Khushi's Meltdown (OS) sequel on page 5

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Amanda D'Souza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

@IPK007: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!!!!!!!!!😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

u make me feel so good...🤗

They even robbed us of the honeymoon, dont know why they ended up hating us n punishing us 🤔

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yamini18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

tooo good...can i plzz get link of ur index??????
ur work is fantastic...😊

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sulu_123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

nice...wish this had happened in the story.

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monsi08

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

awww... i so much loved d second part too...!!!! but d first part was top notch...
grt work.. keep writing 😊

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golpokobita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

so good! much much better than the originl show!

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

lovely story, so true to the two characters and rich with reference. so now we know why khushi was so into jalebis all along. 😆 but seriously i so enjoyed your trying to get beyond khushi's constant smiles. to that heart that still aches. still has feelings unresolved. i have always felt that one day just as khushi helped arnav unlock his heart, look squarely at his sadness, so will arnav help khushi enter her sorrow and find answers, become more confident and stop needing her stars so much. and really that dna test was such a clue to her extreme insecurity. asr's reaction just right, khushi's too. wonderful