OS: From the sidelines...(link to 4th part update)

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divvk

@divvk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

amazing yaar.. please continue n pm me yaar

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swat.g

@swat.g

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Ur os touched me
Cn u continue n pls pm me

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priya

@silvia1999

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

i WANT THIS TO HAPPEN IN SHOW...NICE OS.CONTINUE SOON.

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Jessie

@jessjazz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Made me cry!!!

An outsider can see things that are in front of them, and yet Arnav still does not understand Khushi and his first thought was 'It was just like Khushi to create trouble for him'!!! What a horrible husband he is!!!

Continue to Part 2, if you will!!! Thanks.

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jshreya16

@jshreya16

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Beautiful...do continue 😛

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Annie12

@Annie12

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Really nicely written and more importantly I like your title

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tina

@cpervaiz

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

brilliant plz 2nd part plZ

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sheethal

@akshad

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

loved it
feel bad for khushi
plz continue soon

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Siham

@sihu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

That was really fantastic...pls continue...we need to know that Arnav realizes that all is not well with Khushi when she sees him interacting with Sheetal & Aarav.