Swaron FF:U & Me.Back to Us.Thread 2.part-15.pg93

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Riya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Have I told you how good,

it feels to be me...when i am in you 😊

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Riya

@rockstarriya_26

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

I can only stay clen,

when you are around, Don't let me fall oh no

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Riya

@rockstarriya_26

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

I could close my eyes forever,,

Would it ease the pain..Can I breathe again?

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Riya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Maybe I am addicted, I am out of control..

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ShrutikaSwaRon

@ShrutikaSwaRon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Hey first of all congo on ur ne thread...Awesome update...really liked the part where u mentioned about the heartbeats...u have written it so beautifully...n finally swayam came to know that pari is his sharon n about her memoryloss...hope he helps her in bringing her memory back...continue soon n thnx for pm.

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_bellaSwan_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

ITS MYSTERIOUS ONE PLEASE UPDATE IT

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Sowmya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

When will you give us the next update ( I am becoming greedy here )

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Hey Deep, hope ur well now, pls pardon for late comments...this update was a connection to the past...perhaps it culd hav been dramatic, but that wuldnt hav suited the Swayam and Sharon of this story so I think it was perfect the way it was...now its gonna b mission revival of Sharon's past memories... luking forward to see how u assimilate Tanya into the current state of affairs...do update soon

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Satnam

@Satluvsd3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

res...
this is just the 1st res di.wait for more!!😉😆
unres.
chap 1:
the starting description was like awesome!!!really loved it.that shows how beautiful your writing skills are di!⭐️ lovely.
i really loved how the dad made the daughter sleep by telling her a cute story.
nice start di.😊
so different from each other but MADE for each other ...MAD for each other... 😊
i know this line isnt a part of your update but seriously i liked this one.

chap 2:
wooow ok finally you cleared a part of the confusion!!
lovingthe dad-daughter relationship!! 😳 how he was so protective of her...which tensed him the whole day and made him restless... 😊 awww.. super cute Dad Swayam!😳😆

Aaa...aa...Aachuuu...

He got his answer ...
this was the cutest part of this update!! 😳😆

She is a perfect combination of me & her Mom...my maturity and her innocence...my brain and her beauty ...at times she also throws tantrums like her Mom...her eyes are just like her Mom...big..greenish ...beautiful...i guess her cute smile is like me...in fact that's the only thing...other than her smile...everything else is just like her Mom...she is a perfect photocopy of her mom...well ...a smaller version... he smiled at his own thought ...
and this para has to be my fav one!!😳 loved the way you related both of them to her!! 😳 damn awesome di.👏⭐️

chap 3:
would be ONE OF MY FAV chaps of this beautiful FF!!:')
OMG!the way you spoke swayam's life till now with HER.i was literally! 😭
love u di.😊the end of the story.the beginning of his flashbacks(was the BEST part of this update)!! :')
OMG!!loved each and every word of it. you are really one of those writers who described SwaRon journey till now beautifully and how he preserved those special Sharon-touched things!!!😳 :')
even the chits ...you didnt leave 😊😳 my eyes were filled with tears as i finished Swayam's part!:')
gosh!i am in love with the way you wrote di.*thumbs up* for it!
and also 🤗 words would be too too less to describe the way you wrote this update esp the New york part!😳 it can't get any better than this.and the connection of those eyes with pari.the dreams n the precap 😃 nice nice.

chap4:
woooww nice update.
oh!cool so Swayam's parents n many pl coming in the pic.looking fwd to all their parts 😊
rest all was also nice,from swayam's talking to his asst. then parents then finally to our cutie Tanya.😳

Edited by Satluvsd3 - 12 years ago