Khushi's Meltdown (OS) sequel on page 5

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Hawa1997

@Hawa1997

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Fabulous, loved how he came running after her and took care of her!

Enjoyed reading it...

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heavenspirit

@heavenspirit

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

refreshing...
and also those all the elements were there which we needed those days...
loved it...

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Zoah

@xbeyondwordsx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

So while I was reading this, I had this sense of deja vu like I've read this story before. And I did read this earlier but I don't think I commented :P Lovely writing. Really liked it :D

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aquagal

@aquagal

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Loved it.
They have come a full circle indeed.
And I'm glad, if not the original writers of show, you here used that Jalebi statement, Arnav had obviously told her in her language that he never shared a physically intimate relationship with anyone than her. Loved it.

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Chanyaforever

@Chanyaforever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Awesome work!👏 I love it... had teary eyes but I really love it! Chanya.

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

This one was a nice curve. It began with Khushi's heartbreak making me fidgety and I held my breath when the empty house was revealed just after Khushi's purse was stolen, only to breath out in a sigh of relief when Arnav found her.

His soliloquy asserting his love for Khushi was very touching😳

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Part 2:

The meltdown which Khushi underwent int he prequel couldn't have had a balm than the one which was provided in 'Iridescent nights...'

Besides Arnav facing his childhood fears and their bond strengthening, we also got to see their honeymoon😊

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canvasdreamz

@canvasdreamz

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

a very nice ending to the Sheetal track..u made it so romantc
Arnv had no business showering his attentn on Sheetal as a rvnge😡
i like khushi's signature nose ring so much,alws felt sumwhr it defines her innocence n beauty..n Arnv nvr really made her undrstnd all those things he said to her were said in hatred(ignoring the pre remarriage convo,it was nvr enuf!!)
their reunion left a lingering sweetness in my mind,Arnv baring her soul n khushi finally coming to realz her worth in his lyf..wish Arnv had givn some answr to the nosy neighbour as well..