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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Start toh romance se kiya 😳...

N Rey ko jealous bhi kiya 😆...

But bad mein kya kiya ...

Kria burnt her fingers but the stove was off , strange...

N Daniel was on the verge of dying , scary ...

Laila ke saath kiya hua 😲...

Did she really die or was that something else...

Really awesome work Nimi 😃...

Loved it ❤️...

Take Care Sista 🤗.

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Rey getting jealous...😆

but u ended again at a ciff...(VERY BAd)

rey confused abt laila...

update sooon...

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Riya Kapoor

@RiyaArShaKapoor

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Mast update tha..real horer..rey can't control..aww..n laila vala part was awesum..best horer ..update sn

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Angel u r just awesome
amazing update
loved it
gosh u scared me to hell...laila's body vanished????? How???
update soon

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

meri devil ne ye theka liya he k vo at d end of d chappy sbako confused or frustate hi karke chodegi..!! ryt devil??

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

coming to d update.. bada weird tha be.. kriya k fingers kaise jale? laila ki body kaha gayi..!!
bapre kitna daravna hai..!!
jaldi jaldi updat ekar dear..!!
all d best fr xamz..!!

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Nimra

@Dazzling_Smile

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: namratajadhav
coming to d update.. bada weird tha be.. kriya k fingers kaise jale? laila ki body kaha gayi..!!
bapre kitna daravna hai..!!
jaldi jaldi updat ekar dear..!!
all d best fr xamz..!!

Haila ! Weird?

stove on hone ki wajeh se jali fingers...

ab ye laila ko pata hoga k kahan gayi!

sachi me daravna tha?

i thought me dara hi nahi sakti.. nt satisfied..

thanks :)

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Nimra

@Dazzling_Smile

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: namratajadhav
meri devil ne ye theka liya he k vo at d end of d chappy sbako confused or frustate hi karke chodegi..!! ryt devil??

Hayeee.. han na apki devil ne yehi theka le k rakha hua h..

confused to thek but frustrate? mene kisi kiya?

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Nimra

@Dazzling_Smile

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: yogini64
It means jo last update me bus vala scene tha voh kriya ka dream tha? 🤔

she thinks she's not perfect for him 😔

hehehe not touched from 6 months . . . . Rey ne itna control kaise kar liya? . . . . Ab nhi hota ☺️

her fingers got burned & was still cold

ye sab kriya ko phone kar ke hi kyun pakate hai? 😆

rey jealous 🤣

wth . . . Laila died 😲

aur pehle car fir street light . . . . . Sabne plan bana ke usse maara h kya? 😆

Oye ! last wala dream nahi tha..

pagal..

bechara control control..

Lol.. plan banake..

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Nimra

@Dazzling_Smile

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: --Kinjal--
itna scary n interesting...
It was amazing...par chotu kyu...
Nt fair

Agar tune isse jaldi update nai kara na toh dekh...

Lol.. m glad that u liked it..

me chotu hi deti hun saali!

Hawww.. nahi karungi update... jaa! :D