OS: Realization...(link to 4th part updated)

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Shazeia

@shaz007

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Gosh you made me cry, it was really heart touching. do continue soon.

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#92

u r on a roll with this heavy OS...boy, that was heart-wrenching - the phone convo; her washing of face so it doesn't show she cried...

-Sona

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

does asr have a brain or is it he just does not understand human emotion poor khushi she just accepted her faith hope the dumb a** start fixing what he broke thanks for the pm

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

So sad ... at least he realized...

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sakthi25

@sakthi25

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

wow!! Finally he got some sense to look at his wife's eyes properly to note the difference...

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vinu.sr

@vinu.sr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

please continue...i am actually feeling for the Kushi in your OS because I know you will do justice and show us her pain sensibly...in the show we get nothing but OTT and 2 mins of apologies from Arnavji...

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claireDD

@claireDD

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#97

so he realized things...
but i wish it isn't too late..
is there anyway you could continue this... please???

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rukuswasthika

@rukuswasthika

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

i think u should become a cv as your scenes are far more bettter

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VasantiLad

@VasantiLad

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#99

BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN - REALLY SAD - I CRIED - PLZ CONTINUE ASAP PLEASE POST A STORY LIKE THIS ON FORUM 32 - YOU WILL DO REALLY WELL- THEY ARE CURRENTLT LOOKING FOR NEW TRACKS