FFWhile you were sleeping Chap 21B Pg142 31/1

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#431

Hey ...

That was amazing ...

Awww ariya are friends now ...

Hmmm now I'm curious to know wht will happen next ???

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kaamchorni

@kaamchorni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#432

Just read the whole FF in one stretch. I have to say, it's brilliant! Your writing is very engaging and the story is always on the go - nothing is dragged. You have me hooked!

I feel really bad for Shaina. She has barely gotten over the shock of Rathore being shot and already, there's a new twist.

And of course, Dadi is awesome! I couldn't stop laughing when she deleted the evidence 😆 Can't wait to read more!

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#433

Awesome update! Can't wait to read more!

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#434

Lvly update dr
i feel bad for shaina
n ye arjun riya ko kya sikha taha hai,
apni setting karne ke jagaha riya ke rathor se
interesting yr
cant wait conti soon

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yas23

@yas23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#435

precap sounds interesting
cont soon

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pravallika

@prava55663

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Posted: 12 years ago

#436

dosti hogayi ariya ki...ab aage ??

loved rathore and shaina at the end...to cute:)

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Niki

@luvzindagi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#437

You are awesome Tina,
I loved how our beloved Ariya's relationship is progressing... 😊
So Now they are friends ha...! 😃
I hope Arjun soon realizes that Riya is the one he would like to grow old with...😉
I loved how Sahina is taking care of my Rathore...

Fantastic update
Thanks for the PM and Pls continue soon...

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diva

@rockz.diva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#438

heyy sry for late cments read 2 updates :)
feeling relly very bad for shaina wish ki rathod ji juldi theek ho jaye
loved d way riya consoled shaina
aww arjun ne riya ko kiss kiya soo cute :p eham eham
🤣 loved d convo b/w arjun n riya omg omg
shaina n sameer ji :) :) awww <3 <3
superb updated loved it
ty for d pm dear waitng waitng

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#439

realy feeling very sad for shaina..Rathod couldn't remember her..😭

OMG!!!! Arjun kissed her..very naughty 😳

waiting to see Rathod falls for Shaina again 😉