OS: Fire To the Rain! Part 2 PG 13

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panck

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Belli,

Wow what angst..
Such powerful writing, the lump in my throat just will not go away.
I DEMAND you continue this OS and give us a HAPPY ending.
Please...

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Jaya Devi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

I am heartbroken and crying!!!
please please please continue it!!!

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Kaliopi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Thanks for the PM. Loved it. A great start. Will wait for next update. Thanks

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Arathy-V

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Its good that Khushi left everything behind and is settled in Shimla. If not depression then the constant taunts of people around would have killed her

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thesh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Omg this was so beautifull!!!!!

Plz continue it...I'm sure every 1 wud llike to know what happens next

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bhadraprasad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Verywell written...brought tears to my eyes...thx for the PM

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farheen75

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

It was amazing... Just loved it.

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VasantiLad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

That was beautiful & sad at the same time but I loved it - you have a really ggod writing style- captured me right from the start - please you have to continue with this ASAP - Arnav has to find her some how PLEASE - & PM when done - cannot wait

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reallyhappy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

dis was soo painful...sad..heartbreakin..its alwz lyk dis..Khushi thinkin abt beggin for forgiveness..n he as alwzz insults her..sumtyms its hard 2 no wt ppl hav until dey lose it..i wish yu cntinue..n portray his syd..😭😭😭

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Sia89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Ohhh Belli You finally wrote something on it. Loved the way it is written, the way you have portrayed Khushi's pain .. awww . awesome ! You need to update asap !

Hope all is well with You and family.