OS: Fire To the Rain! Part 2 PG 13

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Habfa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Loved it. You write soo beautifully. Poor khushi, it's really heartbreaking 😭

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

This is such a painful update you wrote. But you can't finish it like this. I think you should continue the story. Coz Arnav and Khushi has to meet. coz, they still love each other and can't live without each other. Moreover Khushi is carrying Arnav's child.I love comedy, not tragedy. So it has to have a happy ending.

I wish you are safe in the storm. I live in Florida. So I frequently experience this hurricane and storm.

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..SunnYaara..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

sniff sniff...too emotional...crying now😭...beautifully written...thanks for pm...

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Prapty/Maisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

bad arnav...poor khushi...i loved it yaar pls continue

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pavi1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

wow...beautifully written... made me 😭

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Sana Sultana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

the song was perfect😊but khushi s part was heart wrenching 😭😭😭 y arnav??y did u have to say or do that to her???😭😡u bloody don t deserve her n her love😡can u pls continue this???it was fabulous👏