OS: From the sidelines...(link to 4th part update)

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vaughn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

You felt for Khushi!!! So sad. PLEASE write the second part and make him suffer!!!

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shanon

@shanon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Plz do continue with this. I would love to know what happened next.

And I loved your writings. Your writing is always refreshes my mind..

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N0306

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

wow beautiful.. i just wish someone makes arnav realize what he is putting khushi through :(

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annieK

@annieK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Make it all ok please Sunara ...waiting for part 2.

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Pinkal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Nice please continue soon.. :D

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christmas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

ouch.really nice! i could only hope that such justice was done to the scene.

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Sophia Khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Awww hope he understands now... continue soon plzzz :)

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Fatemah

@KC294

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Brilliant os are you going to add a second part

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advaita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

this ws jts awesome !! beautifully written !!!! luvd it 2 d core !! hm i so want this to happen in the show and i am waitin anxiously for the the next part so plz plz plz do write the next update !!! i have also sent a uddy request in ur othr accnt !! do pm me if possible !!! once again i just loved it totally !!!! :) lovely concept sunara di !

Edited by advaita - 12 years ago