Swaron FF:U & Me.Back to Us.Thread 2.part-15.pg93

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#101

res himi

unres

hey di...🤗
first of all...m really sorry for commenting so late..😔

as usual awesome an update...
i love each part of this update...from the beginning to till the end...

loved the convo between tanya and her angel...
and the best part was swayum witnessed all.. it was so adorable...

finally the secret revealed how sharon reached shimla ...
it was so painful when you have to prove ur relation with ur loved one...and poor swayum had to face that...but its quite obvious...aloknath is like her father now...

am happy as his pain of finding her...and getting hurt again and again has paid off now...and finally swaron are together...atleast their hearts are together...and i hope soon u will bring her memories back with ur awesome twists and turns...and yes with the help of swayum ...

update soon di...and sorry again for being late...i love the ease in ur writting...and i love you too ❤️

ur
Rockstar😊

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

Quote

Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

res nehal

unres

Awww i love Tanya... She is so mature for her age...you know deeps this is the only ff which showcase her character as mature.

We all show her more of Sharon daughter ...spoilt little Princess...

You show her more of a swayam's version.

I love that Heart scene of Tanya and Her angel

Alokhnath and Swayam convo..it was heart touching... I hope sharon ko jaldi yaad aajaye...

N the Swaron convo

Gosh! i went tired reading ...there was so much of it..i was praying that swaron convo...

Ab toh khatam ho...

n pg 35 i will reach there today only get ready with an update

love you partner

Nehal

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Res

I think i have to read the last two chapters.

Loved both the updates. Very beautiful and emotional.

Glad that finally Swayam knows the truth and i liked how you have shown Sharon finally coming in to terms with everything. There were few lines which stood out in the 11th update..the heartbeats in the room part was superbly done :) the next update was more of a reassurance and a pleasure read even though we had some real emotional moments. Tanya as always stole the show for me and it was really cute yet thoughtful to see her concern. Swayam emotional thought on how Tanya can now find Sharon her mothers love was nicely done. Looking forward to the next update.

P.S - Just read the comment on the first page of the thread. True, i have been reading since your first work and its always been a pleasure. I am happy my comments encourage you in any way.

Edited by Sudha-SK - 12 years ago

Quote

Marium

@pehlanasha.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

OMG! this is only what i can rite now...loved it...

and pg 35?? chal koi nahi main hoon na..next weekend tak tu le hi jaongi...

baaki ka comment res!😊

Quote

manasi

@manasie23

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

It was such a beautiful update... Tanya recognise sharon s her mom
Now finally she got her mothers chest to craddle on..
Swayam-Aloknath's talk was also emotional and end toh ekdum sahi tha... Also loved the precap...
Update soon (:

Quote

aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

woww awesome update👏

loved d convo between tanya and sharon😃

waiting for d next part😳

Quote

Amrita Sengupta

@idiot_box

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

RES😊

UNRES!! FINALLY!!😛

I read Chapters 11 and !2 together. Dee they were just so brilliant!!

Finally Swayam has found his Sharon and Sharon has found the man with those mystery eyes!!

I loved the bond between Tanya and Sharon!! Tanya is just super adorable!

I am really excited to know how Swayam is going to make Sharon fall in love with him yet again and in that process how is Sharon going to find her identity, and get back all the memories, feelings and emotions which she has lost!!

This is going to be super interesting!!

I loved some of the lines in the updates. You always come up with real killer lines!! They always leave a mark in the mind and heart.

Love,

XOXO
Amrita!!

Edited by idiot_box - 12 years ago

Quote

Karen Johnson "Maria"

@Karen_sharon

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Deepu Di 🤗,

U know One thing I never read ur chapters to know the further story I read it to see the Swayam-Sharon Feeling bonds which u potray so well..Di and the precap...U know what to add where and thats the best thing about u di...I luv u and ur writing sooo much!

And now I'm goin to read the up[d8 to ur 2nd FF,,I can predict it will be mind blasting 😆

Karen

Quote

Crazy4AshVik

@Crazy4AshVik

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Brilliant update!!

and the ending was beautifully written😃

Quote

_bellaSwan_

@_bellaSwan_

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Wow it's a treat to read , iam very very happy to read it finally dey met I was eagerly waiting for dis update . Wow iam excited about Swaron conversation in next part . Next update for 35 page ok u will get it very soon 😳

Quote

1 ... 9 10 11 12 13 ... 67

Swaron FF:U & Me.Back to Us.Thread 2.part-15.pg93 - Page 11

Related Topics

Explore Topics