa ki jarurat thi…pyar ki jarurat thi…mere ristedar …wo log bahut garib the…khudke liye khana nehi jugad kar pate the…humne police se madad mangi thi…par….wo log….he took a pause...

Mujhe us waqt is bachchi ki jaan bachana jyada jaruri laga…isi liye me use yahan le aaya…he was feeling the pain of two people who loved each other …he was blaming himself for keeping them away from each other…

Mujhe…. Mujhe maaf kar do beta…sayad meri wajah se tum logon ko ye sab sehna pada…he raised his hand…..and folded them in front of him…asking for forgiveness…

He immediately came forward and squeezed his hands….

Aap ye kya keh rahe he chacha ji…aaj agar meri Sharon zinda he toh sirf aap ki wajah se…aap ke pyar ki wajah se….aap aur aapke pariwar ne tab uska saath diya jab me nehi tha uske paas…koi nehi tha uske saath...ye karz rahega aap ka mujh par…jise m kabhi nehi utar paunga…. Tears of gratitude rolled down his cheeks….

He just hugged the person standing in front him...he knew he has a difficult battle to win...he wanted support for that...Aloknath just moved his hand on his back...giving his assurance...and whispered ...

Sab thik ho jaega beta...himmat rakho...wo pehechanegi tumhe...bahut jaldi...

Few moments later….

Chacha ji…me usse baat karna chahta hu…

Haan beta…kyu nehi…tum jao baat kar lo…tanya ko bahar bhej do…me uska khayal rakh lunga…

He smiled at him….and went inside…

He found an adorable Tanya sitting on the lap of pari and playing with her long locks…..pari on the other hand was lost in her cuteness and smiling at their cute princess….

Hey ..kya kar rahi he meri princess…..he asked…

She ran towards him and he cuddled her….

Daddyy…m playing with my angel…she said cutely….

And you know what daddy…

Ummm…

Tanya's heart says angel is not her mom's look alike…she is her mom….she said in one breath….

And u know…angel also feels the same…

Listening to tanya's cute talks he looked at her….she lowered her gaze…avoiding eye contact with him….she was turning a deep shade of red…this was a new feeling for her…she was astonished to see his effect on her...still she was enjoying this feeling...

Princess….can you please go and play with angel's daddy…I need to talk to your angel alone…

Tanya looked at his face and than looked at her….and smiled to herself…thinking of something….

Ohk daddy…..tanya is going out….but take care of my angel…she is not well…she ran towards her and gave a quick peck on her cheek …hugged her daddy and kissed his cheek…and ran out of the room….

Now only two individuals with heavy heart beats….. Surrounded by silence….remained in the room….their heart were beating so loudly that they could hear each others heart beats….clearly…

Wo…Tanya ne jo kuch kaha…uska bura mat manna….m sorry for that….he spoke…

She looked up…stared at his angelic face…pain was evident on his face….

Kyu….usne kuch galat kaha kya?she said…with tears in her eyes…

Tum...he chocked...

Haan me….me nehi pehchanti tumhe….kisi ko bhi nehi pehchanti….apne aapko bhi nehi…pehchanti hu toh bas...

Bas??...he inquired ...

Me in aakhon ko pehchanti hu…she said…looking into his eyes….his deep dark brown eyes ….she was getting lost in them….

I have seen these eyes in my dreams…every night….since last three years…I know they are related to me…they are related to my real identity...she said….tears started forming in her big beautiful greenish eyes….

He looked at her…his heart was beating in fast pace…as if it was jumping in joy….he felt as if his heart will jump out of his chest any moment….

He just wanted to take her into his embrace...but he stopped himself...he didn't want to make her feel uncomfortable...by any of his actions...

Finally his heart was going to meet the heart…for which it beats…after three long years……

Two hearts were beating in unison….their conversation was incomplete….their hearts ..their eyes….were conveying their feelings….there were so many things to say...so many things to listen to...time stood still witnessing this moment...

Precap:

I trust you...i really do...

I will make you fall in love with me Sharon...again...i promise ...

So how was it? good ...bad ...very bad..boring ... plzzz do comment... i will wait for your comments and feedback

Next update will be on pg- 35 😊

I know...there was not much of Swaron in this part...Next part will be full of SWARON...😳

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